Here is another one of my cruddy poems.
Staring at the sunset,
I see what's rarely seen.
I see those wandering souls,
Bring torture down on me.
I brought them back from Styx,
So they could warm my heart,
But now pain clouds my vision,
As I live alone once more.
They gave their time to help me,
From the depression that I'm in,
To show me what is truly there,
Not the fantasy I'm in.
Now a stare up at the ceiling,
To look at what they wrote:
'You are cold and distant as before,
We shall not help you once more…'
This vision flying through her head,
She left her world,
With pain unsaid…
I really hope that you like what I wrote. My inspiration has been down and I need a little help. It would be nice if you gave me some topics, or a few lines to start with so I could come up with a poem for you guys.
Dark Kitsune of RA: I am glad you liked it, but with this one, I just took a friends poem and rewrote it.
Alantie Mistaniu: Sorry if I spelled your name wrong. Please keep reviewing my poems. I could use the support. I am glad that you liked them.
Serenity Maxwell: I am glad that you like my poems too!
Mad-4-Manga: I am sorry that you didn't like the last one, but I am glad that you liked my other poems. I try really hard on them all. It is really hard to post them too.