This chapter is dedicated to Dark Kitsune of Ra for the idea. Sorry to Mad-4-Manga. I will see what I can do with your idea in the next few chapters.
Failure holds me back,
From the world left unseen,
Never wished to be there,
Never cared to see.
All the things that I've done,
Never seem right.
All the failures that I've had,
Always seem so wrong.
Nothing in this world can I ever do right,
Can't stop this pain,
From taking over my inside.
I can't take the abuse,
The screaming in my head,
Telling me I can't,
When I know I truly can.
I don't want to leave,
But that's what everybody wants.
For me to leave,
Is their godsend,
And my purgatory.
They never wish to see me,
Ashamed that we were friends.
They never want to see me,
The family left uncaring.
In the world,
Where I can do nothing right,
I make a solemn vow,
To end my horrid fate…
Hope you liked it. I worked really hard on this one too.
Dark Kitsune of Ra: I loved the ideas. I even used one in this chapter. I hope that you keep reviewing my poetry. You have been there from the beginning.
Mad-4-Manga: It's is okay that you were harsh on the poem before the last one. I wasn't worried. Besides, it was only one poem. The Rin/Sesshy pairing scared me a little, but when you explained that she was older, you actually got me to like it more.
Thanks to my only two reviewers for the last chappie!