Well, the only thing I have to say is that I've slightly changed the summary. Not much at all.
The Legend of Kingdom Hearts
Chapter 9 Information
"So would anyone mind telling me," asked Kari, "what the hell is going on?" She had managed to subdue Zelda and Link's efforts of strangling her with their joy with a little help from Aerith and Zidane.
Leon leaned yet again against the door facing the four. "First off, do you know what the Heartless are?" He didn't wait for an answer. "They are beings without hearts. Devoid of emotion and pain, these creatures have only one goal: Stealing hearts. If they get you, you become one of them. Forever." He paused slightly between the last two sentences. Kari gulped softly.
"They're the ones who attacked you in the square," said Aerith as a matter of fact.
Sora rested his head on his hands. "So who created them?" he asked curiously.
"Wellthisweirddudedidandwehavenoideawhereorwhoheis.Wethinkhe'sworkingwithsom eoneelse, whichiswhytheHeartlessnowhavetheabilitytotalknow. AmItalkingtoofastforyou?"
"Yuffie, please go take some Straterra and shut up," said Zidane.
Yuffie gave a huff of annoyance then left the room.
He turned back to the group. "Sorry you had to catch her after she drank coffee. She's normally serious about this but if you give caffeine..." The Solo Survivors shuddered.
"Anyway," Aerith continued, "what Yuffie was trying to say was we don't know exactly who he is. We've been trying to, but the Heartless don't talk easily."
Garnet pulled up a chair nearby Kari. "All we've managed to find out is that their leader is a man named Lord Charles."
Kari stopped cold. Charles? Isn't that my dad's...? But he's dead, isn't he? she thought. "Charles?" she asked absent mindedly.
"What a stupid name." Zidane laid back in his chair with his arms behind his head. "He's got another man with him as well. Some guy named Ganondork or something."
Link stood up immediately after hearing the name. "Ganondorf?!"
"Yeah that's right!"
Zelda gasped. "It can't be him, right? Link defeated him in our universe! How did he end up in this one?"
"That's a good question that we can't answer yet, mam," said Leon.
"Do ya think they're working together?" asked Sora. Leon nodded.
Zelda suddenly began muttering quietly. "Then the dream must be true..."
"What dream?" asked Kari out of the blue. Link and Zelda looked at each other.
"I have no idea what you're talking about," said Zelda.
"Oh I believe you do, Zelda. You know I have good hearing and I know what I heard. So spill it you two!" she demanded.
Sora was utterly confused but decided to listen silently.
Zelda gave up. She took in a deep breath before beginning.
"Alright, remember when I was struck by lightning at the party? Well when I was unconscious, the goddesses came to me. They told me a great evil would come, aided as well. They said that needed to find certain people to join me in a quest to stop him: A Hero of Time, a female thief, a master of the key, and one who has had betrayal and a hard past. When they come together, the goddesses said the evil would be defeated.
"But they also warned me about a treasure," she continued. "A treasure so powerful, it would be the end of us all if the Dark One got his hands on it. They hastened me to go to Traverse Town, a new world, and find the one named Leon who leads the group against him. There, I would find two of the people I needed: The one who has had betrayal and a hard past and the master of the key. The others were on different planets. They bade me good luck, then they left, and I woke up."
The room was quiet; only the sounds of breathing were heard. Kari was pondering on the dream and her father. She hardly even heard the door open as Yuffie strolled in.
"So, what'd I miss?" she asked innocently. No one answered for a little bit. Then Sora spoke.
"How can you tell what person is the one you need?"
"Whenever I get near them, they flash a color quickly enough for only me and that person to see. So far it has only been Link's green light that I've seen."
"Uh guys?" said Yuffie. "I don't mean to interrupt but I have a note." She pulled out a small letter and began reading:
Dear Losers,
Haha! Youll never catch me alive! Try to find me if you can, Squally! Try to mak me work, why doncha! Zidane, it was nice workin with ya, but I can't tak that bitch Garnet anymore. Garnet, if you are reading this, YOU SUK! Aerith, althouh you were nice, this place is just too easy for a guy lik me. Cid, thanks for all the good times, pal! Those beere bottles didn't go to wast after all! Yuffie, I hav nothing to say to you exept SHUT THE HELL UP!
Good bye and god riddance,
Tidus
"That boy needs to learn how to spell badly," Yuffie said as she finished.
Leon was seething now. "That danm kid is going to be dead when I get to him!" He clenched his fists tightly, turning his knuckles white. He spoke through clenched teeth.
"Aerith and I will search the First District. Garnet and Zidane will try the Second. Yuffie, stay here and keep an eye on the base. The rest of you, go search the Third. Well what are you waiting for?! MOVE!"
He spoke with such ferocity, no one hesitated. Everyone, except Yuffie and Leon, made a mad dash to the doors.
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"Because we're doing him a favor, just as he did by saving our lives," answered Kari.
"Besides, who wanted to mess with that temper?" said Zelda.
They opened the door and began walking down the stairs.
"He seemed pretty pissed off," Link said with thought.
"Oh, and what gave you that idea, Link?" Sora said with sarcasm. "Was it the bulging eyes, the loud voice, or the red face?"
"Well actually it was the-"
He stopped dead cold when he saw the sight in front of them.
Ninja Mage: Heh. If you really hate Tidus, you'll probably like my next chapter. Thanks for trying, though! I appreciate it! And thanks for taking the time to do so. Cheers to fast updates to us all! (drinks Coke)
Kinoarashi: I hope so as well. They're probably busy so I won't get it for a while.
Doomboy2000: I thought of it more as compliments, actually. And why would you bang your head on a desk? At least you said that was a good sign...
Med: I'm wondering guys: If Kari, Zelda, and Link are here, then wheres-
(Sora runs in holding a Mountain Dew)
Sora: Sorry I'm late guys! I just got back from a doctor's appointment.
Kari: (crosses arms) And what did he say?
Sora: He said that I had to stay away from soda and stuff like that.
Med: Then what the hell are you doing with that?! (points to Mountain Dew in his hand)
Sora: (evil grin) This. (drinks the soda)
Everyone else: Uh oh.
Sora: I IS SUPER DUDE! (strips down to his undies) (begins running around the room with his arms out at his sides) CHEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSEEEEEEE MMMMMEEEEEEEEEE!
Med: OMG! R&R, peeps, while I handle this guy. (gets a can of sleeping gas)
Med