Thanks so much NoFx1018 and potter078 for being my first reviewers! I think the next two chapters are much better and funnier.
Disclaimer: Forgot to put this last time. Don't own Jimmy Neutron. If I did, this would probably be an episode…
Chapter 2- Into the future (yeah cheesy title)
With a 'zap!' the five found themselves standing in the future Retroville, in front if the Candy Bar which strangely seemed unchanged.
"Awesome! We made it! It actually worked!"
"And you were expecting it not to work Nerdtron?"
"Heh….I mean, of course it did! Now let's stop talking and visit our old pal Sam!"
As they walked in, they noticed the Candy Bar was the same as always. There were still several kids sitting in the worn out booths and music was playing from the jukebox, same as always. They sat down and ordered sundaes from the now elderly Sam.
At the table next to them sat 3 kids- two girls and a boy- who were having an excited discussion that they overheard bits of. A girl who looked a little younger than them was talking. She had long brown hair and bright green eyes, not to mention a loud voice.
"…yeah and he said he's sure it'll work this time, and he's gonna let us all try it out!"
"That's awesome, Jen!" said the other girl, who had strawberry blond hair. Give us a call when it's ready!"
"And don't forget about me either!" This time, the boy with fairly dark skin spoke. "Last time, you didn't think I'd be able to handle it!"
The girl called Jenny giggled. "Chris, you were out of town!"
"Oh yeah…that's right." He gave a sheepish grin.
The second girl spoke up again. "Sorry guys. I got to go soon….you know how my dad gets!" She rolled her eyes.
"That's alright Kate, we gotta get going too." The trio got out of their booth and headed to the door. As they passed by, Jen happened to turn her head, and as she did she locked eyes with Jimmy.
She gasped. "Guys, wait…look!"
Alright cliffy! Well not really…This chapter is supposed to be really obvious. Not as long as I thought it would be though….oh well. Next chapter is the best so far. I'll have that up tomorrow. Please let me know how you think this is going! 3