Chapter 7
The Battle: Part II
(Death of a Soldier)
Bowser laughed histarically as he watched his enemy panic. Mario looked around for any type of weapon. At this point Mario was cornered with no shield in his hand. Bowser simply giggled and punched the lights out of Mario. "You're not even trying any more!" As Bowser turned around, a huge light appeared. 3 spirits walked over to wounded kid. The spirits were identical to Mario, Kate and Luigi. They said a quick praise and then left. Mario was unconcious, he laid there not having a care in the world. To this point, he was so confused. Should he wake up and protect those he loved, or stay asleep, and die with his enemy by his side. Just then Mario felt dizzy, somehow he woke up and was in his bed. This was before he found out Kate. Him and Luigi were still living at there old house. Mario got up from his bed and decided he needed a walk. The town was so familiar, and yet so lonely. Mario took a look to his right and seen and old woman who looked offly familiar. Long brown hair and a yellow dress. Mario continued walking and came across a girl walking with her grandmother. Somehow she was familiar. Mario just wanted to cry in confusion but he kept it all inside. As he left for home, his grandfather was quite all night. Usually his grandfather would tell tales that were so corny...but that night there was nothing. Even Luigi was silent. Luigi just sat there, excisting in the house as before. Mario decided to take another walk to get away from it all. Just then a female voice called his name. "Mario..." Mario turned around only to find a shrine behind him. As he walked in, bright lights appeared as a woman came face to face with him. She had sparkly blonde hair with a pink dress on, she had a crown placed on her head and was holding a tiara. Mario tried to run to her but the woman was nothing but a mere image floating away in the tunnel. "No wait! Wait!!!" Mario tried to catch up with her. "You are the only one who can succeed in this battle! Tell me who you are!" The woman simply repied. "No wait, please just wait!!" Mario was still trying to catch up, his eyes were growing tired and angry. "Not until you tell me who you are! Who are you?" Without answering Mario kept running. "Who are you and why do you chase the one who defied you?" Mario kept running and said finally "Wait...!!!" "NOT UNTIL YOU TELL ME WHO ARE!!!!!" With that she dissapeared. Mario woke up and yelled "I AM MARIO!!! I AM MYSELF!!! NOT SOME REINCARNATION!!!" With that he jumped off the ground and slammed Bowser right into the stomach. Bowser flew back and hit the solid ground. Growing angry, he charged Mario and was about to commit murder. Luigi jumped infront and took Mario's hit. "NOOOOOO!!" Kate screamed in agony. She rushed to his side. Luigi's bright blue eyes, slowly went into cold black darkness. Mario looked at his dead sibling in shock. "Ha, just as it ended 80 years ago, I will leave you and the wench to grieve, tomorrow you'll be next!" Bowser then left.
At Daisy's village, they brought Luigi's body and burried it. Mario cried and looked at Kate in disbelief. We came here together to help her, but it only seperated us for eternity.' He thought to himself. Mario slowly walked out of the room and cried. For whatever reason, that bastard didn't want him and his brother alone. "Someday I will go where you are brother...someday."
So how did you like that chapter, by the way, some guy flamed me, and he said he was doing me a favour by saying that my story sucked. Well critisism is nice, but saying that someones story sucks is just evidentual proof that he's jealous. Now ViciousMan, I don't give a care in the world if I mispell some words, but if you think I am going to stop this fanfic, you either are on drugs or weed! My reviewers are basically fans, and I will right many chapters to make them happy, I am not going to listen to your advice, and my story has no comparison to Bugs Bunny, so that e-mail you sent me was trash. Plus the fact, if you want to flaim me, do it right with proper and positive comments, not some shit of telling me that I'm recreating Mary Sue's. So if you don't like my story ViciousMan, then don't read it at all! Plus on top of it all, you say I can't write angst a story, you don't even have a story yet! So you can say byebye to that comment.
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