Okay, so I am trying my hand at poetry. I've never really written any poetry so try and be kind, but please tell me what you think.
I had to seperate them like this which sucks because the stupid thing won't quit skipping lines.
Umm..this poem is basically something that just came to mind. It's in Cole's point of view. I don't know when it would take place since it's completely different from the show. Please tell me what you think, good or bad.
Too Soon
Your pulse is slowing
And in my heart I know
I hold your hand and pray
as I feel you letting go
Our lives have worked out so well
Better than I could have hoped
But as you're lying in this bed
I find it hard to cope
I knew that this would happen
That I would have to someday watch you die
But I never dreamed it would be this soon
And all I can do is sit and cry
We had your memorial service today
And it's finally hit that you're gone
The bond of ten years is now severed
And you and I are no longer one
I stand and watch, afraid to move
wondering why this was meant to be
your casket is so close, inches away
But I can't make myself look, not ready
The families' sadness mirrors my own
Your sisters are devastated and the little ones as well
they walk about aimlessly
And I feel that without you, this is my hell
I pick up our small daughter
And it plays across her face, your smile
"Why you so sad, daddy?" Prue asks me
And her question makes me think for a while
Here I am, dancing at our baby's wedding
As of now she's not just a beautiful woman, but a wife
She's just like you in every way, loving, beautiful
And now I sit and watch as she walks into her adult life
I understand how I failed you
But I will not make the same mistake twice
And as I hold little Gracie Pheobe I vow
that our granddaughter will be safe at whatever price
Ok, so how was it for my first poem?