I hope that you like this poem. It may not be as good as the others, but that is because I did it for school.
I need an angel,
An angel to guide me,
Bring me from the darkness,
To the bright world that you live in.
I want to live in the light,
And destroy that so-called darkness.
I want to see the smiles,
And forget those thoughtful frowns.
I want to be carefree,
And have a life of leisure,
A life with no worries,
And you being there might just help.
I have someone to love,
Someone to take me away,
And let me live in peace,
And destroy the world left behind.
know that this poem may seem lighter than the other ones, but the next on will be too. I am just posting that poetry that I had to do for school. Only the next one or two will be light. Then it will go back to the darker stuff.
Thanx to:
Dark Kitsune of Ra: Glad you liked the concept. I was just trying the repetition because I wanted something slightly different.
Alantie Mistaniu: I never get the interperatations right at school either. --
ttmai: Glad you liked my collection of poetry.
Silver Sailor Ganymede: It may not remind you of a song that you know, I'm just saying that it could be a song in general.
Mr. Panta(SP): Sorry if i have not reviewed yet. I have just been very busy and your chapters are long!
Just so you people know. There are stanzas of four lines. The stupid website won't let me break it apart.