Lightning-Dono: This one is on Kuchinawa (sp?), as suggested by TheWhiteMonk.

Answers to Reviews

timmycheese - -Genis is cowering as people stare at him, grinning oddly- Oh, don't worry. I'm glad you liked it!

ObviousMan – I've never read any of your poetry, so I can't say that it's absolutely horrible, but I'm sure that you're good at it. People have a habit of putting themselves down in the face of something that they think is superior. I think we're on an even plain, since your writing is excellent. How I manage? Mmm...I only write poems when I'm inspired by something that I can't incorporate into a proper story. :) Thank you!

lisette – Thank you! I didn't think they were inspirational. o.o But that gives me a new take on it. :D

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Actions of a Traitor

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Crouching beneath the brush
Listening to the rain patter down
And endless mental rain
That began at the destruction
Of our leader

She acted as an innocent
Crying once Volt went out of control
Shedding tears over that destruction
That she bears now
On her journey

But I recognize those actions
A traitor in disguise
An assailant on the run
Away from the crime scene
To return someday

I know the sound of her footsteps
Echoing emptily
As empty as her heart
As she almost crushed the will of her own town
With one attempt

She went to slay an opponent
Claiming to be from another world
Instead, she joined them
In their journey
To twist Tethe'Alla in half

Some say that she's their hero
Most declare that she is strong
Yet, I recognize the strong
And those who are lower
Her actions symbolize the weak

Because I know the steps of a traitor
I don't understand the reasoning of others
Who demand otherwise
But those eyes that show no pain
And reflect only the fear of being caught
Imitate the dread
Of a traitor

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Okay, ouch? Worst poem EVER. Forget the other ones I put down, this thing is awful!