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A/N: This is what I call my mourning poem. After reading Chapter 20 I had an inspiration and it came in this sad poem. The poem is about the good Force voice speaking to Jan about Galder.
A Voice in the Force
Child, long have I watched you
In the form of a silent presence.
When you saw him first,
I knew you were the one.
By, what seemed, chance you met again
And the seed was planted.
The seed of trust,
And of hope
The path you walked with him
Was hard and long
But your mind reached for him
As did your heart.
The darkness sent a stranger to you both
In hopes of destroying the trust you'd made.
But the seed I'd sowed
Grew strong within your heart.
I thought my task was done.
When you listened to my words
He had finally given in.
But doubt can be a clever poison.
Falling
Falling
Falling
Your slipping, child, slipping
I did not see this enemy coming.
You were blind to this new darkness.
He came in the form of a friend
And you just failed to see.
A wolf is what he is
Beautiful and cunning
But his bite does sting
And his heart, you want, is filled with deceit.
This affliction has hurt the hero now.
Pain from the blow you dealt him
But the true agony
Comes from the knife in his heart.
Have I failed to save you?
You continue to let go
Of the one man
You truly want the most.
The evil one continues to win
And you follow him, child.
The love you feel in your mind
Is not within your heart.
You're falling
Slipping and falling again.
You must catch yourself, child
On this it all depends.
A/N: So was it good? Did you get the point Shanesnest?