It took forever but I edited this poem and made it longer…the end may not match the beginning, so I'd like feedback (if anyone cares).


Mistakes:

A youthful mistake,
Something precious lost,
Being reborn
Eternal regret...
A dogs life,
This quest for inner peace...

Nobody to blame but ourselves

Haunting guilt

Eating away

Starving my heart

To feed my mind

No one understands

The pain we feel

The betrayal we faced

It's harder because

The betrayal was ours

And nothing can change

That simple fact…