I am so sorry it took me so long to update! I had some stuff that I had to do.Ok, this chapter is kind of short but I should have the next chapter up with it. And I have reviews! YAY! The two of you get big brownie points. Especially crossbow. Thank you so much for pointing out some things I either didn't explain good enough or I just completely screwed up. That's want's going to help get better at writing. Yall have to remember that this is my first story though so there might be some errors. So just let me answer some reviews and we'll get on with the story.
Meowen- You've been a good friend through this story and I'm glad your enjoying it. And I will keep writing it. Sorry, the blonde guy ain't Jak. He won't be in this one, in a sequel maybe but not this one. It's someone else. Come on guys think! I don't own him and he's in a famous series of books that the richest woman in England wrote. Know who it is yet?
Crossbow- When I said "friend" in the first chapter I tried to put some sarcasm in it. Hence the "" on the sides. I was trying to make it where you could tell that they used to be friends but as Teresa got to know Salena she just hated her. So instead of just ending there friendship like normal high school girls do she wanted her to suffer, because she's just sick like that. If Teresa caught me writing that she would kill me, but in real life me and Teresa are best friends and she's one of the nicest people you'll meet.It wasn't the pants and shirt I was trying to show one of the differences between them like one of light and one of darkness.
I wasn't really sure how long it takes someone to climb and pine tree, so I just put something. In real life I do climb a lot of trees but I've never timed myself I was just climbing either for the fun of it or just to get away from everything, so I have no idea how long. I can cut it down to 5 or 3 minutes if that sounds better.
Yeah, I do have a spelling problem I know I kept putting throughn instead of thrown, my spell checker (thank God for that thing) it would never give me the word I was looking for, so I just said screw it they'll know what I'm talking about. I had just woken up when I typed that chapter or chapters, I can't remember how many times I typed it like that, but I finally decided to look it I up and finally found what I was looking for. YAY!
Yeah I know the summary sucked. Believe it or not this whole story started out as a joke between Teresa and me. It wasn't until chapter 12 that I decided try to make it a fan fic and the only category I could think of was Van Helsing so I had to try and find a good motive with out giving myself a head injury. And this was the best thing I could come up with, without changing the plot of the story.
Wow too many questions. I need to shut up and head on with the fic! And remember R&R (whispers… read and review) and enjoy this chap.
Consequences of Failure"What were you thinking!" Vlad had just got word of the failed mission. And he finally found the man responsible for it.
"You only sent one man to retrieve her?" The weak link in his chain was his second in command who organized the attack.
"Well, you said that it was just one girl-."
"One girl who's past job was to kill!" Vlad was growing impatient. This man was walking a thin line for questioning him.
"Well I thought-."
"I didn't recruit you to think! Remember what I told you would happen if you ever screwed up?" Vlad asked and his fangs came into view.
"Sir. Please! No! Sir! Sir! SI.. AAAHHHAA!" the commander screamed as his blood was drained from his body. When Vlad was satisfied, he dropped the commander to the floor; all life sucked from him. Vlad took a deep breath and wiped a trickle of blood from his mouth. He actually almost regretted what he had just done…. almost.
"Anybody else?"
All of the men either said nothing or shook their heads in fear of what would happen if they should oppose him.
"Good! I want everybody in this room after her!"
All of them ran out of the room and out of the base to 5 helicopters that were sitting outside.
"And for the last time; BRING HER BACK ALIVE!" Vlad reached into his pocket and pulled out his new favorite toy, his cell phone. Even vamps have cell phones. He was very fond of this contraption as he called it. When he was alive they weren't around. He punched in a few numbers and contacted Teresa.
Scene ChangeTeresa was still on the hill spying on the girls when her cell phone started to ring. Yes a witch with a cell phone. (Hey it's the twenty-first century, everybody has one)
"What was that? I thought you had a small army. Why did you send one man?"
"There was a weak link that is now taken care of. I have half my men advancing on Agent Carrington. It shouldn't be to long now."
"Really? I should have the perfect view."
"What do you mean?"
"I'm a few 100 yards away from where she sits."
"What are you doing there?"
"I have my reasons."
Well here's chapter…something. Hold on……..6! Chapter 6. Well on to the next chapter come on please at least review it if you have the time. The next chapter gives this story it's reason to be called PG-13 or T or what ever. In other words a lot of violence and a lot of killing.
