O.o fufufu... I had just recently realized how frooking short this chapter is. Like, just over 200 words. 202 without the chapter title and end x.x. Its like, veryshort drabble-length. So here's the deal. Sooner and more you review, sooner I'll post the last chapter! >. not that it's anything to look forward to. But rejoice! I have finishe dthe first chapter of the main story, and it starts of with much shounen-ai fluffiness! XD Only at some point I started influencing my writing with music -twitch- may have mutilated it. Or maybe not.
Alright, well, read. Thankies for your reviews! zomg people actually liked chapter ten! I think I really freaked myself out with that chapter O.o Oh, and I haven't really thought about Roy's eyepatch much >. I think at least every now and then I said 'eye' instead of 'eyes' when talking about roy, but please ignore any wierd things with that o.x
Random Quote: Me: -implodes-
Chapter 11: Homunculus
Roy could only watch as his human form morphed back into his Homunculus one. The clothing covering his tattoo burned away, creating a hole in the middle of the black fabric. The tattoo glowed eerily, and Roy had enough sense to let go of him just as the Ouroboros array bled overtop of the soul-binding one.
The homunculus opened his eyes, looking around for a moment as if in a daze. He caught sight of Roy sitting there with his mouth hanging open in shock. It leapt to its feet, and looked down at Roy with a condescending look that could only compare to Roy's own.
"Tell me where the woman is and I'll let you live."
Roy flinched at the coldness in his voice and eyes, and found he felt like curling up into a ball as Hughes had done minutes before. He looked towards the house. The creature followed his gaze and noticed the muffled screaming coming from inside the house. It grinned, revealing its unnaturally sharp teeth, and sprinted towards the door, disappearing inside as swiftly as a phantom. Roy sat utterly still as he heard the screaming cut off by a strangled yell, followed by a soft thud. Silence.
End Chapter 11
Review time!
Duet Maxwell Shinobi of Wind: Wow, you really thought it was amazing? I thought ti was freakeh and too much monologue -sob- I promise try avoid too much monologue-ing in the future T.T
poor Elysia-chan -sob- >.
Thatz of the Dragon knights: Yu car wrecker! You know how much thinking I had to endure to think up the imaginary money for that? -fishfwap-
Glad yu like it I suppose XD its till scared me >.> oh well. XD
Arigato everyone! PLz leave more reviews, remember, the more ya review tha sooner I'll get the last chapter up and then onto the main stroy! -which still has no title- T.T