This is a poem that I wrote a few months ago, but never posted. Please take into consideration that this was one of the first poems that I ever tried to write. I only got one review for my last poem, so please, review. I felt bad that i didn't think that people liked my poem.
I hear whispers in the night,
Death is what they say.
The pain you see,
The torture of your life.
So what is this pain worth?
Life is never perfect,
Peace is never there.
In the darkness,
The only thing is war.
It's what we breathe,
It's what we feel,
It's the essence of our soul.
Let the darkness take me,
Let it tear into my silent dreams.
Let the terrors of my soul come forth,
Let my broken heart be healed.
Let death overcome me,
Let it take me to a silent world of which to live…
A life away from hurt,
A life away from pain.
You take away my soul,
You take away my pain,
So what is left to take away but my broken heart of dreams?
Please review.
Dark Kitsune of Ra: Thank you for the review. It really made me happy that I got a review. I am glad that you think that I am cut out for poetry. I really try hard.