(Start of part two)
-After school, Manny and Melanie are hanging out at The Dot, their sweatshirts are off-
Manny- Oh, party tonight? At like 10.
Melanie- Where is it?
Manny- House party.
Melanie- Wait, you mean there's a house party? Like, a real teenage party? With beer, teens, and hook-ups all over?
Manny- Yes!
Melanie- I'm there.
Spinner- Manny. Girl.
Manny- ignores him
Melanie- Hello. Melanie.
Spinner- Hello.
Manny- whispers Ignore him...ignore him...
Melanie- Um, me and Manny, um, busy. Can we please be left alone? No offense.
Spinner walks away
Melanie- Where we meeting at?
Manny- My place? Wear something similar to what your wearing right now. Or wait, come dressed in Jeans and a t-shirt, you're the same size as me, right?
Melanie- Duh. I'm wearing your clothes right now.
Manny- Oh yeah. Well, come over at 8. 8:30 latest.
Melanie- 8. Then we'll have extra time.
Manny- I'll let you wear my old outfit. Something.
Melanie- Deal.
Manny- You're wearing your own underwear, so bring something that shows above the pants line.
Melanie- Have nothing. Wanna go shopping?
Manny- Now?
Melanie- Ding ding ding!
They pull on their sweatshirts and leave
-outside Emma's house-
Ellie- Sorry, I was suppost to meet you here?
Emma- We've got a major problem!
Ellie- Manny. I know.
Emma- And Melanie! Did you see what she was wearing today?
Ellie- She's becoming a total trampy skank? Yeah, I know.
Emma- We've gotta gain back control of her, before she be basically turns into another Manny!
Ellie- Gee, you make her sound like she's just an object.
Emma- She isn't. Right now I have a headache, and I'm so tired.
Elie- Should I go?
Emma- You can stay if you want. I don't care.
-At the mall, Manny and Meanie are shopping for things for Melanie to wear-
Melanie- There's so much stuff in here...
Manny- This looks like one of my shirts! My cut of blue one.
Melanie- It's black. And looks gothic. And like your shirt in a diferent version.
Manny- you should get it!
Melanie- I'm a gothic tramp...then...I should get these jeans. They're cute cause they're faded blackish-blue. And lowline, so if I get a pair of underwear, like these, they'd show over it, cause it's thong-ish. Which is cool, right?
Manny- Try.
Melanie tries them on and walks out of the stall
Manny- You. Look. So. Good.
Melanie- Thanks! It's riding up my butt, did I mention?
Manny- It hurts, doesn't it? You can't get it out, either.
Melanie- Ow.
Manny- Hm. Let's go home now. I have some stuff there you can use. Plus, it's almost time for the party.
-back at Manny's house, the girls walk into Manny's room, and take off their sweatshirts-
Melanie- Big. I've seen it before.
Manny- You're here like everyday. Back to you. You could use some make-up and accesories.
Melanie- I've got some things.
Manny- how about lay off the gothic look for now? Just the top will do.
Melaine-fine.
Manny- Hoop earrings. Essential. puts them on Melanie
Melanie- nice.
Manny does melanie's makeup for her
Melanie- I look nice a version of Britney Spears, if I had blonde hair instead of dyed red.
Manny- You do look like her, because of the makeup. Little bit of body.
Melanie- Cool. That's good, right?
Manny- Really good. Since it's natural and you didn't get plastic surgery.
Melanie- I bet you Britney had surgery. Especially...
Manny- I know. I bet you she did, too.
Melanie- I really don't like her.
Manny- sits on her bed and lies back
Menalie- let's examine Manuella Santos' outfit! Gorgeous pink tube-top, fits her perfectly, faded blue jeans, pink thong, sticking out, and look! little tiny rhinstones on it!
Manny- laughing
Melanie- And let's not forget those big silver hoop earrings! They're the same as mine!
Manny- Ok that's enough,
Melanie- Manuella Santos, everybody! puts on a black hat with rhinestone around the edge ooh, shiny.
Manny- You should wear that!
Melanie-I will.
-Emma's house-
Emma- calling Manny's cell phone and gets her voicemail Hey, Manny, it's Emma. Give me a call back when you can! Talk to you later. bye. hangs up
Ellie- They're fine! Let's see how things go, okay? Calm down. Plus, I've gotta go. See you. leaves
-At the party-
Melanie- Awesome! Hey, let's get Jay here.
Manny- No. Leave him. He deserves to miss this.
Melanie- Fine.
Manny- There are plenty of guys here.
Two guys walk up to them and take their hands
Manny- See?
they dance to music and drink
Melanie- Hey!
Manny- What?
Melanie- You look fuzzy.
Manny- You're fuzzy!
Melanie- oh no.
A guy kisses her
Melanie- no, I got a--
He kisses her again
Melanie- I have a boyfriend! Stop it!
he kisses her again
Melanie- NO! He kisses her again and she slaps him
Guy- Ha. Tom is my name. pushes her up to a wall
Melanie- What are you doing?
Tom- Things. He takes his fingers and moves them down her front
Melanie- Stop it now!
Tom- Nah.
Melanie- my dad's a cop. Tries to escape him
Tom- You're dad. pushes her back is dead.
Melanie- How'd you know that?
Tom- I do. And, you're cute. it's sad you have a boyfriend. You'd like me better.
Melanie- widens eyes as she continiues to be pinned to a wall