This poem is longer than my others. I really hope that you like it!
Am I who you think I am?
The sweet girl you once knew?
Could you tell me this?
What about me is true?
I am not as I once was,
Helping,
Caring,
And sweet.
I've become colder,
Not warm and loving,
But you act as if nothing's changed,
When I am not the same.
You stay the same,
As the days go by,
And I disappear,
But you stay alive.
I'm dying because you didn't see,
The pain I felt,
Cause you saw the change,
But would not acknowledge the new me.
I'm sorry it had to be this way,
But I'm not he friend that you once knew,
I'm a different person,
Just to everyone but you.
Please let me shine through,
The one I am now.
Don't throw me down,
And act the same.
I am different,
And you may never know,
Now's your chance,
Take a look and see the new me…
This is a sad attempt at rhyming just a little bit. Please review and tell me what you thought.
Alantie Mistaniu: Awwwwww…I wish that I was in your grade. To say the least, I won't be there for a little while. (Yeah, right) Anyway, 2 pages on a stupid poem! Dang, your teacher needs some serious help. Here is something to get your mind off of senioritis or whatever it is called. (BTW, it is whatever you want!)
Mad-4-Manga: Sorry for spelling your name wrong, I was just in a rush and spell-check didn't pick it up. Btw, I meant to say that your reviews are NEVER boring. Typos, I hate them. This review was interesting to say the least. You scare me to no end! I don't even want to know who all the different people are. (WHO ARE THEY!) Well, thank you for reviewing, I could do with more interesting + long reviews like this. You get more ice cream since you seem to like it so much.
Silver Sailor Ganymede: Thanks for the compliment. Saturn is my fave senshi too. Btw, what does Ganymede mean? Yeah, umm... the error was because I'm not good at putting things down on paper, or word is what I should say. Please keep reviewing!