Sloane Miette
2005-08-02
ch 1, signed

The concept isn't bad, really, although because her father is Logan and her mother Lady Deathstrike, it's only presumable that Magenta would also have regenerative capabilities.
Yes, but from x-men and sky high you Know that you can't choose your powers maybe it has somthing to do with with a distante relitive i'll ex-plain later on

Also, I'm very confused about what verse you're going with with Lady Deathstrike. Movieverse, Comicverse, and TVverse are all extremely different, and I'm not sure which one to follow with your character.
It's my own A.U verse that connects a little with "X-men evolution Verse"

If you clone someone, as you say Oyama's late father did to Wolverine, X-23 would absolutely -have- to be a boy. That's just the way cloning technology works. Besides, S.H.E.I.L.D wasn't the project that gave Logan his adamantium skeleton. That was Weapon X.
Well it was a girl in all the comics and shows, and i forgot that weopon X and shield were different.

Th reason Lady Deathstrike is trying to kill Logan (in comic verse) is because her father devised the technology to fuse adamantium to bone, and she wants Wolverine's skeleton. She feels it belongs to her. Logan was never in a relationship with Yuriko, but was in love with -Mariko- Yashida, whose father he killed for criminal activities.
But mine isn't the comic version

Your grammar starts out tolerable, ir not a little on the weak side, and promptly dissolves in insensibility. You need a good grammar/spelling program on your computer or a beta, because it's difficult to read.
This chapter will be better i'll ceck the grammar

It's not bad, and I look forward to the festival, but it would be greatly appreciated if you went through some grammar and spelling correction. Please don't take this as a flame, I'm just trying to help out. :

Thanks a will put more info in the next chapter and fix up the first one

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competition of schools

Disclaimer: I don't own sky high or X-men

Chapter 2

X-23's hate

X-mansion, X-23's room

It had been a few months sense x-23 found her way back to the x-mansion. She still had trouble controlling her emotions, every now and then she would show signs of anger sadness and greif, she wasn't happy very often these days and could only show the bad side of her personality to all her "friends" she never did or would ever think of any of the x-men friends. she always deep down, real disliked them and there constently overshadowing her every time she acted up. ' they only keep me here cause logans my father' she thought as she sat on her thin pullout matters that she called her bed.she looked around the pale dark room and felt tears weld up in her eye's. 'not now porf. X just called the school down to the confrence room' she always cryed when she relised her liveing space at the mansion. Her cramped and cold room seemed to be closeing around her when a voice called to her "What are you doing kid," She looked at her door way and there stood her "father" wolverine/logan.

She had subconsciously had crueled into a ball when she had started crying, this was a pathetic state for any even her father to see her in. "Prof. needs us down in his conference room, lets go down to see what he want's." finished logan. X-23 got off of her bed and walked up to, and past logan in the doorway and continued down the hallways and stairwells to the bottom of the mansion. then through a hidden elevator to the basement level. The door slid open and revaeled a chrome hallway filled with circular doors with an engraved X that split in the middle. It all looked the same and X-23 never could tell them apart. only way she could tell which one was the conference room is the shadow's moveing back and forth that she could see in between the door's crack. "ah, X-23 glad you could join us," said Prof. Xavier "well, i just was telling the group about what i have just found." he gestured for her and the rest of the students to come closer to hear what he was saying, " I have contacted another school for super powered kids in america. Well, i talked with there principle Mrs. Powers and we've aranged a meeting,or festival of 'Super Heros' " finished Xavier.

A few students looked surprised and a few looked like they could care less. X-23 looked confused, " So, vere iz zis Sky High?" asked Kurt. "it's a floating school miles above a Suburban area near California. We'll be heading there this weekend, i know that it's short notice but we'll be meeting them soon so put on your best behavior,all of you" He added. X-23 looked around at thefaces of the students and almost felt happy for a while. That was until she saw logan in the corner looking like he was in deep thought. 'Yuriko said somthing about that school and our other kid's with her.' he thought hard on the fact that if his daughter had gotten super powers then she might go to that school and visiting it my be dangerous if yuriko showed up to the party and a fight broke out. they both shared the love of fighting and that passed to his clone, then why not there birth child also.

Sky High, Bored room

"Mutants? They're not mutants, they're super heros. Why don't they just say that there hero's" asked Coach boomer in a loud voice that sounded like he was showing-off to the other teachers. "Well, were they come from there powers aren't aproved of as much as the superhero's we teach here" Said Mrs.powers. Prof. Xaviar all of a sudden appeared in front of the sky high staff in the from of a sketch blue tinted hollogram in the center of the room. "Ah, Prof. X glad to see you've made it to the meeting" said Mr. Medulla. Just then Jean grey appeared in the hollogragh next to the Prof. "You most be Miss. Grey, xaviar has mentioned you when he first contacted us, He says your his best student, Your a telepath right?" Finished Powers. " Ya, thats me I'll be graduating next year. But Im' glad that I'll be hear for the festival." "well, we were thinking of makeing it a compitition of powers you know as a side for the festival, kids test there powers against eachother and have fun battleing it out with eachother." said Boomer. "i dont think that-" jean was cut of by the Prof. "I think that that is a great plan, It would be great for the student to practice for when they leave the school." He said. "we'll set up the plan of activities the day befor the compitition." said Powers gladly. "this is going to be great," said Prof. X. Unkown to the staff and jean his eye's started to glow with a yellowish tent.