I'm working on chapter one and I need some help :

could someone be my beta? (chapter one in one or two weeks)

could you tell my different types of Dark Creatures like werewolf, vampire, dark elves, thestrals…

what do you prefer: Harry's revenge on the Order with the help of some deatheaters or will he just quit the Order to be on his own Side?

Answer to the only review I've had on FFnet:

HPDM-Slash-Rocks : Thanks a lot for your review ! I must say that I didn't know if I had to continue this story on FFnet because of the lack of review but with yours, I'm really happy so I'll continue to post it on FFnet (you can find it on The Silver Snitch too). As you said that my wording was a little of, I want to know were… I'm sorry for not writing for so long but as you know (if you saw my profile) I've a lot of stories to write or to translate. And I didn't have any inspiration. But yet I've had time to think about it so I'm writing the first chapter. I must say that this story will be really dark even if I don't know yet how I will end it… but I won't say more because I want a little suspense in this story. It suffices to know that there will be a betrayal that will conduct Harry on a dark way. But I won't say who yet even if I know it… I think that I'll post one or two chapters and if I don't have any answer to my beta call then I'll ask you if you could do it… So thanks for your future help…