Me:Hey! Welcome back!

Sean:Still winning!

Dy:Today is... Pikimin2!

Me:What a great category!

Sean:That last chapter was reeeeeeeeeeeally long!

Me:New record!

Dy:I believe that soon lightning will strike this mansion.

Me:You know what that means!

Sean:We get to invite Luigi over and have a ghost sucking party!

Me:Exactly!

Meanwhile!

Jan:Lance.

Lance:Yeah? Ow!

Jan:Hold it still.

Lance:With pleasure!

Jan:Bone cut!

The turkey meat fell off! It was just bones!

Jan:There you go!

Lance:o.o;;;;; What did you do that for?

Jan:It's what he wanted. He wanted to be "slim".

Lance:Okaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay.

Meanwhile!

Moe:Well, I'm clean!

Joe:Me too!

Moe:hey how about we go to the gamecube?

Joe:Sure. But...

Moe?

Joe:What say we get some clothes instead of these towels?

Moe:Oh yeah.

Meanwhile!

Lightning:Oh! A building to zap!

Meanwhile!

Me:3,2,1.

ka-ZAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAP!

Me:I'll call Luigi.

At the smash bros. mansion!

Navi:Hello?

Me:Hi! Navi it's been ages!

Navi:Hi, Garfieldfan. What can I get for ya?

Me:Luigi.

Navi:Sorry but lightning struck this place too. Leave it to the biggest toughest people in town to be horrified by seeing a ghost.

Me:(Laughing) Yeah!

Navi:Also leave it to the skinniest guy to be the one who defeats them.

:Ghost!

Luigi:Haha!

Ghost:I'll get you later! D.K.!

Navi 'n' me:R&R

Disclaimer:...

Chapter 11: Pikmin fever.

"Great! Just great! The first battle I lose in ages, and I get sent to another dimension!"

Meanwhile!

"Louie! Get those pikmin over here!"

"Aye aye!"

Suddenly a crack appears over the pikmin and a guy falls!

"Ugh!" Face plant!

"Captain! It's an alien!"

"Run for your life, Louie!"

"Oww! Where am I?" said the guy getting up.

"Captain! It talked!"

"Who the heck are you?"

"Captain it talked to us!"

"What are these things!" he obviously was talking about the Pikmin.

"Greetings I am Captain Olimar! This is my sidekick Louie! Those are Pikmin! And you are on the planet Pikpik!" said Olimar.

"How are you able to breath oxygen?" asked Louie.

"And you can't?"

"What is your name!" asked Olimar.

"Zack."

"Mear!" said a Pikmin.

The pikmin walked up to Zack and poked him. He poked it back. The pikmin licked him. He poked it. It sniffed him. He poked it again. It climbed up him. He put it down on the ground. It climbed up him again. He put it down again. This process contiued untill the pikmin said:

"Meha!"

Suddenly all the pikmin climbed on Zack.

"Help me!"

"Mel mel mel!" said the pikmin.

"This could get interesting." Olimar whispered to Louie.

"I think you're right."

The pikmin all jumped off and mowed him over.

"Ack!"

Then they started to attack him.

Fight!

Zack Pikmin mob

At. 35 50

Def. 40 50

Mpow. 25 0

Mpnts. 35 0

HP 16 60

SP 0 0

Zack:Firaga! MP: 32

Pikmin:Meha! HP: 60

Louie:Good thing they're red.

Olimar:Yep.

Zack:Ugh! Blizaga! HP:6 MP:29

Pikmin:Merere. Meha! HP: 40

Zack:Nooo. HP:0

Pikmin:Mone!

End of fight.

The Pikmin carried their injured friends to the onion along with Zack. But the onion would not suck him up. He lay there unconscious, bleeding, and bruised. Could this be the end for him? Dying on a planet where he was not a part of the nature? Olimar and Louie took him back to their ship and left the planet ground for the night. They bandaged him up and left him on the floor 'cause he was to big for their beds. (He is Larger than them). In the middle of the night, he woke up and looked around him he noticed his wound above his hip bone was bandaged. He looked out the window and noticed the ground was far below him. He saw a door that said: Captains quarters. He looked to a second door and saw a sign that said: Louie's qaurters in goofy childish letters. Then he saw two doors that said: purple and white pikmin. he went in that one and saw lots of pikmin. They looked at him and said:

"Meha!"

Here we go again.

Fight!

Zack Pikmin mob

At. 10 300

Def. 10 400

Mpow. 25 0

Mpnts. 35 0

HP 6 /

SP 0 0

Zack:I'm gonna die! Wing spell! MP: 20

(It takes a lot more magic when you cast it by yourself)

Pikmin:Ooooooooooo!

Zack:Uh-oh.

(He's too weak from earlier! his wings start to disappear!)

Zack:One chance! Up-draft! MP:10

Zack started to be pushed up by the wind!

Zack:Ungh! Can't focus!

Zack falls!

Zack:Aaagh! Wham! HP:0

End of fight

Meanwhile!

"What in-!" said Olimar as he went to the Pikmin room.

He saw a strange sight. Zack had Angelic wings! But they weren't disappearing! Blood was pooling from his side wound. It looked like the real end for him this time!

"Olimar, what is it? Ack!" Louie came in to see this sight.

Commercial break!

Sean:I got you now!

Dy:Found one!

Lance:No escaping me now, Ghost!

Ghosts:Eeeep!

Moe:Keep it down! Joe and I are trying to play Mario kart double dash!

We now return.

Olimar was performing tests on Zack while he was unconscious. It seems that Zack's body had made sockets for the wings, and the wings had appeared, and were now permanent. Poor Zack.

"So, Olimar, is he going to live?"

"I don't know. But what I do know is that if we give him to a science lab they will pay us millions! That will get rid of the debt that our company is in."

"Have you checked his heart rate?"

"Not yet."

"Ow! Heeeey... That's an interesting shade of grey!"

"I think he's awake!" said Olimar.

"Ya think?" said Louie.

"Hey! You two! Why am I on the floor?"

"You won't fit in our beds." said Louie.

"Oh. Well. Tell me. What is the tingling feeling on my back? Is there a bug on me or something?"

"No, it's-" started Olimar.

"Let me guess. I'm bleeding. Aren't I?"

"You've got wings!" said Louie.

"O.O Nice try. Like I'd believe-." He was cut off by Louie holding up a mirror to him. It was reflecting at such an angle that he could see. He had wings.

"Ack! It's true! Well. Hmmmm." Zack started to flap his wings. He floated for a moment. And tried to land. Well, he got to the ground. But he couldn't use that much energy on his first try. He started bleeding. Only slightly though. "So much for that plan. I'm tired. I'm going to bed."

"Okay." said Olimar.

"Night." said Louie.

It was a long night. Firstly, Zack had to remember to stay on his stomach because of his wings. Secondly, he was worried about his sibings. Thirdly, he had lost a lot of blood. He devised that in the morning he would eat and drink a lot.

Commercial break!

Luigi:Stay behind me, Peach!

Navi:Begone, Ghost!

Ghost:Nooooooooo...

Bowser:(Screams like a girl and faints) EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK! Uh...

Yoshi:(Won't leave Luigi for his life) Pra! (Luigi! I'm scared!)

Luigi:Everyone outside!

Everybody sits on the ground.

Luigi:I'm going to call Professor E. Gad!

Yoshi:Ower! Owerwerwer... (No! Please don't go...)

We're back!

"Morning! What's for breakfast?" said Zack.

"House special. Louie's cooking."

"Well, can't be any worse than George's cooking."

"Actually, he's quite good."

"So sir what do you want?"

"I'll have... What can you make?"

"We have... What ever is on that board."

"Hmmmm... I'll have the steak some greens and what drinks do you have?"

"Milk, milk, milk, milk, pik pik carrot juice, milk, milk,... Did I mention milk?"

"Milk sounds good."

"One more gallon down. 4,913 to go."

"Wow."

"I'll have the burger and pik pik carrot juice."

"Comin' right up."

"So... Where do you come from?"
"Another dimension."

"(Whistles) How did you get here?"

"I lost a battle and my brother and sisters and I were sepperated."

"Well. Tell me about your world."

They had a nice conversation, a nice breakfast, and when they were done ,Zack felt alot better. They went outside and Zack practiced with his wings. He learned how to put them away. He also learned he could use angel spells. When Olimar and Louie got back they Happily greeted Zack.

"So you've been training all this time?"

"Yep!"

"Well hate to tell you, but that is the last time you'll be training!" said ?

"What?"

A dimensional rift opened and three werewolves jumped out of it!

"Die!"

Boss fight!

Friends

Zack Pikmin mob

At. 40 100

Def. 40 100

Mpow. 50 0

MP 50 0

HP 25 100

SP 10 0

Wing Power 15 0

Enemies

W 1 W 2 W 3

At. 50 50 50

Def. 30 30 30

HP 25 30 30

SP 0 0 0

WP 0 0 0

W 1:Morphi!

You know what happens. Swords!

Zack:Wings!

Zack sprouted his wings!

Pikmin mob:Meha!

W 1:Gaaah! Sword whirlwind! HP:20

PM:Merere... HP:40

Zack:Holy arrow! WP: 13 MP: 40

W 1! HP:5

W 2,3! HP:5

Zack:Wing slam! WP:10

Zack slammed his wing against the werewolf!

Werewolf1:(gaurd)

W 2,3:Eeergh! We failed. Master... He's... too powerful.HP:0

W 1:This isn't over! (Draws regular sword) Hurricane!

Zack:Wing Hurricane! WP: 6 MP: 30

It was a battle of hurricanes!

W 1: Goodbye forever! Thunder shot!

Zack:Uh-oh. Wing gaurdian! WP: 2 MP: 10

W 1:You'll regret this!

The werewolf retreats back into the crack.

End of fight.

"I'm going too!" said Zack as he put his wings away and jumped through the hole. He got to his old world and saw Helen by herself. He joined her and she brihgtened up.

"So, how are you?"

"Fine. But we have to wait until Jess and George get back to go in there."

"I've got wings. See?"

Zack let his wings out and Helen gawked.

"How did you do that!"

"I don't know."

End of chapter

Me:Gotcha!

Sean:Found the emergency battery!

Dy:Turn it on!

Bzzzzzzzzzzzzzt!

Joe:Yaaay! We've got power!

Everyone:Review!

Navi:Review!

Me:Navi! Why are you here?

Navi:Got our power back!

Me:Oh!