OMGosh OMGosh OMGosh! Did you all see the preview of the season finale! I'm so excited about it. Poor Nicky. I wish it was Greg cuzz I love the angst but if they would have killed him, that would put me into a depression. I love Nick too though, he's my number two guy on my list, but he's gone through so much drama on the show, being stalked, guns pointed at his head twice, thrown out of a window, now BURIED ALIVE! Ahhhhh. They say there miht be a loss of the team but if it's going to be anyone, it's prolly gonna be Grissom cuzz he said he's done after this season because of all the other CSI, which I agree, there should only be one CSI on T.V, not three. Anyway, back to my story. Glad to see thr reviews, maybe if you guys put in some of your ideas I can add them into my story, like what you' like to see happen to Greg or Nick. I'm not very very good at the part I can always invision haha. But I'll try my hardest.

I noticed a boo-boo. In chapter9. when Nick and Greg is talking, Nick says he's never heard of the doctor/coroner who took Cranes body, when Greg never named anyone. Lets pretend that he said it was Mr.Cunninghams.

Chapter 11: Lies

"St. Thomas Correctional Facility. This is Megan, how may I help you?" The secretary, Megan asked on the other end of the phone.

"Hello, my name is Gil Grissom, I'm with the Las Vegas Crime Lab, is Dr.McKinsee there?" He asked.

"Yes, just a minute." She answered. Grissom waited anxiously for the doctor to respond.

"Mr. Grissom, I"m sorry, but I'm looking at the schedule and he's not in today. if you want, I can link you up to Dr.Higgins. He'd be happy to help you." She offered.

"No, that's all right. Does he have a phone number that I can reach him at at the moment?" Grissom hoped.

"I'm afraid not. I could leave your number for him." She suggested.

"All right, tell him it's very important, we're having a crisis." He told her his cell phone number and hung up the phone. "Damnit!" He yelled in frustration.

"Is he there?" Nick asked, coming into Grissom's office.

"Day off." Grissom answered.

"Well I'm not going to sit around and wait for him, I'm going to go to the mortuary where Crane's body was taken and find the doctor." Nick said, about to walk out.

"You don't even know which mortuary took care of his body." Grissom told him.

"I'll find out. I'll make calls looking for the doctor." With that, Nick left the room.

Nick began walking down the hallway to a vaccant lab. He walked by Gregs lab which was now taped off and Catherine was photographing anything out of the ordinary, which was pretty difficult to find. "How's it coming?" Nick asked her.

"Well I've looked all around his lab and there's nothing here that shouldn't be, no evidence that Crane was threatening him. Nothing. In the hallway there was some foot prints, and I'm guessing it's going to turn out to be Crane's." Catherine explained, seeming tired and irritated.

"Keep looking." Nick said and he turned around to head to a room. He didn't mean to sound so rude, but he was way too pissed to care at the moment. Catherine gave him a griefing look, she knew he didn't mean it that way either, and returned to look around for anything.

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He had to pee. He sat there for hours, thinking of having to go to the bathroom. Sure, he should be way worried about his life, but for the temporary moment, he just thought about peeing. Greg had no idea how long he had been sitting in that chair before someone finally came down the stairs.

"Hello Gregory." Nigel said, walking into the room.

Greg just looked down.

"It's not very polite to not say hello to someone." He sung out to Greg.

"It's not very polite to kidnap someone and tie them to a chair either." Greg retorted.(Is that a word? I think it is lol)

"You should really think about respecting me. I'm not the vulnerable one." Nigel told him, bending down to Greg's level, looking into Greg's hateful and scared eyes.

"'I'm not going to make it easier for you to kill me." Greg told him.

"What are you going to do? Beat me up with words?" Nigel laughed, walking behind Greg.

"Let me go, and you won't have to worry about it." Greg offered.

As soon as he finished his sentence, Nigel brought his right arm around Greg's neck, poking him in the side of his neck with some kind of blade. Greg took one quick gulp and tried holding his breath. He sat up as straight as he could and didn't make a sound.

"Now, do you really wan to make me mad?" Nigel asked, pushing the blade, which was a knife, a little more into Greg's neck.

Greg didn't answer. He was scared that by talking, it would make the knife inject its self into his throat.

"Now who doesn't have the balls to talk back to me?" Nigel toyed with him. He knew Greg wasn't going to say anything so he removed the knife and came back around to face Greg. He noticed a little red bubble on Greg's neck and figured he accidently punctured him.

"Oops, my bad Gregory. I'll make sure I finish the job." Nigel told him.

Not realizing what he was doing, Greg spit on Nigel's shirt. Then without warning, Nigel slapped Greg hard across the face, so hard that it busted his lip a little bit and a tiny bit of blood crept down his chin.

"That was very ungentleman like Gregory. Very nasty. You're lucky though, I"m going to be nice and clean you up, and feed you. Then, you'll be in for quite a treat. I'm sure you'll injoy it." When Nigel said injoy, he said it very sarcatically, which Greg knew it couldn't be anything good on his behalf.

"Nigel, someone is calling you." A voice said from upstairs, who came down the stairs and stepped into the small room.

"McKinsee how could you do this?" Greg asked. Man did his cheek hurt.

"Mike, could you give him a shower and put him in the clothes that I set out for him?" Nigel asked.

"Yeah." He merely replied.

"Who's on the phone?" Nigel asked, as he started for the door.

"Mrs.Malone." He answered.

"Oh, all right. She's late anyway. Sorry Gregory but I must leave you for now. Parting is such sweet sorrow, that's what they say anyway." Nigel said as he began up the stairs.

Mike(Dr. McKinsee, obviously, making sure you realize the name change) went behind Greg and began to take off the handcuffs. "Try anything funny and I'll shoot you." He warned. Greg didn't underestimate him.

"If you were helping him all this time, why didn't you kidnap me when I was with you?" Greg asked.

"Because, it wasn't part of Nigel's plan." He told him.

"Why are you doing this?" Greg asked. As he asked this, Mike stood him up and Greg grabbed his wrists and massaged them, man did they hurt.

"Because Nigel is my second cousin. How else do you think he got out?" He asked, motioning for Greg to go up the stairs. Greg figured that Mike had helped Crane get out but for them to be cousins. This keeps getting more and more confusing.

"You're lucky I didn't kill you and your friend earlier." Mike explained to Greg as they made their way up to the top floor.

"What are you talking about?" Greg asked, not comprehending what he was talking about.

"You and Nick were right in the middle of the street, I was so close to nailing you both but unfortunetely Nigel to me not to and Nick pulled you both to safety in time." He told him. "Take a shower and then put that on. There is no way to get out of the bathroom so there is no means of escape. Don't make me have to go in there." He instructed him.

"Mrs. Malone will be joining us for dinner tonight." Crane said, coming up the stairs.

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oOoO, who else is joining the group? The suspense haha. I hope you all enjoy and review like crazy!

Love,

Jackie