Once again, here'sanother chapte. Thank you all for your nice reviews!
Uncle Matt (Hope you don't mind if I call you like this), thanks but… why are you thanking me?
Aero Tendo, thanks for your review… don't worry about Kim and DarKim fighting, I promise it will be an epic battle! (With a small "coup de theatre")
Lydia, thank you so much for your nice words. Actually, I'm first of all a drawer, who enjoys inventing and drawing stories, so working for Disney is my"final ambition". But I'm still young, you know, so I still have to work about it.
BTW, here's the second chapter.
NEMESIS
Second Part
(Drakken's lair. Shego's on the ground, exhausted. DarKim stands right in front of her. DarKim is panting, too, but it's obvious that she's winning against Shego. Drakken is sat on a sofa, and he's looking at the fight.)
DarKim (panting): "Do you give up?"
Shego (exhausted): "N… Never!"
(They restart fighting, and Drakken looks at them, with a sly smile)
Drakken: "I'm losing the woman's boxe show on the tv, but it's totally worth it."
(DarKim is going to give Shego the final hit, but the green girl suddenly vanishes under DarKim's eyes.)
DarKim (surprised): "What?"
Shego: "Behind you!"
(Shego kicks DarKim from behind, sending her to the ground. Then Shegos' going to hit her again, but Drakken steps between them)
Drakken: "Come on, girl, let's end this with a draw!"
Shego (panting): "Fine…"
DarKim (panting): "Agreed…"
Drakken: "Well, Shego, I think she totally passed this test, didn't she? And also your suite, I might say it has worked remarkably!"
DarKim (very tired): "Will you accept me as your ally, Shego?"
Shego (still hesitating): "I… have only one question."
DarKim: "What is it?"
Shego: "What do you want in exchange for being our ally?"
DarKim: "What I want? I want Ron Stoppable"
(Middleton High. Three yellow bus are waiting outside for all the students to get on them. Kim, Ron, Monique and Brick are outside.)
Monique: "I'm so excited!"
Brick: "You can say it! This school trip rocks, shoots…"
Monique (high five-ing): "… and scores!"
Kim (to Ron): "They seem a great couple, uh?"
Ron (absent minded): "Yeah.."
Kim: "Ron, I waited for you to call me yesterday… But you didn't…"
Ron: "Oh, herr… I…"
Kim: "And even now, I feel like you're aloof…"
Ron: "No, KP, look, I'm… I'm fine…"
Kim: "So is it my fault? Did I do something wrong?"
Ron: "No! You didn't do anything wrong… it's just.. I'm… worried…. About Rufus!"
Kim: "Rufus?"
Ron: "Yes, you know, since Mr Barkin told me I couldn't bring him with me, I'm worried he will miss me. I'll surely miss him."
Kim: "So, you're not going to bring him with you…?"
Ron: "No"
Kim: "It's a pity, because he will lose the biggest Bueno Nacho ever built, which is in Spain… They say it has the best cheese of the world…"
Voice coming from Ron's bag: "Cheese!"
Kim (smiling): "Ah! I knew it!"
Ron: "Shhh! Don't make Barkin finding him!"
Kim: "Don't worry, Ron, you can always count on me. I'll help you hiding him."
Ron: "Thanks."
Kim: "No big! Ron, I wanted to talk to you about something…"
Ron (scared): "Herr… can't we do it another time?"
Kim (perplexed): "Oh, sure… But I thought it was better now…"
Ron (scared): "Hmm… ok, spell"
Kim: "Well, I talked with Monique about this school trip… and well… You know…"
Ron (terrified): "I know… what?"
Kim: "Well, I thought about us and our relationship, lately, and…"
Ron (veeeery terrified): "You are breaking up with me!"
Kim (shocked): "W-What? Oh, no! No! I don't wanna break up with you!"
Ron (finally relaxed): "Really..?"
Kim: "Of course! Why should I…?"
Ron:"I… I just thought about… when the blonde Kim… Never mind. So, if you're not breaking up with me, what did you want to tell me?"
Kim (blushing): "Actually… It's a total different argument… I…"
Barkin (yelling): "Everyone, quickly get on the Bus! I, Mrs Jenkis and Mr Thompson will be your guide during this whole trip. I know you won't do anything bad, while we'll be there, 'cause you all know that I'd leave you in Spain. NOW, GET ON!"
(When the three bus are full up, they leave Middleton High. And as they leave, all the students yell: )
Students: "Olèèèèèè"
(Meanwhile, in a laboratory, two scientist are looking for something… One scientist is thin and bald but with white mustache; the other one is fat with red "Einstein's style" hair.)
Thin Scient.: "I can't find it anywhere!"
Fat Scient.: "That's terrible!"
Thin Scient.: "Indeed. And it's all your fault."
Fat Scient.: "Mine? You lost it!"
Thin Scient. (offended): "That's just an insignificant detail"
Fat Scient.: "What if someone stole it?"
Thin Scient.: "That can't be! Our advanced defense system is faultless!"
Fat Scient.: "Then what? It was getting bored, and went away?"
Thin Scient.: "It's a possibility we have not to discard"
Fat Scient.: "I hope you're kidding. It couldn't move. We didn't built on it any moving system."
(The thin scientist rolls his eyes and starts whistling. The fat scientist's face turns red)
Fat Scient. (furious): "You did assemble on it a moving system?"
Thin Scient.: "Now, now, try to calm down…"
Fat Scient.: "What you did is just terrible! Do you realize what this means?"
Thin Scient.: "That it found an anomaly and it went to fix it on its own?"
Fat Scient.: "If you say it like this, it sounds like a good thing… But it's not! What if it found a fake anomaly? Innocent people could die!"
Thin Scient.: "Wait, I have an idea!"
Fat Scient.: "You have?"
Thin Scient.: ""It" is surely emitting particular radio waves to localize the anomaly…We can find this radio waves, in order to localize where "it" is headed!"
Fat Scient.: "Actually, this is a good idea!"
(They start typing like madmen on a keyboard connected to a huge screen. The screen starts beeping, and the thin scientist is very proud of himself)
Thin Scient.: "Ta-dah. I did it"
Fat Scient.: "So, where is it going?"
(Santiago de Compostela. Three Bus are parked near a "5 stars" hotel, named "Sangre de España". Ron gets off of the third Bus, yawning. Bonnie gets off after him.)
Bonnie: "Is the loser tired?"
Ron: "Don't know. Are you tired?"
Bonnie: "You stupid monkey"
Ron (very offended): "Don't say it ever again!"
(Barkin gets off, and sees them quarreling. Bonnie leaves, and he reaches Ron)
Barkin: "What's the matter, Stoppable? Didn't you enjoy singing the spanish national hymn during the travel?"
Ron: "I would, if I had at least known what it meant! It didn't even sound like it was spanish!"
(Then Brick gets off of the bus, singing and hugging Monique with his right arm)
Brick (singing): "Allons enfants de la patrie, Le jour de gloire est arrivé ! Contre nous de la tyrannie L'étendard sanglant est levé!"
Barkin (talking to Ron): "Don't be fool, Ron, of course it was spanish!"
Ron: "But I could find not even a word on my spanish-english dictionary…"
Barkin: "And you call THAT a dictionary? It is as big as your hand! And you got small hands"
Ron: "Not true! Your hands are huge!"
(Finally Kim gets off of the Bus.)
Kim (talking to the Bus driver): "Thanks for the ride, Mr Jameson"
Jameson: "It's the least I could do… since your school is paying me for this"
Kim (back to earth, embarrassed): "Ah…. Eheh Right!"
(After leaving the Bus, Kim is reached by Bonnie)
Bonnie (giggling): "What a poor figure with the driver, Kim"
Kim (annoyed): "It's a pity you came here with us, Bonnie. Please, make us both a favour: don't ruin our holyday by trying to talk to me."
Bonnie (giggling): "Don't worry about it!"
(Kim reaches Ron, who now is looking at a map)
Kim: "Phew… It was really a terrible day! An hour on a Bus from Middleton to the airport, then three hours of flying, and finally three hours again to arrive to Santiago from the airport, again on a Bus. And we listened at the french hymn ("La Marseillaise") during the whole journey… I still don't get why the french hymn. We were headed to Spain! It was so… Ron? What are you doing?"
Ron: "Looking at a map"
Kim: "I… saw it. What I meant is… why?"
Ron: "Looking for the biggest Bueno Nacho ever built… Here it is! 16.500 ft from here! 197.000 inches! 3 miles! 5 kilometers!"
Kim: "Yes, I got the concept. Did you ever listen at what I said?"
Ron (still looking at the map): "About the journey, or about the french hymn? "Phew… It was really a terrible day! An hour on a Bus from Middleton to the airport, then…""
Kim (smiling): "Let's go in the hotel, Ron."
(As they enter, they see Barkin, who meanwhile is giving to every student a paper. He eventually gives the paper to Kim and Ron, too.)
Barkin: "This is the rooms's arrangement. Find your name on the paper, then read the number of the room in which you will spend the night, and GO IN IT NOW. On the paper you can also read your room-mate's name, of course."
Ron: "Barkin chose our room-mates? I'm scared!"
Kim: "So not the drama, Ron, it can't be that…"
(Kim reads on her paper, and she turns white)
Kim: "… terrible"
(Ron has his paper, too, but he's too afraid of reading it.)
Ron (scared): "Kim, you turned pale..."
Kim: "I… I'll be in the same room… with… three boys"
Ron (puzzled): "You said Bonnie?"
Kim (pale): "I said… three boys"
Ron: "Wo-wo-wooh! You can't share the room with boys! This must be a misprint… AAAAAH BONNIE!"
Kim (looking around): "Where?"
Ron (pale): "IN MY ROOM!"
(Barkin is sat in the hall of the hotel, drinking a cup of coffee. He's trying to relax, but he's soon surrounded by a crowd of furious students. Everyone is complaining about the rooms's arrangement. Barkin ignores the students, until he finishes to drink his coffee. Then, he stands up.)
Barking: "Ok, children, calm DOWN!"
(All the students are now silent)
Barkin: "I know why you're complaining. I think this coffee is very bad, too."
(The students get angry again.)
A female student: "According to this paper, I have to share my room with two boys!"
A male student: "And I have to sleep in the hall!"
Barkin: "There must be an error! … You can't sleep in the hall, boy. I have to find you a room. What about sleeping with Tara…?"
Male student (happy): "Sure!"
Bonnie: "NO WAY I'M GONNA SHARE MY ROOM WITH THAT LOSER!"
(Barkin turns his head, and then he sees Bonnie)
Barkin: "Rockwaller, you're not satisfied by my rooms's arrangement?"
Bonnie: "AT ALL!"
Barkin: "This means your overnight stay here will be very annoying to you, because I'm not gonna change it"
Bonnie: "I… I can't believe it! Why shall I have Ron Stoppable as my room-mate? I can accept Tara, but why Stoppable?
Barkin: "Because I saw you two quarreling in the Bus."
Bonnie: "Shouldn't this be a good reason NOT to give us the same room?"
Ron (intervening): "Yeah! I won't sleep in the same room of Bonnie!"
Barkin: "Well, at least now you two agree with each other. Isn't that ironic?"
(All the students keep on complaining. Eventually Barkin gets mad, and yells)
Barkin: "I don't wanna hear your moaning voices ANYMORE! You all go in your rooms NOW! And I'll check all the rooms, tonight, so don't even try to disobey me and go to a room which is not yours!"
(The students slowly go away. Between them, Ron and Kim)
Kim (pale): "This… can't be happening… my room-mates are the "chess-trio"! They're the most boring people of all our school!"
Ron (pale): "I have to share my room with Bonnie and Tara…"
(Monique approaches)
Monique: "Hey guys! Guess what the news are!"
Ron: "Your room-mate is a boy? Or maybe two?"
Monique (glowing): "My room-mate is Brick. Only him!"
Ron: "Wow! Lucky!"
Monique (blinking): "And I'm gonna take advantage of this situation, if you know what I mean! But you should know it better than me, right?"
(Ron and Kim blushes.)
Ron: "A-actually we are in different rooms…"
Monique: "What? Kim, didn't you ask the permission to Mr Barkin to share your room with Ron as I told you?"
(Ron looks at Kim, as she blushes more and more.)
Kim: "… no…"
(Ron's face turns sad.)
Ron: "Ok, I think it's time to go to my room"
(Ron leaves, and Monique looks very sad)
Monique: "Sooorry Kim, I said the wrong words…"
Kim: "No, Monique, it's not your fault… I should have asked Barkin…"
Monique: "But why didn't you do it?"
Kim: "Because I couldn't even talk to Ron about it! It's just… too much embarrassing to me! And I'm very afraid of what could happen if we share the same room… I…"
Monique: "Ok, girl, take a breath! There's nothing bad about it! Talk to Ron, he will understand!"
(Room number 16. Ron opens the door and enters the room. It's very beautyful. There are three beds. He choose the closest one to the window, and unpack his luggage. Finally, Rufus comes out of his bed)
Rufus: "Freedom!"
Ron: "Sorry, buddy, but I couldn't let Barkin see you! Now the torture is over!"
(Ron hears some footsteps)
Ron: "… or maybe is just starting!"
End of Second Part
Third chapter coming soon! I hope you enjoyed this chapter. Next one will be much more eventful, promised. But maybe this episode will be composed of 4 chapters… We'll see.
