Reviews: Mary is it me or are you the only one who likes my story?
And yes Leo is in this chapter! Did I mention that if you send in a character you get a whole chapter about them?
2 New characters for other readers
This is my friend's Chao
Name: Hot
Colour: dark red
Age: 3
Personality: grumpy, keeps head down
Other: Has flamey hands and has sonic quills but red! Only comes into action when someone is in danger always gets the girl's eye.
This is Mary's char
Name: Leo
Colour: light blue with green hands and feet
Age: 2
Other: has lion ears and lion tail! He's extremely smart! And yet he has bad luck…but he's still cute.
Taffy, Linky, Crystal, Shark and Gizmo were slowly trudging through the forest when suddenly a shape dashed past. "What was that?" Asked Taffy. "I don't know" said Linky drawing his sword from his scabbard "but it can't be good". Suddenly a flaming figure lunged at Linky. Then the figure got off. "Sorry I'm Hot I just thought you were someone else!" Suddenly another figure appeared "I'm Leo" he said "we'll both help you" said Leo. So the seven set off to DS Mountain.
Sorry it's so short but I'm out of ideas now I'm really desperate please help me Mary!