Thanks so much for all the reviews!!:
RVG, Jieli, Pockygirl-2002, Shaolin 10, FearOfDying, Hiei Dragon Girl, Master Ruby, Frankie, Pharaoh'sJewel, (asterisk, tilde, apostrophe)Mrs. Ishtar(apostrophe, tilde, asterisk), Disturbedvixen, Seto'sFan, Naphatarie, Demented Insane Spirit, Tikaru, Sorceress Vanessa
I'm very sorry if I spelt your pen name wrong or forgot you completely. It's not intentionally. (for Mrs. Ishtar, as some of you may know, you can no longer put asterisks [the little stars] or the tildes [squiggly lines] in fics because they get erased. That was my creative way of putting them there…sort of)
I guess that even though the whole fic's dedicated to Demented Insane Spirit and Shaolin 10, I shall dedicate this chapter to Master Ruby because she's my friend and this chapter is about Seto (who she happens to like). Anyways, onto the chapter. Please review. Sorry that I take forever to update.
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My Life Is Slowly Fading
Mokuba; my reason to keep going on
Yet I think he'd be better off with me gone
Lies and tears, always told, never fall
I can't even remember how I lost it all
Forever misfortune follows me 'round
It creeps up behind me, not making a sound
Sometimes the pain, it erases what's real
So I then cut myself, knowing that it will heal
Limb by limb, I am falling apart
Often more darkness surrounds my heart
Will I get rid of my past, erase all the hate?
Let me attempt to before it's too late
Year after year, I fail once again
Forget all this pain, I just want it to end
After feeling the worst, I just want to go
Death will come soon, and everyone will know
I can't deny it, my true colors will show
No turning back, but the future looks bleak
Gripping to fantasy, I can't help but feel weak...
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Just a friendly reminder: Please review. Any suggestions would be very welcome. And the reason the last lines are kinda messed up is because I'm an idiot who can't count and thought the message was 20 letters instead of 19, so I had to have three lines rhyme instead of two at one point. If that made no sense, just forget everything I said.