AN: Thanks to all my reviewers especially Doomboy2000 and Zanisha because
you've been reading all of my poems! I am loved!!!! Well, my sis (aliasfan)
has a poem collection called A World Without You. She wants more reviewers
so please read her stuff! Well, this is a poem I've had that I said I'd put
up. Another poem will be up early next week (one about their childhood in
free verse!!!!) I think this is my first Riku poem! Enjoy!
Disclaimer: yadda yadda yadda. You know what I'm gonna say. Read previous
disclaimers.
Hollow
I feel so empty, so hollow inside
I'm vulnerable and cannot hide
Cold, so cold in this place
I start to walk and quicken my pace
Yet I'm not getting anywhere
All that's here is over there
Just black and emptiness all around
Not even a shadow on the ground
I'm all alone with just my mind
But I think I'll lose it unless I find
Something to help me escape this grave
But as for my soul no one can save
I'm walking on death and breathing no air
I have no heart, my eyes just glare
Down at what I've now become
Something evil, pitiful, glum
A mere shell, a nothing, drowning in pain
In this place there is nothing that I gain
I guess I was wrong when I thought it best
To shy from the light and join the darkness.
you've been reading all of my poems! I am loved!!!! Well, my sis (aliasfan)
has a poem collection called A World Without You. She wants more reviewers
so please read her stuff! Well, this is a poem I've had that I said I'd put
up. Another poem will be up early next week (one about their childhood in
free verse!!!!) I think this is my first Riku poem! Enjoy!
Disclaimer: yadda yadda yadda. You know what I'm gonna say. Read previous
disclaimers.
Hollow
I feel so empty, so hollow inside
I'm vulnerable and cannot hide
Cold, so cold in this place
I start to walk and quicken my pace
Yet I'm not getting anywhere
All that's here is over there
Just black and emptiness all around
Not even a shadow on the ground
I'm all alone with just my mind
But I think I'll lose it unless I find
Something to help me escape this grave
But as for my soul no one can save
I'm walking on death and breathing no air
I have no heart, my eyes just glare
Down at what I've now become
Something evil, pitiful, glum
A mere shell, a nothing, drowning in pain
In this place there is nothing that I gain
I guess I was wrong when I thought it best
To shy from the light and join the darkness.
