Okay, this is the first official chapter of my story. You know the characters from the show, and here's the original characters I'm going to put in there.
Ayla Rogers- 16 years old, a junior in high school, bronze dragon named Amavin (meaning beautiful storm), not too sociable
Sapphire Franklin- 16 years old, a sophomore in high school, a pixie named Pythar (meaning sapphire friend), very much shy but talkative around friends
Raffi Mendoza- 12 years old, seventh grade, green dragon named Kadrim (meaning dragon flight), wanting attention, shy around others
Kimberly Thompson- 19 years old, starting college, phoenix named Ariat (meaning golden fire), preppy, popular, a little shy
Kumiko Kurasaki- 16 years old, sophomore in high school, deep red dragon named Kaiat (meaning dragon flame) or Flame Dragon, respectful, deadly temper
That's it so far. If you want to be in it, I can add you in at any time. If you want, give me the meaning of your magical name and I'll get it to the best of my abilities. Oh, you can also be a regular human or even part of the Huntsclan. But I personally want to be on Jake's side. That's totally up to you.
And here are my replies to the reviewers.
ADJL-Freakazoid: Don't say that. You have a great imagination. Look at all the stories you've written and are going to write. Anyways, your name is up there (duh) and I hope everything's right. If not, just say something and I'll change it. Whatever you want to be, you can. I was reading a story where someone did this and I thought, "Now why can't I do something like that?" So I did. I hope this story comes out really well.
Sapphire: Yes, I know you. I used your real last name, hope you don't mind. I can change it though. I'm going to try to get Sparky in it, too. I really have to call her. I think she would rather enjoy this, don't you? Your character is so cool, I'm glad you chose something other than a dragon. Not to say that I don't want anyone else to be a dragon. You can be whatever you want, guys. It's just that Sapphire doesn't seem like a dragon to me. Anyways, only, what, a week until school starts? I can't believe I'm going to be a junior! I'll talk to you later, Sapphire.
Kimberly: I don't mind at all. We need some older people to keep us children in line. Especially Jake. LOL. Anyways, a phoenix is a beautiful creature, I'm glad you chose that. I'll figure out powers when I get to that part. Cool, your birthday is only nine days before mine. If you want, I can change your last name in the story. I just put one in because you didn't write one. Which reminds me...people, if you don't put a first AND last name, I will choose a last name myself. If you don't put a name at all, I'll either use your pen name or make one up. So if you want a specific name for your human, give me a first and a last name, and a nickname if wanted.
kIrEigIrL: I don't care about your age! Whatever age you want, I'll put you in. I want everyone to be involved. Wow, did it take you long to think all of this up? That's a lot of stuff. I can't wait to write this. You have two dragon names. Your family and close friends call you Kaiat, but everyone else calls you the Flame Dragon. Anything need changing? Anything at all?
You know what, I'm not waiting any more. Here's Chapter 1 of Apple Sauce.
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Jake, as the American Dragon, flew over New York City, looking for anything out of line. This time, he heard it before he saw it.
"Leave me alone," a small but audible voice said. Jake landed behind a building where he had heard the voice. His head peeked around the corner to see Huntsgirl holding a small jar. The jar was glowing bright blue, and Jake noticed something inside it.
"You aren't going anywhere, pixie," Huntsgirl said, tucking the jar under her arm. Before she could respond, Jake had her tackled to the ground and his claw deep in her back.
"Let the pixie go, Huntsgirl," he said. She nodded and let the jar roll a few feet away. Jake in response got up and took it in his hands. He opened it and the blue pixie flew away, but not before giving Jake her gratitude. He smiled as the pixie disappeared, then turned to Huntsgirl with a frown. She sighed.
"I'm going, I'm going," she said, walking away. Jake grabbed her shoulder and spun her to face him.
"I can do more damage next time," he threatened with a scowl. Then his face lightened up. "Why do you let him push you around, Huntsgirl? You don't have to do anything he tells you to." She pulled away quickly.
"I have no idea what you're talking about, dragon," Huntsgirl said. "Now if you'll excuse me, I have to report another failed mission."
"Wanna ride?" Jake asked humorously. She ignored him and continued to walk towards her home. Jake sighed. "I know exactly what I'm talking about."
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Sapphire sat on a bench outside of a store. The sign on the door read "CLOSED" but she knew otherwise.
Right on schedule (AN: OMG, Jake's actually on time?), Jake came around the corner on his skateboard. He skidded to a halt when he saw the girl on the bench. She seemed to be staring at nothing, her blue eyes not focused on anything at the moment. Her black hair was shoulder-length, flipping outwards, with dark blue highlights. She wore a light blue polo shirt with thin, dark blue horizontal stripes. In addition to that was a pair of bright blue jeans, faded in the front with a white string belt that dangled to her knees. She also wore black high heeled boots.
Sapphire suddenly noticed Jake's presence and looked over in his direction. She wore light blue eye shadow and dark blue lipstick. She smiled and Jake propped his skateboard up, mirroring her expression.
"Hey, the shop's closed," Jake said. "You can come back tomorrow, though."
"I know," Sapphire said. "I just wanted to thank you." Jake's expression changed from nice to completely stupid.
"Huh? For what?" Jake asked. Sapphire smiled.
"For saving me," she said, and Jake shook his head.
"Oh, that," he said, rubbing the back of his neck. "It's kind of my job. Well, I have to be in the shop about a minute ago. So..." He trailed off, nodded his head, and entered the shop. Sapphire stood up and closed her eyes. She shrunk to about five inches and turned into a pixie. She opened her eyes and flew away to her home in the forest surrounding the city.
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Okay, that's it for now. I'll do the dragons (Kumiko, Raffi, and me) later, but right now this is it. I'll update as soon as I have it written.
