The recent chapter (ch.9) I got a review asking why was I so mean.I didn't think it was mean.I just thought it was very sad and emotional.Besides,Haruka and Michiru were supposed to be gone way back in ch.7 or 8.Actually really..Chapter 8 I think..Well not both but one of them were supposed to die.
SISM:I read your updated story.I love it.Also,thanks for keeping up with this chapter and I think it was you that read one of my other stories and wanted me to keep that one going.I think it was Lovers and Friends.
AedialBrisinger:You have been reading my story since the first chapter! Thank you so very much for keeping up with it.
Sailor Dream:Thanks for the review and you introduced to me to your great anime forum.For anyone else its:
Kuramas Sweetie:You have also seemed to keep up with my story.Thank you!
Anyways, for anyone who wants to read the changed chapter you can read it now.This starts off from when Usagi said yes to Seiya.It goes all the way up to the point where I stopped'
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"Awww...thats so sweet!"Minako said watching the two from a corner with Yaten,Taiki and Ami."I can't wait until I get married!"Yaten heard this and glanced at her from the corner of his eye.He continued to keep the camera on Seiya and Usagi but stared at Minako.
"Ami what do you think about it?"There was no answer from the blue-haired girl."Ami?"Minako turned around to find both of them gone."Yaten!Ami and Taiki are gone!"Yaten quickly turned off the camera and turned around.
"Taiki!"Yaten and Minako went running towards Seiya and Usagi and ended their moment.
"Seiya!Usagi!"Minako screamed.The couple got up from their position on the ground.The two looked at Yaten and Minako.
"Are you all spying again?"Seiya asked slipping the ring on Usagi's finger.
"Wait..Where is Ami and Taiki?"Usagi asked after Seiya put the ring on her finger.Minako glanced at the ring and smiled at her but then wiped the smile from her face.
"They are gone!"Yaten said hiding the camera."We turned around and they were gone and we came and found you two on the ground while looking for them"
The night started to get darker and the stars and the moon started to dissappear.T.V's inside of stores and on buildings started to come on.Usagi looked around keeping her guard.
"Sailor Senshi..."Usagi turned around to see Mika on the T.V."You are always there to save the innocent...Will you come save two geniuses?Mizuno Ami and Kou Taiki..One regular girl and a retired idol..What will the Sailor Senshi do"
Usagi looked at the T.V in horror as it went off."Ami..Taiki.."Minako also stared at the T.V.Usagi started to back away slowly."If..If only..I would've defeated her while I could...They would be safe right now"
"Moon Eternal Make Up!
"Usagi!Venus Crystal Power! Make Up"
"Healer Star Power! Make Up"
"Fighter Star Power! Make Up"
Moon started to run towards Galaxy Television.Venus,Maker and Fighter followed."Sailor Moon!Wait up!"Venus yelled trying to get her to slow down.
'So much for this being the perfect night...'Fighter thought to herself as she kept running.
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Moon stopped running when she arrived at Galaxy Television.Venus looked around and seen it looked darker than all the other places."This place looks familiar"
"It's where we fought Galaxia,Venus."Moon said."Looks like we have another battle."Moon looked into the distance and seen two figures."Look!It's Neptune and Uranus!"Moon tried to run towards them but bumped into a barrier.Moon screamed and sent back to the other senshi.Fighter ran and caught her."Thank you"
"No problem."Fighter smiled and put her down.
"Thats so romantic..."Uranus laughed and put her hand in the air."This is the end Sailor Moon"
"World Shaking"
Fighter jumped in front of all the senshi and attacked.
"Star Serious Laser!"
Uranus' attack was much stronger than Fighter's.Uranus' attack hit all the senshi who were thrown back.
"Don't get tired so quickly.."Neptune raised her hands next and attack.
"Deep Submerge"
All the senshi had moved except Venus.She was still on the ground and waiting for the attack to hit her.Healer ran and pushed her out the way just barely missing the attack herself.
"You are quite fast..But not fast enough.."Mika appeared out of nowhere."Sailor Moon..I believe this senshi belongs to you.."Mika laughed at Moon's expression as Pluto being killed appeared on the T.V.
"Pluto.."Moon got up and started to run towards Mika.There was also a barrier surrounding her.Moon was blasted and slid a couple of feet on the ground.
"Sailor Moon..Do you really care about your friends"
"Y..Yes..I d..do.."Moon said weakly as she got up and dusted herself off.
"I have a proposition..If you give up..You will recieve all of your friends back...Even the ones that are deciesed..."
Moon turned around and looked at the evil Sailor Uranus and Neptune.Than she looked back at Venus,Fighter and Healer.
"Sailor Moon..Don't do this..You have so much to look forward to."Venus said walking towards her and putting a hand on her shoulder.Sailor Moon shook her head.Mika looked down on the senshi below.
"Is that your final answer Sailor Moon?"Moon nodded her head."Fine then..Uranus!Neptune!Attack them!"Uranus and Neptune turned towards the four senshi and were ready to attack.
"Uranus...Neptune...What have I done wrong to make you turn against me in this way..."Moon started to walk towards them.
"Sailor Moon!No!"Fighter yelled hoping she would stop.
"We're not like Pluto...Atleast you know one of us were thinking of you.She died because her alliegence was not to Sin!"Neptune explained.
"Deep Submerge"
Moon got hit full force by the attack but did not stop walking.
"You have such an ambition"
"World Shaking"
Moon also got hit by this attack hard.
"Star Sensitive Inferno"
"Star Serious Laser"
"Love and Beauty Shock"
The attacks hit Uranus and Neptune hard and they both fell to the ground.
"Shabon Spray Freezing"
"Star Gentle Uterus"
The extra two attacks both hit the two and they remained on the ground for a while.
"Maker!Mercury!"Moon ran to them both and hugged them."How did you do it"
"Well.."Mercury started before Maker attacked Moon.
"Star Gentle Creator!"Moon went blasting back and knocked into Venus.Moon rolled off of Venus and kneeled on the ground.
"Maker!What the hell is the matter with you?"Healer screamed with anger showing in her eyes.
"We are here for Sin..Those two have been replaced.."Mercury said glancing at the battered and weak Uranus and Neptune.Moon glanced at the two and stared.
"Uranus..Neptune"
"We're not dead yet"
"Space Sword Blaster"
Uranus ran towards Maker and Mercury.Maker caught the sword with ease and threw the other senshi back.
"I'm afraid this is the end..Sailor Uranus.."Moon stood up quickly and started to run towards Uranus but Fighter grabbed her hand.
"Onegai Fighter!Let me go"
"-Reflection!"Neptune attacked before Maker could get there and sent her back to Mercury.
"Good shot Neptune.."Neptune's eyes widened when she heard Mika's voice behind her.Mika had a long sword in her hand.
"No!"Uranus tried to attack but it was too late.Mika had already sent the sword piercing through Neptune's body."Michiru.."Uranus had tears coming from her eyes.The now dying Michiru fell on the ground with her eyes opened in shock.Michiru started to cough out blood and reached for Uranus."Michiru.."Uranus crawled over to the girl and held her hand.
"Uranus...Ai..Shi..Teru.."Blood was now at the corner of Michiru's lip's and going down Uranus' leg.
"Aishiteru Michiru..Onegai..Don't leave me.."Uranus held on to Michiru tightly as she started to fade away.The other senshi just looked at the scene playing out before their eyes.Moon's tears spilled out onto the ground despite her attempt to hide them.
"So..You miss your love?"Mika laughed as she raised the sword above Uranus' head."You can die too"
"Uranus!"Moon screamed out as she watched Mika start to lower the sword down.All within a quick motion Uranus' sword was covered in blood.Mika let out a ear peircing scream as blood started to pour down from her body.
"I have dirtied my hands in blood.."Uranus said as she wiped the blood from her sword.Fighter,Maker,Healer and Venus looked on in shock.
"Da..Da..Damn you..Sailor Senshi..."Mika struggled to say while falling to the ground.
"Mika..didn't have to die such a cruel death..."Moon said looking at the girls body."There could've been another way"
"Princess...Always looking out for the other people...Even the ones that try and take your life."Uranus smiled."You are so innocent..Koneko.."
"Sailor Moon..Do you still believe you could've saved that girl!She is killing your senshi in front of your very eyes!"Healer said with her eyes widened in shock.
"Yes Healer..I do.I do not wish to dampen my hand with another's blood."Moon said standing up."Even if they have done me wrong"
"Odango.."Fighter whispered to herself as she and the others begun to stand up.
"Even if it means your friends or your life in the process?"Maker asked.
"Yes..Two wrongs just simply cannot make a right."(I love that saying..)
"Come on!We have to save the others,Sailor Moon!"Venus said smiling at Moon.
"Right!"Moon turned to Uranus."Please help us"
"Okay Koneko."Uranus smiled and joined the small group of senshi heading into Galaxy T.V.
"Did you forget about us?"The senshi turned around to the evil Mercury and Maker.
"Oh yeah..Those two"
"Star Sensitive"
"Wait!Healer don't!"Moon jumped infront of Healer.
"Sailor Moon!Get out the way!We have to finish them now!"Healer said pushing Moon but she wouldn't budge.
"No Healer.."Moon turned around to face Mercury and Maker."There's another way"
"You can't defeat us!"Mercury said attacking Moon.
"Shine Aqua Illusion"
Moon slid back a little but didn't fall.
"Star Serious Laser"
The attack hit Mercury and sent her back into the wall.Mercury got back up real quickly and glared at Fighter.
"So you are willing to lose your life for the one you love"
"Of course!"Fighter said preparing for another attack.
"Love..A foolish word..."Maker said laughing at Fighter.
"Demo..Maker..You and Mercury are in love.."Moon started to walk towards them but Venus grabbed her hand and shook her head.
"Me and her are no where in love!We hardly know eachother!We are just allies trying to destroy the Sailor Senshi for Sin."Maker said.
"Demo Maker..You are also Sailor Senshi!"Venus said thinking about Maker's words.
"Hai..You are correct Venus."Mercury had gotten up from her posistion on the wall."We are also Sailor Senshi..But protected by Sin"
"Star Gentle Uterus"
Maker attacked Venus but Healer jumped in the way.
"Healer!"Venus caught the falling girl and held her.
"It's alright..I'm okay.."Healer stood up and looked at Maker.
"What is your problem?"Fighter asked.
"They are not weak like you all are."The senshi looked up to see a smiling Sin."Let's give these senshi a tour,shall we"
"A tour?"Venus asked wondering what Sin meant.
"Lets begin!"Maker yelled attacking Moon first.
"Star Gentle Uterus"
Moon screamed as she got blasted into Figher and both of them got knocked into somewhere dark.Fighter held on to Moon as both of them looked around.
"Where are we?"Moon asked.
"I have no clue"
"Welcome to your tour."Fighter and Moon looked around confused,wondering where the voice was coming from."You may not survive.."The evil laughing dissappeared and there was a circle of youma's surrounding them.
"I remember these youma's.."Moon observed and looked at all of them.Fighter looked at her confused.
"What do you mean"
"When I first starte being Sailor Moon.We fought a lady named Beryl who was madly in love with Mamoru and went evil and we defeated her"
"Okay..so"
"These are from when we fought her..demo..I can't understand why they are here in front of us"
"Odango..I hope you are prepared to fight..because there are a lot of them!"Fighter said looking at the youma's that were surrounding and closing in on them.
"Star Serious Laser"
"Starlight Honeymoon Therapy Kiss!"With both of their attacks all the youma's dissappeared."Fighter..Look down..."Fighter looked down and seen red rose petals on the ground leading down the dark hallway.
"Red roses?"Fighter started to walk ahead and Moon rushed to catch up with her.The roses lead to a white room.Inside it had a red soft carpet and a white bed with red sheets and covers.
"Whats this?"Moon asked looking around.Then a single red rose flew and landed at her feet.Moon looked down and her eyes widened with shock.She slowly turned around to see Tuxedo Mask smiling at her.
"Long time no see,Sailor Moon."Tuxedo smiled at her and walked towards her and Fighter.Fighter stepped in front of her and glared at Tuxedo."Fighter,Fighter,Fighter..You can't defeat me.So just step out the way and maybe when I am done with her I can get to you.."Tuxedo smiled at Fighter's confused expression.
"Onegai..Leave me alone"
"Star Serious Laser!"
Tuxedo dissappeared when the laser hit him and then the room started to spin.
"What the hell?"Fighter asked as she looked around.Moon held on to Fighter as tight as she could.
"I'm not scared,i'm not scared.."Moon whispered as the room continued to spin around.
"It's okay Odango."Fighter smiled."I'll protect you."Moon nodded.The room stopped spinning and a dark hallway appeared."Not again"
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MEANWHILE
Venus and Healer didn't know it but they were in the same position as Moon and Fighter were.They just had gotten through fighting the youma's from Beryl and then fighting Maker and Mercury.
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Thats as far as I got when I decided that it didn't make sense...so I didn't put it up on