A/n: sorry it took so long to update. I've had band camp since school ended,

Anakin's Redemption

Chapter 5: The prophecy and the discoveries

''What !"' Obi-Wan didn't understand what master Yoda had said.

''how the prophecy goes this is'' Master Yoda pronounced.

''Master Yoda, how come I nor Anakin was never allowed to read the prophecy. For that matter I couldn't even tell Anakin''

''because we didn't want you or him to know, that is why we defied Qui-Gon so many years ago, secret it was kept in the council and away from you''

''Master Yoda what is the prophecy''

Master Yoda bowed his head. As if praying he chanted this. It was promise of the chosen one. The pledge so many had believed in

''A chosen one there shall be

Found by a master, denied by an apprentice and the council

Tragedy strikes, padawan he will become

Strong in strength, weak in mind

Arrogant and headstrong shall be his weakness

Try hard a master will

To change his ways

Breaking rules behind our backs, loving against our rules

Into darkness he shall fall

But lies shall make him change

Then he shall get the true revenge

Obi-Wan let out a sigh.

''So he will turn back right master Yoda?'' Obi-Wan asked.

''I sure hope so''

Obi-Wan then turned his attention to the screen. Anakin spoke.

''Alright my clones we must act quickly and together. We must gang up on the emperor and together we can destroy him'' He declared.

I will destroy Sideous. I must.

He said this to himself in his head. Over and Over.

He reached the senate building .

Well Anakin here goes nothing. He said to himself.

He sensed something. He tried to shake it off. He sensed ….Padme'

No, not her maybe Obi-Wan but its not her

Anakin entered the senate building right to the main room . with the clones behind his back. Sideous sensed his presence. He turned around

''Lord Vader I presume the temple is under our control''

''I'm not your apprentice any longer Sideous ''

''What did you say lord Vader''

''You don't control me''

''What are you implying?''

''I'm going to end this Empire before it begins, I will bring peace to the galaxy, to the republic.''

Not to the Empire. Anakin thought in his head

Flash back

OBI-WAN: You have allowed this Dark Lord to twist your mind until now . . . until now you have become the very thing you swore to destroy.

ANAKIN: Don't lecture me, Obi-Wan. I see through the lies of the Jedi. I do not fear the dark side as you do. I have brought peace, justice, freedom, and security to my new Empire.

OBI-WAN: Your new Empire?

ANAKIN: Don't make me kill you.

OBI-WAN: Anakin, my allegiance is to the Republic! ... to democracy!.

ANAKIN: If you're not with me, you're my enemy.

OBI-WAN: Only a Sith Lord deals in absolutes. I will do what I must.

End of flashback

Obi-Wan, oh Obi-Wan how I need you now. I'm sorry. I didn't mean those things I said on Mustafar. Anakin though of what Obi-Wan said to him right before he left.

Flashback

OBI-WAN: I have failed you, Anakin. I was never able to teach you to think.

ANAKIN and OBI-WAN confront each other on the lava river.

ANAKIN: I should have known the Jedi were plotting to take over . . .

OBI-WAN: From the Sith! Anakin, Chancellor Palpatine is evil.

ANAKIN: From the Jedi point of view! From my point of view, the Jedi are evil.

OBI-WAN: Well, then you are lost!

ANAKIN: This is the end for you, My Master. I wish it were otherwise.

ANAKIN jumps and flips onto OBI- WAN's platform. The fighting continues again until OBI-WAN jumps toward the safety of the black sandy edge of the lava river. He yells at Anakin.

OBI-WAN: It's over, Anakin. I have the high ground.

ANAKIN: You underestimate my power!

OBI-WAN: Don't try it.

ANAKIN follows, and OBI-WAN cuts his young apprentice at the knees, then cuts off his left arm in the blink of an eye. ANAKIN tumbles down the embankment and rolls to a stop near the edge of the lava.

ANAKIN struggles to pull himself up the embankment with his mechanical hand. His thin leather glove has been burned off. He keeps sliding down in the black sand.

OBI-WAN: (continuing) . . . You were the Chosen One! It was said that you would, destroy the Sith, not join them. It was you who would bring balance to the Force, not leave it in Darkness.

OBI-WAN picks up Anakin's light saber and begins to walk away. He stops and looks back.

ANAKIN: I hate you!

OBI-WAN: You were my brother, Anakin. I loved you.

End of flash back I don't hate you Obi-Wan. You ARE my brother. Always was. Always will be. I love you, I hope some day you'll forgive me. You were my only friend when I came here to live. And you were the only father I ever knew.

A tear fell from Anakin's eyes.

'' I will kill you, Palpantine. You have ruined my life. Now I shall end yours''

Just then from the ceiling came guns. Every single clones was shot down. But none shot at Anakin. He remained safe.

''I will take you down Anakin if I must. I just came from a victory on Master Yoda. I hope this ends the same. Think about it Anakin. Someday you'll be emperor.''

Anakin walked around examining the fallen senate platforms that were thrown during Palpantine's and Yoda's battle.

If Master Yoda lost to him what chance have I ?

Maybe if I join him I could…He then came across …hers

The name label read .''Senator Amidala from Naboo''

This built his strength to a new level. He ignited his light saber. Stared Palpantine in the eye and threw the first blow.

Palpantine blocked it but stared wide-eyed at Anakin. He was not using hatred toward in this battle but the love of Padme'. This strength Anakin had discovered had made him more powerful than Mace, or Yoda, or Palpantine. It made him ''The Chosen One'' . Palpantine was scared. Then he noticed a blue shield growing around Anakin. Palpantine took a strike at it. This shield now protected Anakin. He then realized it. This shield was made from the force. As if the force was protecting Anakin making sure he wins. Just then he heard

''Anakin let me help you!''

Anakin and Palpantine turned around and saw a blue light saber ignited. They saw

Obi-Wan Kenobi

A/n awful cliff hanger huh? I wrote the prophecy up at the top that's why it stinks .I have the next chapter almost done which I think is the last. I might change it. I skipped over the part of Obi-Wan deciding to go help Anakin. Because I wanted to make it dramatic when obi-wan ran in and I really didn't know what he would say to Yoda or anything like that. And I like it better this way. I'm not posting the last chapter till I get reviews so. REVIEW!. Lol. Thanx everyone who has reviewed

A/n2:could someone tell me if you think I've kept the characters true to the movies,I really don't know how im doing on that

A/n 3: if you want the script heres the link http/scripts.