This is my first ever fanfic so any critics are welcome . Please give me constructive comments so that i can improve my stories. Well this is chapter 1 and i don't think it's all that good but it's just introductions so of. So here goes! Enjoy and review!
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"Tonight's job was easy as pie. I would have thought they'd at least put up defences worth using my effort."
Dark had just finished his night's round of thiefing and was just about to retreat home. He decided to stop flying for the night and walk the rest of the way home, enjoying the cool breeze brushing against his face.
Then as he turned a corner, something bumped into him causing him to stumble back a few paces.
"Watch where you're going idiot!"
Dark was stunned.
"What the-? Who the hell are you? If I remember correctly YOU was the one who bumped into me and I didn't even hear a sorry…"
The girl just shrugged, then carried on walking. Dark was furious. How dare she do that? Who exactly does she think she is? He grabbed her arm and spun her around.
"Just wait right there little girl, you're not-" He was cut short.
"Get your hands off me NOW. If you don't I'll scream."
Dark laughed to himself. Go on then, I know exactly what to do if you do.
The girl look bewildered. "God you're a freak. Now get off my arm before I do something you won't like."
Dark was starting to be amused by this little array.
"Now what exactly can a little girl like you do to the Phantom Thief?"
"The Phantom who now?"
Dark gasped, "You don't know who I am?"
"Er no, I don't belive I do. Now just get the hell off me."
And with that, the girl tossed Dark's arm over her shoulder and threw him to the floor. Dark didn't know what hit him.
"OOF-…Why you little…"
"Don't call me a little girl! ARGH! You don't even know me!"
She was about to stamp her foot down on Dark's face but he managed to just roll out of the way in time and got up to his feet. He thought this girl was unlike any of the others, this girl was different. She didn't become infatuated when she laid eyes on him or did she start stuttering when she spoke to him. This girl didn't even seem to fancy him! And on top of all of that, she didn't even have a clue who he was! Who is this girl? He thought to himself.
"Can you stop staring at me like that? It creeps me out"
Dark hadn't even realised that he was staring at her, just inches away from her face. She has the most captivating brown eyes. Dark couldn't believe what he had just thought. Damn it, what's wrong with me? He could feel his chest starting to become tighter and with every intake of breath he found it harder and harder for the air to reach his lungs. Argh, shit this pain is too much. I need to go back NOW. He was starting to black out, everything was twirling out of control and he started to have the most excruciating pain is his head.
Thepain had eased and now Dark awoke to find himself in an unfamiliar surrounding. He felt like he was lying on top of silk sheets and the pillow felt as soft as feathers.
"Ah, so you're awake now finally. Here drink some of this, it'll make you feel better."
She handed him the cup of steaming hot herbal remedy. Dark could already smell the rancid odour emitting from the cup.
"Heh, no way am i drinking that stuff. I think it's time for me to leave anyways."
The girl looked slightly taken aback. How rude! I take him home and he didn't even thank me for my hospitality. She was now shaking with anger, her fists clenched ready tostrike out.
Dark smiled, he knew what he had to do.
"Thank you. Now i must leave. WIZ!"
And with that he jumped out of the window and flew off into the night sky.
The girl was shocked. He thanked me? And where those wings i saw? Oh my god...i think i need some sleep.
