Disclaimer: I so not own, and never will own, Kingdom Hearts or Inuyasha, but on the bright side I do own a dollar. I'm such an optimistic person aren't I?
By the bluegayle
Tendrils of oily darkness wrapped around my body
(Sniff, sniff),
Smothering me
Pushing inside my chest
Searching (sniff, sniff,)
Reaching for my...
Riku woke up gasping in terror; pain shooting threw his wounded and bloody chest.
(Sniff, sniff,) "What was making that sound?" thought Riku. Looking up he stared into two pairs of course eyes in a dragon-like monster. Almost intently Riku was up on his feet ready to fight for his life. To bad his body it had decided it had had enough.
A little girl's voice came from behind the big bulk of the dragon. "Ah? UN? Rin wants to know what's takeing so long?" the little girl decided she had waited enough and came out from behind Ah Un . Only to see a pale boy laying unconscious on the ground.
I know this is a short chapter. The truth is I still consider this my first chapter. I'm kinda slow at writing so when I get to a good cutoff I take it.
When I finish my first chapter or part one is done I'm going edit it to make it clearer. If you what to help me I'd like that. Also I'm going to change my pen name soon so watch out for that.
Also if I have a lot of original story ideas it's get that I don't the time to write them. But I would still like them get written. So if you what to write something but don't want it to be like everybody else's just email or review me.
OH JOY IT'S CLUE TIME
Let's have some fun ok? I have a strange first name. If anyone can guess what it is I will do a chapter once a week for two months. Every updated chapter will have a new clue
Clue1. A type or brand of cracker inspired the first 4 letters of my name.
Clue.2 there are 6 letters in my first name