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Last Time-
-x-x-x-Kagome's Dream-x-x-x-
All was well until it started to rain and the once used to be beautiful blue skies were replaced with a dark gray clouds and the ground turned into rotten soil and hard land. Kagome looked around and called for help, but nobody came. She then bumped into a hard figure that caused her to fall on her ass. Kagome looked up was horrified by the dark, red eyes staring back at her.
"Who are you?" Kagome asked.
"Your worst nightmare" the figure replied.
"Really. I've heard that line too many time" Kagome countered. The figures arms reached out to her and tightly grasped her neck.
"You better be afraid because I am the one that is going to kill you" the figure said menacingly as his grip became tighter.
"Let…go…of me" Kagome choked out.
"It's good to see you again…Kagome" the figure laughed evilly. His face became visible and Kagome turn out to be limp in his arms.
"Naraku…" Kagome whispered.
-x-x-x-End of Kagome's Dream-x-x-x-
This Time-
-x-x-x-Normal POV-x-x-x-
Kagome was thrashing around in her bed and whimpering because of the dream she was having. Sesshoumaru, who was talking his midnight stroll down the hallways, approached Kagome's and heard something moving and Kagome whimpering. His protective instinct kicked in and he quickly went into her room. He saw her moving around in her bed, making her bed sheets crumple and hang off the bed. Sesshoumaru went up to her, grabbed her shoulders and shook her. She didn't wake up after a couple of minutes trying everything he knew about waking someone up. That is until he smelled the foul stench in the air.
'Naraku' Sesshoumaru thought. He let go of Kagome and walked over to the porch. He opened the doors roughly and looked outside. He couldn't see a single soul in sight, but the disgusting odor remained. Sesshoumaru walked over to Kagome and sniffed her.
'She has the smell of Naraku. Could he be invading her dreams? I better go get father' Sesshoumaru thought. He walked out of the room, taking once last glance at Kagome before he left to go get Kazuo.
x-x-x-With Sesshoumaru And Kazuo-x-x-x-
Sesshoumaru walked to his father's study because that's where he usually was before going to bed. He opened the door that had made a creaking sound that made his father raise his head to see who it was.
"Sesshoumaru my son, what brings you here at this hour?" Kazuo asked.
"Evening to you father. Something is wrong with Kagome. I went into her room to check up on her and smelled the nauseating scent of Naraku" Sesshoumaru informed. His father stood up from his chair at the second Naraku's name was mentioned.
"Lets go"
Kazuo and Sesshoumaru walked at a fast pace to Kagome's room. When they reached there, the odor of Naraku got stronger that it had woken up Inuyasha and Amaya.
"What's going on dear?" Amaya asked her husband.
"I don't know everything but from what I have heard from Sesshoumaru, Naraku's smell is on Kagome somehow" Kazuo answered in a serious voice.
"Oh my. I will go get the monk. Lets see if he will be in any use" Amaya replied as she dashed down the hallway and into Miroku's room. Amaya came out dragging Miroku down the hall towards Kagome's room.
(AN: If you haven't realized yet, only the demons can smell Naraku's scent. Miroku, Sango and Izayoi can't because their humans. Hopefully you guys get the point. That's why only Amaya and Inuyasha woke up from the smell and the humans didn't.)
"Can't we go in there and save Kagome all ready! We just can't let her die in there," Inuyasha yelled. Kazuo didn't answer his younger son, but instead sent him a glare. His yelling would get him in trouble one day.
All of them heard a creak come from a door and turned around and saw Sango step out of her room, rubbing the sleep out of her eyes. She looked one way down the hallway and saw nobody, so she turned her head the other way and saw Amaya, Miroku, Inuyasha, Sesshoumaru and his father looking at her.
"Are we having a nightly get together?" Sango yawned.
"No. We are trying to find out what is wrong with Miss Kagome" Sesshoumaru answered coldly. He wanted to go in there and get it over with. When Sango heard that Kagome was in trouble she gave them a serious look.
"What are you all waiting for then? We have to go save Kagome!" Sango shouted. Everybody nodded his or her heads and stood silently as Kazuo opened the bronze colored doorknob. Kazuo pushed the polished door and everyone peered into the room.
What they saw startled some and frightened many. Inside Kagome's room was a dark purplish thick mist surrounding the room. The demons had to cover their sensitive noses and some of the humans had to refrain themselves from fainting from the lack of oxygen. Kagome was cover sweat and her eyes were scrunched tight as if her were having a nightmare. Everyone took a careful step in just in case any snarling demons came in and attacked him or her. When the close was clear, Miroku went over to Kagome, placed his left hand on her head, closed his eyes and chanted an ancient Buddhist chant. He repeated the chant once more and snapped his eyes open. He pulled his hand away from her head and staggered back until he bumped into a wall that was behind him. He was visibly shaking and sweat started to roll down from his head. He took a look at them and gave them a nervous look.
"What is it Miroku?" Kazuo asked.
"She's…ummm…what was that spell called again?" Miroku muttered as he tried to remember what the spell was called.
"SHE'S BEEN PUT UNDER WHAT! JUST GET ON WITH IT!" Inuyasha yelled. Amaya smacked him on the backside of his head.
"For goodness sakes Inuyasha! Be polite. We don't need your shouting at the middle of this hour. What would happen if your mother woke up just now from your reckless shouting?" Amaya chastised.
"Your too late Amaya. Inuyasha come over here" Izayoi announced. Inuyasha's hanyou ears drooped and he staggered towards his mother nervously. Kazuo was right, Inuyasha's shouting was going get him into trouble.
"NOW(slap) WHAT (punch) HAVE I (kick)TOLD YOU (slap) ABOUT (kick) BEING(punch) WELL MANNERED? (Slap)" Izayoi asked as she aggressively beat the shit out of her son.
"To always be polite?" Inuyasha answered. His mother gave him a cold glare.
"We will talk about this later Inuyasha" Izayoi replied, "Now Miroku dear, what were you saying?"
"Kagome she's been put under a spell. It wasn't really a common spell used back in the feudal era" Miroku responded. He finally remembered what the spell was called when Izayoi and Inuyasha were fighting.
"What kind of spell?" Kazuo questioned.
"Eimin (1). Naraku has invaded her dreams and put a spell on her so she could not wake up. This spell is also a bad one. Whatever Naraku does to harm Kagome will happen to her body as well"
"Is there anyway we can get rid of this?" Amaya asked in concern.
"Well it is not easy to eliminate of BUT this is Naraku we are talking about. By now he has probably sensed our presence around Kagome so he could have put up a barrier"
"I see. I guess we just have to try our best then" Kazuo muttered.
Sesshoumaru took a couple steps forward and got shocked by an invisible force. He took a step back and touched the barrier. He saw a bluish outline and scrunched his eyebrows in frustration. He brought out his yellow lightening colored poison whip and slashed at the blockade. The force field flashed a glowing red then into orangey yellow. It flickered for a while then slowly faded away. Sesshoumaru smirked and looked over his shoulder to look at Miroku.
"And you were saying something about a strong barrier? Hn. That disgusting hanyou cannot keep up with a pureblood, my friend" Sesshoumaru said coldly. Miroku returned his comment with a glare.
"You never know Sesshoumaru. Naraku is probably leading you on thinking that you can break through his magical barrier, when he actually trying to pull you into his trap" Miroku retorted.
"Shut your mouth human" Kazuo shot Sesshoumaru a glare and crossed his arms in front of his chest.
"Just get on with it Sesshoumaru. We need to save Miss Kagome as fast as possible," Kazuo ordered in a monotone voice.
"Yes father"
Sesshoumaru walked towards Kagome and sat on the edge of the bed. He looked at her and frowned; he turned his head to his father and nodded slightly. He placed his arms (AN: Yes he has both of them right now) on Kagome's shoulders and shook her gently at first. He shook her again and called out her name, all she did was groan and whimper.
"I have to go into her mind" Sesshoumaru announced.
"But Sesshoumaru!" Amaya answered.
"If I do not enter her mind, she may end up dead. Do you want this the happen to her?" Sesshoumaru questioned his mother. She shook her head as a 'no' and looked at Kazuo for reinsurance.
"Then let me do this so I can save her" Sesshoumaru replied. He placed his left palm on her forehead, closed his eyes and chanted a spell his father taught him. His hand glowed a reddish hue and then dissipated.
-x-x-x-In Kagome's Mind-x-x-x-
Kagome had been thrown across the land as Naraku landed a hard kick in her stomach. She got up on her knees and tried to stand up. Naraku only cackled evilly and kicked her once more. Kagome placed a Miko barrier around herself as she forced herself to stand up.
"Do you think that you can hurt me little girl? Kukuku…Your so weak right now, you can't even stand up. How pathetic is that? A ningen like you can't even save their own life, even though they are a Miko" Naraku tormented. He took a step towards Kagome and he laughed harder as he saw her take a step back.
"Run. Wherever you go, I'll find you. I'll even give you a head start" Naraku persuaded. Kagome looked at him, turned around and ran away from him. She knew that he would catch up to her but she could at least try to get away from him as far as possible.
Kagome looked over her shoulder and saw that he wasn't even coming after her. She started to think that running away from him was a bad idea. She bumped into a hard figure and fell to the ground from the force of the collision.
She gazed up and her eyes went wide. How did he make it here?
-x-x-x-With Sesshoumaru In Kagome's Mind-x-x-x-
Once Sesshoumaru entered Kagome's mind, he was engulfed with darkness. Thank Kami that he was demon, so his eyes adjusted to see properly. He walked around a bit and stopped when he felt that he was going nowhere. He stood there and looked around the place. The same thing was everywhere. The hard land that had blackened grass sticking out for certain places. A black abyss that never ended and there he was, standing out from the darkness. He felt something hit his chest and fall. He peered down at it as if the individual was below him, like the ground he walked on. He strained his eyes to get a better look at this 'thing' and was surprised to find out whom it was…
-x-x-x-Normal POV-x-x-x-
"Kagome?" Sesshoumaru cautiously asked.
"S-Sesshoumaru?" Kagome relied. Tears formed in her eyes as she stood up and tightly hugged Sesshoumaru.
"So it is you. Tell me, what has happened to you?" Sesshoumaru questioned as he shoved out of Kagome's embrace. If Naraku was watching them, he didn't want Naraku to see Kagome hugging 'The Ice Prince' or 'Cold Hearted Bastard' as people in school named him as.
(AN: No offence to Sesshy lovers but I read stories where they call him that and I just needed to put it in this chapter. Also, I'm trying to make Sesshy sound like Sesshy so bare with me).
"Naraku has been chasing me and wounding me. Is there any way we can get out of here?" Kagome asked.
"I'll-"
"Well, isn't this a cute little scene. Whoever thought that Sesshoumaru, the Ice Prince, could be so…loving" Naraku cackled obnoxiously.
"JUST LEAVE ME THE FUCK ALONE NARAKU!" Kagome yelled as she glared at the despicable man.
"Kukuku…Fuck, indeed" Naraku grinned.
"Keep your corrupted thoughts to yourself Naraku" Sesshoumaru replied.
"Sesshoumaru stay out of this, it is only between me and her. If you do what I say, I might let you go unharmed," Naraku proposed.
"I will not follow by your rules Naraku. I have more self-dignity and honor not to lower myself to your revolting ways"
"Touché. Well, that means more fun for me then" Naraku answered.
Naraku's tree like tentacles sprouted out of his body and whipped at Sesshoumaru and Kagome. Since Sesshoumaru is demon he could avoid the attack easily, but because Kagome was just a mere ningen, he grabbed her by the waist and jumped away from the Naraku's tentacle. Naraku grinned and sent out more tentacles from his body to assault the two. Sesshoumaru kept dodging and running away from Naraku's deformed limbs.
"HOW LONG ARE YOU GOING TO RUN AND DODGE MY ATTACKS SESSHOUMARU? YOU'LL TIRE OUT SOONER OR LATER!" Naraku shouted at Sesshoumaru, who sent him a glare and evaded another tentacle.
Sesshoumaru stopped and told Kagome to get behind him; she nodded and followed his orders. Sesshoumaru got out his poison whip and slashed at the gruesome sprouts.
"Tell me Sesshoumaru, why protect this human when you're a pureblood? Don't tell me you fell in love with a ningen Sesshoumaru" Naraku taunted as he emphasized the word 'love'. Sesshoumaru growled and lashed his whip at another root that had regenerated from his last assault. Naraku was really pushing his limits.
"I know that having a Inu hanyou for a brother is disgraceful, but you want more humans to taint your family blood? How pathetic is that?" Naraku cackled.
"That IS ENOUGH NARAKU!" Sesshoumaru said fiercely as his turned into a more darker and harsh tone.
"Opps, did I hit a soft spot?" Naraku laughed. His plan had worked. It was to make Sesshoumaru go into his true form.
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Everyone found a place to sit when Sesshoumaru left his own mind to go into Kagome's. Kazuo was pacing, Izayoi was knitting her Inuyasha a new afghan, and Amaya had left to go get some medical supplies for Kagome when her body started to get cuts, bruises, and any other injuries. The teenagers went to the kitchen to go find something to eat and take their minds off of the serious situation that was going on.
A couple of minutes later, Kazuo stopped pacing and turned to look at his oldest son. Amaya had just entered the room and nearly dropped the items that where in her arms that she was carrying. She placed the objects on a dresser and took a couple steps to Sesshoumaru. Amaya then looked at her husband.
"Do you feel that?" Amaya asked.
"Yes I do dear. Do you think that Sesshoumaru is attempting to go into his Inu Youkai form?" Kazuo questioned his wife.
"I do believe he is. Should we try to stop him?"
"NO! Lets see what he does first. He can either chose to cool his temper, or transform and hurt Kagome in the process" Kazuo answered. Amaya nodded her head and kept a close eye on her son. They could see the bright red hue emitting from his body.
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"S-Sesshoumaru. What are you doing?" Kagome asked nervously, she took a few steps back when she saw the surface of his body glowing with an evil aura. She could literally see the red color discharge off Sesshoumaru's body. She got the feeling that whatever Sesshoumaru was doing, wasn't good.
"Stay out of this onna (2)! Or you'll get hurt" Sesshoumaru said roughly.
"But Sess-"
"I said STAY OUT OF IT!" Sesshoumaru growled loudly as looked over his shoulder and glared at her with his blood red eyes. Kagome shocked that Sesshoumaru shouted at her. She backed away from him so she could get a better look at him and she crossed her arms.
"Well sorry if I asked. Demons these days, so inconsiderate; they always think about themselves"
Sesshoumaru saw this and was unfazed by it, heard many things about demons and how rude they were. Whoever said that demons were nice? He took his eyes off Kagome and set it back on Naraku, who happened to be smirking with delight.
"You find this amusing, don't you Naraku?"
"Why yes. I was hoping that would have attacked the weakling that you're protecting" Naraku replied comically.
"Go fuck yourself Naraku"
Naraku laughed at Sesshoumaru's comment and sent out more of his tentacles at him. Sesshoumaru stood his ground and killed of the sprouts.
'If I do not restrain my rage, I will transform into my Inu Youkai. And if that happens, Kagome's mind will not be able to hold such power and may end up killing her. I cannot let that happen' Sesshoumaru thought to himself. He was so busy trying to fight off Naraku's extra limbs and trying to cool off his temper, his did not see one of the regenerated limbs go after Kagome until he heard a scream.
Sesshoumaru glanced her way and saw her dodge the tentacle and holding her bleeding arm. Sesshoumaru took his eyes off her and killed the tentacle that had almost hit him in a serious area.
Kagome had not seen the broken off member that attacked her until she felt a strong pain in her left arm. She dodged the second attack but feel in the process. The limb saw this as an advantage and drilled its way to her. (AN: I'm not sure if Naraku's limbs have minds of its own, but it looks like it when they're fighting the Inuyasha and the rest.)
Kagome tired to stand back up and attempt to run away and her ankle was in pain she looked over to the tentacle and that it was advancing towards her. She tried harder but she couldn't get away. The detached tentacle made its way to her and sprouted five new limbs from itself. It was so close to kill Kagome but it was blown off by a purplish-blue barrier and it dissolved from its purity. The color brightened up the dark space, which had caught Naraku and Sesshoumaru's attention. The demon's stopped their fighting and looked at Kagome.
Kagome had put her right arm in front of her frail body as protection when she new it wouldn't do much help. Kagome felt a surge of power go through her veins and explode from her body. Kagome shut her eyes from the light and opened them when the light dispersed. Kagome stood up and looked at Naraku with lavender eyes tha that not soul in them (AN: what I mean by that is that her eyes don't have any pupils, its just lavender, like she's being possessed).
"Shinidoki (3) Naraku" Kagome said in a different voice.
'That voice, it sounded like Queen Midoriko's. Could it be?' Sesshoumaru thought as he put his lightning whip away and walked cautiously to Kagome. He stopped when she looked at him for a moment. He wasn't sure if it was all right to go to her and be safe, or get his ass purified. Sesshoumaru knew about Queen Midoriko, she was the mother of Princess Koubou and was a very powerful priestess that fought any dangerous obstacle that came her way. Sesshoumaru regained his composure and frowned at Kagome, who just looked at him with emotionless eyes then back at Naraku.
Kagome's body raised its arms and held it as if it were about to shoot an arrow from its bow. This lavender colored light appeared in her arms and formed itself into a bow and arrow.
"Do what you want ningen. You can never hurt me," Naraku announced as he placed a barrier around himself.
"Your silly barriers cannot stop me" Midoriko's voice replied from Kagome's mouth.
Kagome released the arrow and made its way to Naraku. When the arrow impacted with his barrier it made a bright light emit from the collision and then enter slowly, then fast when it had gotten through. It headed to the center of Naraku's body and blew away the bottom half of him. Naraku had a surprised expression on his face then frowned.
"Its not over yet Kagome. I'll be back to get the Shikon no Tama and to get rid of you" Naraku shouted before he disappeared.
Kagome put her arms down and looked at Sesshoumaru, who was looking back at her. She took one step forward and clasped to the ground. Sesshoumaru ran to her and checked her pulse. He was relieved she had only fainted. He picked her up bridal style, closed his eyes and chanted a spell to get Kagome and himself out her mind.
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Kazuo and Amaya were thankful that Sesshoumaru controlled himself and not gone into his Inu form. Every one else was back into the room and watching and waiting patiently for the two to wake up.
They saw the glowing from Kagome and saw her eyes open but…they weren't her eyes. They were a lavender color that had no pupil. Kazuo was worried about this and quite pleased to see a reaction from the young female.
A few minutes later, they saw Sesshoumaru stir and sat up from his lazy state. He looked around and then looked at Kagome.
"She's going to fine now. Naraku escaped before I could impale that devil with my claws" Sesshoumaru said emotionally as he stood up, straightened his clothes, then looked at his father.
"Yes. I agree with you son, I believe she is going to be all right now. Come with me to the study and tell me what happened" Kazuo announced and started walking out of the room and down the hall. Sesshoumaru followed his father. He left before Izayoi and Amaya got a chance shoved him out of the room, like they had done with Inuyasha and Miroku to clean and dress Kagome's wounds.
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When Sesshoumaru entered the study, he closed the large doors and took a seat in front of this father. Kazuo stared at his son and asked,
"Mind telling what the fuck happened to Kagome?"
"Naraku attacked her and somehow the attack summoned some kind of hidden power in Kagome. That power caused her to talk and have the same eye color as Queen Midoriko. Kagome fired an arrow at Naraku and blasted the hanyou's body into nothing…well the bottom half of him" Sesshoumaru replied.
"I see. Well I guess we have to train Kagome's newly found powers so she won't lose control over them. You may leave Sesshoumaru. Have a good sleep, you need it" Kazuo answered. Sesshoumaru stood up and was almost out of the room but his father stopped him.
"Was is it father?"
"I just wanted to say that I'm proud of you and a great job you did, son" Kazuo said. Sesshoumaru nodded slightly.
"I'll be taking my leave now" Sesshoumaru then walked out the room and headed to his room, leaving his father to sort out his thoughts. Kazuo leaned back into his black-leathered recliner and signed heavily.
" Naraku you hiretsukan (4)" Kazuo muttered before he retired to his room and have a decent sleep for once.
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AN: Hey. Sorry for not updating sooner. Uncle and family came over and they kept me busy. Well I hoped this chapter didn't disappoint any of you. I worked long hard on this chapter.
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To My Reviewers:
Moongoddess07: What I meant by changing the parings is that when I was first writing this fanfic, I thought it was going to be an Inuyasha x Kagome pairing. But the more I write, the more it's turning to a Sesshoumaru x Kagome pairing and I'm probably going to leave it that way.
Wolf: I updated! I hope you're not mad at me for not updating sooner. Please don't kill me! Anyway, thanks for reviewing.
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Khstennis01: I'm glad you find it sweet. I hope that Sesshoumaru and dad thing worked out well. Thank you for viewing.
Sparklingcrystal133: MWHAHAHA! I am evil. Anyway I really didn't have a cliffhanger in this chapter but al is good. Thanks for the review.
Kagome1992: I love the song to! I also love the song 'To Nowhere' from hack sign. I probably going to make this a Kagome x Sesshoumaru pairing now, since the way they act around each other. Sorry if this disappoints you. When I write I just write…and my thoughts and ideas made this fic turn out to be a Sesshoumaru x Kagome coupling. Again, I'm sorry if I made you displeased in any way. Thanks for reviewing.
Shadowww15: That sad to hear…err…read. Well I hope this chapter made you feels a little bit at home. ANYWAY! I guessing this is going to be a Sesshoumaru x Kagome pairing. I hope you're not mad at me! I know there is a lot of people that are closed minded about this pairing, but I have read WAY TOO MANY Inuyasha x Kagome fic's. Thanks for reviewing.
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Shadowww15: Yes I finally did realize that the bandages were brought for Kagome since Kagome was put under the spell of Eimin. Then I finally remember that every time Kagome comes to the feudal era, she always brings gauzes for the group and other things. That's what happens to me when I'm close-minded about writing chapters. I tend to forget simple yet important things about the Inuyasha series and my story. No I don't think that the readers or you are quote "stupid" or for the whole x-x-x-Outside Kagome's Mind (with Kazuo, Inuyasha, Amaya, Sango, Miroku and Izayoi)-x-x-x- thing. I just thought that…actually…I don't think I was thinking. I guess I'm the stupid one. And sorry for making Kagome act like Rin and Miroku being goofy one minute and totally serious the next and also for making him seem frightened from the spell Naraku put on Kagome. And forgive for my usage of plural and non-plural words. I type really fast and usually my Microsoft Word doesn't pick up on these things so thanks for pointing them out for me. I for the whole (#) thing, I kind of have a bad memory for remembering things like that and I thought that I put 10 for the other word. I just thought that some people would like to write down some of the Japanese language I put in my story but I guess I used some of them over and over again so I really don't need to waste my time and type the same thing like Hentai and all those things down again. I'M MAD AT MYSELF FOR TURNING SESSHOUMARU INTO A SOFTY! I really don't want to make him into a bastard (sorry if I offended you for saying that) in my story and I don't want him to sound to nice either. I'm kind of trying to make Sesshoumaru BE Sesshoumaru but it can be quite hard depending what going on the situation and where it's happening. So I will try harder to make Sesshoumaru sound emotionless and uncaring (if possible). I'm was mad at first when I read your review but then when I went to go check up on this chapter I saw my errors and I fixed them. But now I see that I shouldn't be so mad when readers, like your self, show me my mistakes so THANK YOU! I appreciate it (and I'm not lying. I don't lie to my reviewers) that you helped me and helped other readers make my story easier and more understanding to read. Please feel free to review for my mistakes and stuff. Thanks for reviewing and I hope you continue to review my story. P.S: I know I'm confusing the readers but I might leave this fic a an Inuyasha and Kagome pairing. I just thought of a new idea…so yeah. Hope your not mad at me.
ArcherGirl87: Ummm…Sesshoumaru isn't in love with Kagome. He just puts up with her. No I'm going to make them kiss. Thank you for liking my story. Thanks for reviewing.
Angelmaiden: I PROMISE TO WRITE MORE! If I can get more ideas out of my head…err…thanks for reviewing.
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Translation:
Eimin: Eternal Sleep/ Death
Onna: Woman
Shinidoki: Time To Die
Hiretsukan: Mean Bastard/ Sneak/ Heel/ Despicable person
JA NE MINNA-SAN!
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