I made up with my friends so now I can go back to my regualar poetry. Sorry if the last one wasn't as good as the others. I just made that one off of the top of my head.
Broken in the night,
The world closes in.
They tear her,
They kill her,
Yet she still lives.
A broken soul that you see,
Just walks right past.
She is just there,
Yet not there all the same.
Darkness falls around her face,
Darkness destroys her inner soul.
Fighting the darkness,
Destroying the darkness,
Losing against darkness.
She falls,
While another takes over.
Cold replaces empty,
Alive replaces dead.
Destroying this place,
She thinks of the pain,
She will not stop.
Her pain was caused by them,
Their death is what she's wanted.
But now that they are dead,
What about them?
Those people who helped her,
Father…
Crying through the darkness,
Control is hers,
But so is death…
Once again, I wrote this in about 5 minutes so I don't think that it will be the greatest. Please review and tell me what you think. Tell me what you think this poem was about. I want to see who can decipher the poetry I write. Can anyone tell me where Mad-4-Manga and all of my other reviewers are? They all seemed to have disappeared.
Dark Kitsune of Ra: Thank you for the sympathy. Umm...I made up with them so that makes it easier. Sometimes it's easier not to have friends. Anyway, I am glad you liked the poetry.
Alantie Mistaniu: Thnks for the hope. Anyway, I am glad that you like the poetry that I write.