Okay. I have no idea what to write and none of you reviewers (all six of
you) except for auburnbeagle gave me suggestions! ARGH! What's up with
that? Do you all have no idea what I should write? Or am I just
crazy!!!!????
By the way, I am mad at Lion Hart because one of our other successful stories, Imin your Enemy, got taken off Fanfic because she did it in the improper format. So I will just take out my anger in this chapter, although I'm not sure if I can upload it because of Lion hart's story.
I looked around at heaven with newly found amazement. "So how big is this place?" I asked.
"At least as big as the Earth itself," replied Lily. "I read it in a travel brochure."
"Ha ha, very funny."
"Well, it is as big as the Earth," cut in James, always the one to defend his wife.
"Whatever. So Lily, you told me you were watching Harry, right?" She nodded. "So how exactly do you do that?"
"All you have to do is think hard about the person you want to see, then you will see them."
"It's as easy as that?"
"Well, of course you have to take your qualifying exam-"
"Wait! Another test?"
Lily looked at the look on my face and grinned. "Yes Sirius, another test."
"Oh no," I groaned. Just then another big guy, bigger than the other one, walked up to us. "Sirius Lee Black?" he asked, reading off a scroll of parchment.
"Right here," I said in a voice that was squeaky with fear.
"Follow me," he said, and marched off.
I glanced back at James and Lily. Then I followed the guy, feeling an odd sense of déjà vu. When he led me into another dark building, I got extremely nervous. He sat me down and gave me a piece of paper and a pencil.
"What you have to do," he said gruffly, "Is write down the names of the people whom you wish to see." I nodded. He looked at me expectantly. "well, go on," he said.
I took the pencil and wrote down Harry's name first. Who else? I thought hard. Moony! I wrote down Remus Lupin. Then I thought some more, aware that the big guy was looking over my shoulder. I wrote down Severus Snape. It would be cool to see if Snivelus ever washed his hair.
"Wait a minute," the big guy said. I looked up at him. "You don't care about this Snape person enough to be qualified to watch him," he said.
"But-"
"No buts. And that's final!!!"
I looked down at the paper again, annoyed. It said in the directions that you could have a maximum of three choices. I had to choose my last person carefully. After thinking for a while, I wrote down the final name. Tom Riddle.
"Ah," said the big guy softly. "A wise choice." I turned around to look at him. He looked back at me. "Are you done?" he asked. In reply, I stood up and gave him the paper and pencil. He walked out of the dark room and I followed him, once again being blinded by the light. He walked over to a desk and I followed him. After a moment, he looked up and told me that I was fully qualified and free to go. "The watching pools are over there," he said, pointing somewhere over to the left. I nodded and left to find Lily and James.
How did you like it? I had some trouble thinking up everything, but it worked out in the end! (At least I hope it did!) Remember to hit that little blue button on the left that says Review!
By the way, I am mad at Lion Hart because one of our other successful stories, Imin your Enemy, got taken off Fanfic because she did it in the improper format. So I will just take out my anger in this chapter, although I'm not sure if I can upload it because of Lion hart's story.
I looked around at heaven with newly found amazement. "So how big is this place?" I asked.
"At least as big as the Earth itself," replied Lily. "I read it in a travel brochure."
"Ha ha, very funny."
"Well, it is as big as the Earth," cut in James, always the one to defend his wife.
"Whatever. So Lily, you told me you were watching Harry, right?" She nodded. "So how exactly do you do that?"
"All you have to do is think hard about the person you want to see, then you will see them."
"It's as easy as that?"
"Well, of course you have to take your qualifying exam-"
"Wait! Another test?"
Lily looked at the look on my face and grinned. "Yes Sirius, another test."
"Oh no," I groaned. Just then another big guy, bigger than the other one, walked up to us. "Sirius Lee Black?" he asked, reading off a scroll of parchment.
"Right here," I said in a voice that was squeaky with fear.
"Follow me," he said, and marched off.
I glanced back at James and Lily. Then I followed the guy, feeling an odd sense of déjà vu. When he led me into another dark building, I got extremely nervous. He sat me down and gave me a piece of paper and a pencil.
"What you have to do," he said gruffly, "Is write down the names of the people whom you wish to see." I nodded. He looked at me expectantly. "well, go on," he said.
I took the pencil and wrote down Harry's name first. Who else? I thought hard. Moony! I wrote down Remus Lupin. Then I thought some more, aware that the big guy was looking over my shoulder. I wrote down Severus Snape. It would be cool to see if Snivelus ever washed his hair.
"Wait a minute," the big guy said. I looked up at him. "You don't care about this Snape person enough to be qualified to watch him," he said.
"But-"
"No buts. And that's final!!!"
I looked down at the paper again, annoyed. It said in the directions that you could have a maximum of three choices. I had to choose my last person carefully. After thinking for a while, I wrote down the final name. Tom Riddle.
"Ah," said the big guy softly. "A wise choice." I turned around to look at him. He looked back at me. "Are you done?" he asked. In reply, I stood up and gave him the paper and pencil. He walked out of the dark room and I followed him, once again being blinded by the light. He walked over to a desk and I followed him. After a moment, he looked up and told me that I was fully qualified and free to go. "The watching pools are over there," he said, pointing somewhere over to the left. I nodded and left to find Lily and James.
How did you like it? I had some trouble thinking up everything, but it worked out in the end! (At least I hope it did!) Remember to hit that little blue button on the left that says Review!