Title: When Everything Goes Wrong

Author: Strawberry Cupcake

Summary:A girl shows up in Atlantis who's from the future. She's had a troubled past that haunts her. Can the Atlantis team help her get through it and get home?McWeir and Sheyla story (with WeirKavanaugh too. Scary I know).

Archive: yes but ask first

Disclaimer: not mine yadda yadda

My first fic! Hope you like! Please review. Now on with the fic! / and \ indicate thought.

ch. 1 An Unexpected Visitor

Elizabeth sat in her office going over Major Sheppard's mission report from M3X-249. /He needs to learn how to write mission reports the correct way. God! He describes every little detail. Even what everyone is wearing! "Teyla looked extremely hot in the natives blueish-green halter style, knee length dress." HAH! He's so-\ Her train of thought was cut off when Rodney knocked on her door and poked his head in.

"Elizabeth. Grodin needs to see you in the control room. He says he found something strange."

"Alright Rodney. I'm coming." She put away John's report and left the room with Rodney.

"INCOMING WORMHOLE!" Rodney and Elizabeth sped up. They got to the control room by the time the wormhole opened and the shield was raised.

"Is there an IDC?" Elizabeth wondered who it was. There were no teams off-world.

Peter Grodin looked at the computer increduously and had to double check it. "It's yours, ma'am."

"What?" Rodney and Elizabeth said in unison. "That can't be right." Elizabeth said."Open it anyway." She turned onher comm."All security teams to the gate room immediately!"She said into it.Twenty military personnel flooded in around the gate.

A girl, no older than eighteen, came through, carrying a baby. The gate shut down and Sergeant Bates cautiously stepped up to her, pointing his P-90 at her all the while.

"Who are you and how did you get Doctor Weir's code?" She looked at him and promptly fainted. Bates was quick enough to catch the baby before the girl dropped him. Surprisingly, the baby didn't cry.

"We need a medical team to the gate room immediately." Bates said into his comm. Doctor Beckett and his medical team took the girl and the baby to the infirmary.

In the infirmary -----o00o-----

Carson wrote something on the chart at the end of the girl's bed. She and the baby had a disease that Carson had never seen before. Since he'd never seen it before, he didn't have a cure. The girl's immune system seemed to be taking care of it though. Her vitals were looking better. The baby boy, however, was only about a week old, so he didn't have that good of an immune system yet. And he wasn't responding to any antibiotics. Carson heard someone behind him and turned around to see Elizabeth standing in the door frame..

"Hey Carson. How are they doing?" Carson sighed.

"Well, the girl's doin' good. The boy though, he is nae doin' too well. Ah'm afraid he's nae goin' ta make it." Right as he said it, the baby's heart moniter made the loud beeping sound, indicating his heart had stopped.

Carson and his med team started doing CPR on him. But it was no use. He had died. Carson pulled his bed sheet up over his head.

When he turned around, Elizabeth noticed he had a tear in one of his eyes. She looked at him wide-eyed. She turned and left the infirmary in shock.

A couple of hours later -----o00o-----

Elizabeth couldn't believe what had happened. That moment when the baby died had played over and over again in her head. She decided to go and see how the girl doing. On her way there, she ran into Rodney.

"Oh hey Elizabeth. Carson told me what happened. Are you okay?"They walked in silence for a couple of seconds before she answered.

"No, actually. I-it was-I mean-" Rodney gave her a look that said she didn't need to go on. "I was going to see how the girl was doing."

"You want me to come with you?" The question wasn't neccessary for they had just arrived at the infirmary.

"Would you?" He nodded and they went in.

"Carson?" Elizabeth called for him. He came out of his office.

"How are ya' lass?"

"Fine." She lied. "How is she?" Elizabeth nodded to the bed behind the curtain Carson had put up to give her some privacy.

"She's still out of it. She'll probably be out for another coupla' hours. Ya' should come back then and-" He stopped as he saw the aforementioned girl crawl to the end of the bed to see what was around the curtain. She looked, wide-eyed, like Elizabeth had done earlier, at the three adults staring back at her.

"Lass ya' should be in bed." Carson helped her get back under her covers. "Lass, ah think ah should tell ya', the baby ya' had with ya' earlier, he-" Carson paused to take a breath. "He died. Ah am terribly, terribly sorry." She just looked at him with the same expression on her face.

"Well, ah'll just leave ya' ta get some sleep." He said after a minute. He turned on his heel and went to his office, beckoning Rodney and Elizabeth to follow.

"Ah think she's in shock. Either from the news of the baby or from somethin' that happened before she came here. She's got a right nasty bruise on her shoulder. Anyway, she got over tha' disease pretty quick. She'll probably be able ta leave ma care in a day. Ya' might want ta find her some temporary livin' quarters. She'll likely not talk for some time. Shock can do tha' ta ya'."

"Alright. I'll have Sergeant Bates find her an appropriate place in the morning."

Rodney cut in. "I don't think that's so smart Elizabeth. I wouldn't let Bates do that if I were you. Knowing him, he'll probaby say throw her in the brig." Carson nodded.

"Ah agree with Rodney."

"Alright. I'll have Major Sheppard do it then." She turned to leave. "Anything to take his mind off of Teyla." She added under her breath.

What did you think? This one doesn't have very much info but I promise the next chapter will explain a lot more.

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