Hi it's me again sorry about the long wait I've been seconding a story with my friend Mousewolf and haven't had time to update but now I'm updating . Thanks for all the reviews I got 11 so I'm really happy. I don't own anything form the film Labyrinth but I do own anything I have made up. I will only do disclaimers every three chapters from now on so please don't sue me. cowers
Onto the reviews section. Turpentine mind: Formatting? And are you American because I am English and that is how I talk and would you be clearer please. Moonjava: Glad you still like it. Lulubelle: I do know that but I appreciate you pointing it out because I'm hopeless at English grammer. And I like the make believe convo with Jareth. Itsacrystalnothingmore: Is it interesting in a bad way? And I like your new chapter. Mysticalcancer I'm sorry you don't like my next two chapters but that's life. I'll try and improve this one for you. Juliya: Glad you like it. Any one who sees any spelling or grammer mistakes speak up please and everyone will be happy and if you're gonna be critical in your review can you be clear and critical so I understand what you're on about.
Onwards and upwards.
A horse, my kingdom for a horse. Shakespeare sorry I felt like putting that in.
Devious Game
She woke to the sound of Greenday?
"Oy yo yo yo" a voice from behind her cried in greeting. She turned round slowly to find herself in an open plain with some goblins and a sound system.
"What am I doing here? Where's the labyrinth? And hold on a minute what did you just say?" she said in confusion.
"Yo, yo, my man you are seriously stressed. Why did you mention the labyrinth? You destroyed the labyrinth remember." Remarked another goblin in what sounded like a Scottish accent.
"But then why did he bring me here?" She asked slowly.
"To make you his bride of course! Why did you think?" Said a new goblin incredulously. It took a minute for this to sink in to Sarah's mind.
"He tricked me that stuck up insert favourite word. I'll get him for that." She cried "So now does that mean that I have to stay and be his bride if there is no labyrinth to play then he wins immediately." She said a little quieter. Realization beginning to sink in.
"That's it you got it. Hey Billy, she got it." A goblin yelled at another goblin.
"Jerry! Stop yelling in my ear." Said the Billy in a long suffering tone. Then Sarah thought of something.
"Hold on what if you're just another trick to make me give up straight away." She said in glee.
The goblins looked at one another and mumbled together.
"You could be right." Said one goblin who the others rushed to agree with.
"Do you remember how you got here?" She asked quickly before they could realize what Jareth might do to them if he found out.
"Erm… no." they said together. A representative stepped forward and began to start speaking
"Well one minute we were asleep in our beds and the next minute we were out here talking improper English in Scottish accents." He gave a bow and stepped back among the others
"Well can you give me an approximate direction?" She asked. The goblins pointed, unfortunately they all pointed in different directions.
"Well I should have known that would happen" She said with a sigh. And set off in a direction which none of the goblins was pointing in.
"Thankyou for all your help."
Well? What do you think I know it's a bit odd but still do you like it. 12 reviews and I'll put the next one up. All it takes is one person now come on everyone press that nice purple buttonand review all constructive criticism welcome. I might not wait for a review if I get bored so keep an eye out.
Vampirehelsing
a.k.a.
Emmy
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