Hey peoples! So, I thought that Part Two was going to be
the last part of this chapter, but I decided to add another. AND
IF YOU HAVE TIME TO READ THIS, YOU HAVE TIME TO REVIEW FOR IT! I
have my computer enabled so I can get anonymous reviews and
everything. So please review, it keeps me writing! No
flames though. If you flame, there has to be a reason behind
it. It can't be that you just hate the writer or the story, there
has to be a perfectly valid reason for a flame. So no flames,
okay? And I know that this took a long time to come out, but I
couldn't get on the computer for a while, so I couldn't update.
So, I'm really and truly sorry about that, and I'll try and update
tomorrow too so that I can make up for not updating. Oh,
and UPDATES WILL NEVER COME ON THE WEEKENDS. I'm almost never on
the computer when my parents are home, so I can't update on the
weekends. I'm terribly sorry.
LAST PART'S INSPIRATION: Jesse McCartney's songs "She's No You" and "Beautiful Soul" inspired Part Two. I guess they just seemed to fit with it.
THIS PART'S INSPIRATION: Jesse McCartney's CD. I dunno why, but when I bought it Friday night, I was totally inspired.
Review Responses
Lunar Heart Crystal:Thanks for reviewing. And no, he hates it for some unknown reason. You can think of your own, I'm to lazy to come up with one.
Sore Wa Himitsu Desu teehee: Thankies! Your reviews are always so nice!
Samanthe2121: Thanks for reviewing! Yes, Rae/Rob is very nasty! Yuck:shudders: How can people like that pairing? It's so wrong!
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TheRealStarfire: Um, okay Nightwing and Moonfire are both 15 and they're twins, Arella's 15 and she has a twin brother that stayed in the future for some reason, Dash is 16, and Wasp is 16 too. If you have any other questions, please ask! I am more than willing to answer people's questions! Thanks for your review!
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thugette90: Hey chica! OMG OMG OMG! Thanks for your review! I like how long they are all the time! You actually give me some stuff to talk about! Short reviews are okay, but the longer reviews rock, you know what I mean? I bet you do. OMG! Never doubt that you're a great author! You're so much better than me! Don't ever doubt yourself or your abilities, you'll be amazed by what you can do!...I have NO idea where that came from. Was that actually WISE? Crap! I said something wise! EEEEEK! I'm getting old:faints: Did you know that the minute you start living, you start dying? My dad told me that. One part of me wants to believe him, the other part of me wants to be all "Yeah right!" But I would never do that to my daddy! I'm such a daddy's girl to tell you the truth, it's kinda scary. LoL! I loved your Rob/Rae-killing-two-birds-with-one-stone comment! Except we don't want to kill Robin, cuz then me and Starfire would be in tears! I sorta think Robin's hot for a cartoon character. Don't tell anybody please! He's my second favorite character, Starfire's my absolute favorite. And they're so cute together! Yes! DAMN YOU BEAST BOY! That was just a random character appearance by Kitten, cuz I had to get them to kiss somehow! Plus I sorta thought it would be funny even though it really wasn't. You are NOT pitiful! Stop putting yourself down:gets out her hatchet: I'll chop off your hands if you don't stop! Grrrrrrrr! The live-action movie might not be bad, me and my best friend Sarah will have to see it together. It was so weird the way we became friends! I was new in History (actually, I was new to the whole school) and I was really bored after this quiz we had, so I was drawing a picture of Raven (I am a terrible drawer. I can design clothes and stuff and they're pretty good, I just can't draw people even though lots of people say I can) and she was all "Is that Raven? Oh my god! She's my favorite!" And I was all "You like the Teen Titans?" And she was like "All my friends except Caitlin like the Teen Titans." And I was all "Starfire's my favorite." And then we just became friends. It was so weird! I love enthusiasm! It's sorta my thing when I wake up in the morning and I'm home alone, but then when my parents get home, I'm all blah. I just can't be all happy and talkative around them, cuz then they're all "You talk too much." And then, when I'm quiet, they're like "Why aren't you talking? Why are you so quiet? Is something wrong?" I just like to spend a lot of my time day dreaming about things that could happen between Robin and Starfire. And my fictions. And my old crush in Texas. And other things. I just love to think, and write, and listen to music. Thank you for reviewing! Your reviews mean so much.
anwen: More moments to come, so don't worry! I liked your idea very, very much. I didn't get your review for Chapter Three Part Two until after I posted Part Three, so I'm sorry I didn't respond! Your one-shot was great! I left a review for you. I'm going to save your idea for the epilouge as a sort of surprise. Is that okay with you? Thanks for reviewing!
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Chapter Three Part Three: Life and Vacuum Cleaners
"Life is like a vacuum cleaner, it sucks!" Some random commercial on the radio
The sky was a dull, lifeless smoky color, dampened by clouds. It had been one week since Starfire and Robin's kiss. They were sitting on the couch watching a movie with Nightwing and Wasp. Raven was meditating by the windows which were covered in rain drops; Arella was reading a rather large book; and Moonfire had disappeared after dinner again.
"I've done it!" Moonfire announced dramatically, as she walked into the ops center (a/n: I did some research and found out that their living room/kitchen type thing is called the operations center, so we're just gonna call it ops). She had locked herself away for five days, only being seen when her brother forced her to come out for meals. Nobody knew what she had been doing, but they were all guessing that they would find out soon, even if they didn't want to. "I searched every criminal database from every single police force from our time. I couldn't find anything. I searched every criminal database known to Earth, I couldn't find anything. So, naturally, I decided to start searching criminal databases from other planets in the future, and I found it! I found every bit of information we need!"
"Yeah, what are you talking about?" Arella said barely glancing up from the tome that was held in her hands.
"This." Moonfire replied, dumping a huge pile of papers into Starfire's lap. "Go ahead, read it."
"Why does she get to read it?" Beast Boy whined from the kitchen, where he was busy making a tofu hot dog. "Why can't I read it?"
"Can you read Tamaranian?"
"Oh."
"Tamaranian? What is this?" Starfire asked, as she flipped through the pages.
"Timeline is a Tamaranian. Or, at least part Tamaranian. The reason he's come to Earth is to steal a priceless heirloom to the royal family. The only priceless relic. I'm assuming you know what it is?"
"Actually, we have several priceless heirlooms." Starfire replied as she scanned the first page. "And what do you mean he's part Tamaranian?"
"Aunt Blackfire married some dude from the Centauri police. It sure as heck wasn't for love, that's for sure. The connections keep her from being arrested and convicted of crime. She's comitted several crimes against the Tamaranian government already, but her husband keeps helping her worm her way out of it. Anyways, this heirloom. It's in your posession, that's all I know, and Timeline's out to steal it."
"In my posession? I don't have-" Starfire cut herself off and her eyes widened in realization. "The Ring! If that falls into Blackfire's hands, she could- dear X'Hal! We've got to do something!"
"Relax, I've got it all figured out. I have a plan."
Nightwing cleared his throat and glared at her.
"Oh, right. It's Nightwing's plan." Moonfire muttered, turning a violent shade of crimson.
"Thank you, sister. I have made a duplicate of the Ring of X'Hal. It is exactly the same as yours, except it is not authentic. We plant this somewhere for him to find, he discovers it, we catch him, we can go home, and you may go back to your normal lives." Nightwing said.
"It's simple, yet it'll work." Arella said. "We tested it out on Dash ten times. He fell for it every single time."
"Hey, where's Cyborg?" Robin asked suddenly.
"He's out on a blind date with my mom." Wasp said. "I set it up."
"How do we know when Timeline'll strike?" Beast Boy wondered.
"In two days." was Moonfire's response from the refrigerator where she was searching for something that wasn't blue and fuzzy. "You really need to clean out this fridge."
"I'M BAAAAAACK!" Cyborg hollered as he bounded into the room.
"Hey, Cy. How was your 'date?'" Beast Boy said.
"It was fine." Cy replied, nobody saw the sly smile that crept across his face.
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Okay, so that wasn't my favorite chapter, but you needed some background information on Timeline. You found out his origin (Blackfire's his mother), and he'll make his debut in the next chapter. You'll also find out more about the Ring of X'Hal in the next chapter. It does belong to Starfire, and Blackfire's after it, so I tell you why in Chapter Four. I know that this was short, but it was part of a whole chapter, and I didn't split it up evenly when I wrote it. I'm really sorry it was so short. Anywho, please send in a review! They keep me writing!
AUTHOR'S NEWS (VERY VERY IMPORTANT): I'll be coming out with a new story as soon as I finish this. It's an AU fic, and I'm very excited about it's debut. It's going to have my favorite pairings, with a lot of RobStar moments, some BBRae fluff, and a tiny bit of CyBee. Keep reading for more information on it!
