okay, i re-did this because i was so young when i started and i think im better at writing now.

The Hanyou

Chapter One

The Accident

Mieko Kinomoto looked down fearfully. She was rock climbing; her sister hadmade her. Mieko enjoyed climbing, but there was just the little fact of her being terrified of high places. Mieko was currently climbing the highest wall there was.

Mieko flipped her ponytail over her shoulder and remembered that fateful day...

"Hey!" shouted Sakura Kinomoto to her sister. They were outside at a nearby park. Mieko was sitting on the swings by herself, which was a common sight. Sakura was alone as well, which was an odd sight considering that she was very popular.

Sakura had long sleek black hair that nearly reached her waist. It always looked perfect. Her figure was as perfect as a thirteen year-old's body could get. Sakura was athletic, but had somehow kept her white glow. Her smile was white and her teeth were straight. (Thanks to some retainers in the second grade.) Mieko was nothing like her sister. Mieko was about average and her hair reached her shoulders in a wavy mess. She was terrible at sports, with the exception of rock climbing and swimming. Her smile was fairly white and her teeth were slightly crooked.

"Hey," Sakura repeated, stepping up to her younger sister. "Are you doing anything now?" Mieko raised an eyebrow before shaking her head. Did it look as though she was doing anything?

"Hey, let's play a game!" Sakura grinned. That was odd, Sakura hadn't wanted to play a game with Mieko since she was twelve years old. "But..." Oh, of course. There had to be a 'but.' "The loser has to do whatever the winner says for and entire day!" Mieko shrugged and began to swing back and forth once more.

"I don't really care," Mieko said. Sakura grabbed her younger sister's hand and jerked her off of her seat.

"Okay, then we'll play Speed!" Sakura told her. (a/n: speed is a card game. i cant explain it now, but if someone reviews, i can write back and explain.) Figures. Sakura was a pro at that game. But Mieko was getting better. "Let's say... best out of three!"

Of course Sakura had won. If she hadn't, Mieko wouldn't be in this predicament as of now.

Mieko looked down. Everything looked so small and blurred. She could barely hear the sounds of her sister, yelling at her to get to the top. The only sounds that Mieko could hear was her pounding heart. It beat loud in her numb ears.

'Almost there!' though Mieko excitedly to herself. 'If I can press that button...' Mieko reached for it and --

BUZZ

"Yes!" shrieked Mieko. She let go and let herself fall limp. The harness began to slowly lower her down automatically. Mieko blew on her red, sore and blistered fingers.

SNAP

A large snap was heard. Mieko's breath caught in her throat as she began to fall at a rapid speed. She was engulfed by shock and said nothing.

'I'M FALLIN! I CAN'T STOP! I'M GONNA DIE!' thought Mieko in horror. Mieko Kinomoto, ten years old, dies in a rock climbing accident. She closed her eyes and awaited for her death.

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