I know it looks short but it really is worth it. I hope you will all look for the sequal. Enjoy the ending.
Her eyes fluttered madly as she attempted to lift her heavy lids. She groaned and writhed as a sudden shock of pain flowed through her body. Her eyes allowed things to be seen only through a thin crack of the lids. Once her vision cleared. She shifted her eyes around the room. It was white not to much. She didn't have a very large field of vision. She attempted to move her hands and feet but only succeeded in wiggling her toes and fingers. The pain hit her again. It began at the lower left of her rib cage and then welled up into an explosion of pain. She would rather be dead then in this kind of agony. She tried to call out to someone but her voice was hoarse and nothing but a squeak was emitted. She writhed and moaned and shifted trying to escape the pain. Just as it all seemed too terrible to live with she heard a noise. Pitter patter. She reallocated her gaze to the wide window to her right. A drip then two… then many. The rain poured down. It was almost like it was telling her to hold on. She knew somehow this would all be worth it in the end. She heard the door to where ever she was creaking open. A tall lanky man walked towards her. He wore white. He spoke in smooth comforting voice "well Miss Tonie you're finally awake…. How do you feel?
Hope you have enjoyed this story as much asI enjoyed writing it. Remember the sequal is fever till you sizzle. Muhasz sexy people.