Yes, I have Author Notes. I wonder if that's breaking the rules, but I don't give a crud. (rebel me, YAY REBEL ME)
I thought this oneshot was good, especially since it WAS my first BB/Rea fanfiction. Although they seem albeit OOC…it was good, and I have pretty high standards to calling a piece of my own work: good.
That's all I have to write for Author Notes, since there isn't much to say about this…but I DO have review replies. And guess what, I GOT MY FIRST FLAME! YAY ME! I consider it a flame, and you'll see why. (:
Note: I listened to the Spirit soundtrack while writing this. Oo;; I've been listening to the soundtrack for unhealthy amounts of time. Dunno why, I haven't listened to it for a while. But it DOES help you write, and…somehow…ups your vocabulary. ;; I know, very strange. …o-o
Review Replies(italics the review and normal review replies)
InkBlotted
Chakra: Aww,
fluffyness! )
Thanks, I love fluff,
fluff's my middle name! Well, not really…(P.S. I FINNALLLY
decided to read a few fanfictions of yours, you're a heck a
talented, a lot better than me)
Matt-Roinette(my first flame):
Spacing
is your best friend, not that I'm trying to hint anything here, but
you need to space so it's easier to read.
Ok,
I know you're probably like: WTF! (if you're reading this) but
the reason I consider your review a flame is that it said nothing
GOOD about my fanfiction. Nothing at all…but don't think I won't
keep your "constructive criticism" in mind. I will try and space
double on here, since fanfiction in a brat and scrunches all the
writing. So, you win fame and fortune for being my first flame! Well,
not really…
Dragon Gurl: one
word. Wait, make that four words: Abosolutely incredible. And
beautiful.
Four words: Thank you very
much!
bmd: wow
that was really good. I think you dont have to add any more
because that was really ending. It may seem short, but thats as
long as it needed to be
Aw, thanks.
Windy Days:
Fascinating! I loved it!
Yea, I know, huh? Just kidding!
Thankyou for your review
The Ubu: That was cute! I love little well written one-shots like this. You did a very good job, bravo!
Keep up the good work!
Ubu
Thank you!
–giggle- I will try to keep up the…good work.
Sorry if I missed any reviews(stupid e-mail system), thanks to all!
Things I will keep in mind: Space more(really need to work on that Oo) and try to put more depth in my poems, even though I haven't had much "life experience" so…yea…
