chuckles nervously um... hi? I'M SORRYYYYYYY!!!!!!! PLEASE FORGIVE ME! See... first I had a BANISHMENT the a HUGE vacation with NO computer, then WRITER'S BLOCK then S.A.T.s (I'm in eighth grade- practice ) then MORE Writer's block.I also got really depressed about my writing. Some comments by people made me realize that I need to improve. They weren't flames! NO,just constructive critisism, MUCH NEEDEDconstructive critisism.
BY the way, I realized that Abbi is a bit Mary-sue-ish. See, she sort of HAS to be. I created her as a character that is there to do anything I need to make plot twists happen. That's all!
THis chappie is.... interesting. Raven is pretty O.C. Warning: She does a tiny bit of... R and B. NOT RAP! Just singing to a beat. So, a TINY bit rappISH. It's really just a FILLLER chappie. Here it is:
After a few more seconds of staring, she threw herself into Starfire's arms, weeping intensely. Starfire held her and rocked her and Raven cried. She cried for her dead mother and trainer, she cried for her uncaring father, she cried for her victims, but mostly she cried for herself. For all the times she had been abused, all the times she was tortured by the looks of happiness on others faces that she could not share. She cried all the tears that had begged to come out every single night. She cried for salvation from the imprisonment she had been forced into. Starfire cried also. She cried for the unfairness of it all, how this innocent girl could be forced to carry a burden not meant for those a million time her size and power. And they sat there, the dark goddess weeping into the angel's arms, their tears flowing freely down their faces, to create a warm shimmering puddle on the floor.
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Beast Boy sat and pondered. Every since Raven had gone in to heal Starfire, they both had been acting very strangely. Starfire acted more mysterious and solemn, while Raven seemed to allow herself to smile a it more, and even laugh. What happened in the infirmary that night? Instantly perverted thoughts ran through his head.
'Stop!' He mind-cried, shaking his head furiously. 'Don't think like that!'
He looked over at the two girls. They sat on the couch, watching Robin play Cyborg in Mega Monkeys 4. Abbi and Thor were in the kitchen, cooking. Raven had a book in her lab, but it was obvious she wasn't really paying attention to it. Starfire glanced at Raven, and her face changed. Shock coursed through Beast Boy. He realized that each time Star looked at Raven, her face filled with pity and her eyes sadden. And each time that Raven looked at Starfire, her eyes flashed with gratitude. It was so slight, so very slight, but there was no mistaking the uncommon expression. Instantly he envied Starfire. He wanted Raven to be looking at him, thanking whatever god she believes in that he was there. Sighing, he shook his head. This was ridiculous. He grabbed the remote, sticking his tongue out at the boys when they complained, and turned it to the music channel. Everyone leaned into their seats with contentment. Then they heard a slightly Rand B song come on, and were astonished to see Raven's face zooming out at them. Beast Boy quickly paused it. (They have Tivo in my story.) Raven's face was covered in a black mask that had black sequence and feathers. In the video she alternated between being on stage or being chased by a red monster that looked strangely like a demon. The music that played was a strange Rap/singing combo, not quite either. More singing then Rap. It was like singing to a beat. The real Raven started to sing/rap along.
R ed, Power, Darkness, Evil,
A nger, Hatred, Burning, Boiling,
V iscious, conscious, awakened, rising,
E nters the mind, attacks the soul,
N ever ceasing, always attacking,
Raven smiled at Starfire and then Beast Boy.
T rigon, Powerful, arisen, striking,
R aven, helpless, vulnerable, (her voice dropped)alone,
I nfecting emotions, driving them out,
G one is Happiness, Hope and Love,
O nly Depression and Evil remain,
N othing but emptiness, deep inside,
'S omeone, somewhere, help me...'
D oomed, there's no-one coming this time,
A nger, Hatred, Burning inside,
U ntil there's too much, it's released
G one are her friends, destroyed, by her
H er own hands, her own power,
T ogether destroyed them,
E verything that ever mattered is gone
R evenge. On the one called Raven.
Raven looked at the group and walked out of the room, the group stared after her.
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Did you like? It's just really a emotional filler. Sort of predicts her future, don't you think? The song 'Raven Trigons Daughter' is by Blackfire-the-best. She calls it Ranagram. HOPE YOU LIKED IT! AGAIN, SORRY!!!!
By, the way, I just got AIM, and I have NO peeps on my list, so if anyone wants to IM me, my sn is aBBiBoBaBi (DON'T need to capital b's).
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