I am Afraid of Hell, a bible fanfic

Hey guys, this is, like, my first poem on FanFiction, so go easy on me. I took liberties with the rhyming so if you, like, don't agree with something try to be more liberal. "Hotel" rhymed with everything else, so I used it. Still, constructive criticism is, like, totally welcome, and if you read it, please review it so that I know what you, like, think. And if Xians Suck reviews, I will have fun laughing in the face of the creep. I am proudly Christian, even if he/she is not. Oh well, like, here goes.

I am afraid of Hell

I do my best to stay out of that cell

I look at my sins and say farewell

I must lead a pious life, in a church I will dwell

I think of that other place and I scream and yell

I shall not be a demonic rebel

I shall follow the ways of God to impel

All unholy thoughts to run away and quell

I cower from the burning smell

That is found in the Devils dell

I run from the dark funeral bells

Of sinners locked in the miserable hotel

With the people trapped in an unholy shell

I shall not be caught in Satan's spell

In Gods love I shall excel.

I like the last two lines but if you think something needs a change then tell me.

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