Seehoumaru meets dead Riku

Out of the woods came the last person Sesshoumaru wanted to see. Worst of all, the toad had

not brought the human he'd been ordered to baby-sit. "Sesshoumaru, Sesshoumaru," An

exhausted Jaken managed to gasp out. As Jaken approached Sesshoumaru he seemed to feel

malevolent energy coming from the, seamlessly calm, dog lord. "Forgive me my lord," Jaken

spoke " for I am the barer of terrible new. A.." " Where's Rin?" Sesshoumaru interrupted calmly

, "Did I not tell you she was your responsibility?" The Toad-demon was by now trembling in

fear. "But my lord" He squeaked, "We were attacked by a horrible black creature. He

kidnapped Rin and, then, when I tried to save her he stole my staff, ohh my poor Staff of Two

Souls, ohh the tragedy of it all ….My lord?" Finally realizing his master was already gone the

toad cride out, " My lord wait for me!" as he ran after his master as fast as his little webed feet

could carry him.

Following the trail Jaken left behind Sesshoumaru thought about Jaken's story, there was

something odd about it, like how he didn't say anything about Ah and Un. If Ah and Un felt that

Rin was in any danger they'd immediately attack, but Jaken didn't say anything about them only

that he had fought to protect Rin. Oh well, Jaken was missing he's staff. Sesshoumaru decided

that the answers he was seeking would have to wait until he found Rin. With that Sesshoumaru

picked op his speed so that all you saw of him was a blur.

Sesshoumaru soon came to a large spring pond. The old trees came close the pond's bank. The

branches blocked most of the light over the pond, except in the middle, so that on a sunny day

like today the pound seemed to be hit by a beam of light. The light reflected off the pond so

everything seemed to glow. Under the pound' s surface large gold fish swam lazily around lily

pads. All around the pond lovely delicate flowers grew. Basking in the filtered light of the sun.

When Sesshoumaru was a child he liked to play here, because normally, this was a serine

peaceful place, but not today. Today the mood was broken by the sound of a little girl sobbing

brokenheartedly. The little girl was Rin and she setting in the lap of someone obscured by a sea

of black cloth. Sesshoumaru had found the "Black Creature" and insanely knew that his foe

was already dead.

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