Caught in a cage of sand
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Chapter 2
Sneers, the blond boy was used to them after 13 years
of being shunned, feared, hated and alone, how could
he not? He had finally figured out why he was so hated
by every one in the village. He was the keeper of the
nine tailed fox!
Even children his own age had mirrored their parents'
attitude towards him. Since he could remember the
voices of adults, shooing the kids away as soon as he
got near them to ask if he could play. The words
played a painful symphony in his mind.
"Hurry up its time to go in."
"But mommy its still morning, you said I could play
till lunch time."
"Momma, what's wrong with that boy? Why are we
leaving him? He was nice!"
"He's dangerous, stay away from him! Don't go near
him, do you understand?"
"Get away from my baby, demon! Don't you come near
us!"
"Stay away! Leave us in peace, you monster!"
Yes, even at that tender age, Naruto was no stranger
to
sadness. As he got older it only became worse!
"Filthy beast! We don't serve your kind here!"
"What do you mean my kind? I'm the same as you are!"
"Ha! You think so? We are not monsters or demons!"
"Neither am I!"
"You can't fool us! We won't be caught off guard so
easily! Now get out and don't show you face here
again!"
"Fine I don't want your crap anyway!"
"Don't touch that!"
"What? This?"
"Ahhhh! My stuff! You broke it!"
"Hahaha, see you loser!"
It was then that the boy had started out a life of
mischief and prank pulling. If they didn't like it,
tough. They had brought it upon themselves!
It started out as a constant forethought to do
pranks, but after a time, it became a habit. He got
the attention he so desperately craved, even if it was
the negative kind! He started to slack off in school
again; the need for attention was too strong!
As he looked back on those days, he smiled a little,
he was right back were he started, only a bit older.
"Naruto!"
He was startled out of his thoughts as his teammate,
Sakura walked up to him, looking pissed.
"Where have you been? I have been looking everywhere
for you!"
Naruto sighed. Here it comes. He was getting sick of
it.
"Why can't you be more like Sasuke?"
"Why would I want to be like that bastard?"
Sakura hit him over the head. "Don't call Sasuke a
bastard!"
"What do you want, Sakura?"
"I can't find Sasuke anywhere. Have you seen him?"
Naruto was mad. Not only does she hit him, but she
also
wanted him to help her find the boy who had made his
life
that much more of a living hell!
"No."
"What?"
"I said no. No, as in, no I will not waste my time
looking for that damn Sasuke!"
"Don't insult Sasuke like that!"
"Make me!"
That did it. She was pissed. Lucky Naruto had the
right sense to
run before the storm broke.
"NARUTO! Get back here, right
now!"
As the boy ran off with the pink haired nin close
behind, nether of them felt the black eyes of the boy
hidden amongst the trees nearby.
"Hmm, well Naruto, looks like I'm going to have to
postpone our little meeting. I don't want to get
caught by that pink haired fool!" With that the dark
eyed boy melted back into the shadows of the trees.
WELL? what do you think i hope this was a good chapter it will only get better and better as time go's on but i do have to set the story i dont want smutt but i do like to read it! yay for boy/boy! GAH DONE at last well read and review!
hmmm i think i will let Demon ted out next chapter but the peace and quite is so nice! till next