Yo, Still, I get little to no reviews!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please, if you read
this, please review!!!!!!! I need reviews for my creativity, the only thing
that's keeping me going on this fanfic is when you're sick, you have a lot
of spare time to day dream. Also, when you can barely sleep you have time
to 'night' dream, when you're awake. What's that called; you're awake, at
night, but daydreaming, but its night? Never mind. I'm rambling on again.
Ok, here is your beautiful chapter at 8:15 at night, courtesy of,
daydreaming. PS there is abuse in the chapter at first. Skip if you don't
like this sorta thing. Just so ya know, it was hard writing half of this
because of that. My face was red the whole time.
Chapter 5 By Inuchick13
Like she said, her father wasn't home. She decided to change since she was home. She got to the shower and stripped herself of her clothing. She was already dry; it hadn't been raining for a long time. She put the necklace on and chanted the spell. A warm light grew around her and she changed. Her eyes became honey brown again, her hair back to black with no highlights. She became her human self again. This time, she dyed the tip of her hair blue, and put in one strip of blue, outlining her face.
She went to her room and put on a pair of baggy black pants, and a tight black shirt that said, "Want my number?" in silver on the front, and " It's 1-800-GET-THE-FUCK-AWAY-FROM-ME" on the back. Putting a few silver chains on her pants she felt ready. Going into her brother's room she grabbed his stuff and went down the stairs. All he needed was a shirt, underwear, and a pillow. Sango had enough sleeping bags at her house. Going down the long stairs she dropped the bag on the ground and got a pop tart. Munching on it she got to the door, but saw it open. She dropped the pop tart she was eating and it fell to the ground, and broke into many pieces. A creak on the stairs made her turn around and gasp.
There was her drunken father, coming closer to her. Kagome inched away from him and to the door. He got up to her and grabbed her shirt, pulling her up. She turned her head away from the stench of the alcohol. Pushing her into the wall, Kagome's father lifted his other hand and punched Kagome in the stomach. She lifted her legs and pushed away from the man she called dad.
"Whore, you need to be taught a lesson." He said slurred. He kicked Kagome in the head, for she was now on the floor holding her stomach. Kagome gasped a breath of air and felt the blood trickle down her head. He then lifted her up by her neck and spit on her. "Just like your mother. Your just a bitch and nothing more." He said. Kagome felt something creep up her shirt and she new what would happen if he did. She gained all her courage and punched him away from her. He fell back and passed out on the floor. Kagome gasped and felt her head. Blood fell down and was caking in her hair.
"No." she said. Grabbing Sota's stuff she ran out the door and into the streets. It was now raining again. It seamed to be doing this a lot. Raining, stopping, then raining again. She ran until she came to the park. Sota's stuff were now soaked, but they could dry easily. She curled up under a sakura tree and cried in her knees. Her hair was soaked, but the blood was gone. Now a new drop of blood was forming on her head. The wound wasn't serious, but it was a bad blow. Her stomach hurt, and she lifted her shirt up a little. A big black bruise was forming on her skin. Her neck had some small bruises on it from his fingers. She put her shirt back down and silently cried.
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"I can't believe she called us a cat!" Yusuke yelled. For the past few hours he was saying stuff like this. "DO I LOOK LIKE A CAT?!"
"Shut up Urimeshi!" Kuwabara said.
"Be quiet monkey. I think I hear something." Hiei said in his normal monotone voice.
"I am not a monkey squirt." Kuwabara said loudly, his fists in a ball.
"No, Hiei is right. I hear something as well." Kurama said. They all quieted down and they heard the faint sound of somebody crying. They picked up there pace a little and got to a park.
"Ok, we should split up, it'll be faster. We'll just call out if we find the person." Yusuke said. They split up, Hiei going in a tree looking over the park. Kurama going toward the pond. Kuwabara going to the picnic area, and Yusuke going in the playing area. Kurama had no luck. Hiei found no one. Kuwabara, well, he was looking for food, not the person. Yusuke on the other hand found a figure under a tall sakura tree near the edge of the park. Going nearer he saw that it was a girl crying. (A/N Well duh, would a guy be crying under a sakura tree?......I rest my case) her shoulders were going up and down, yet she was not making that much noise. She looked up at Yusuke, gasped, and whipped her tears on her shirt. As Yusuke came closer, he noticed a little bit of blood on her head.
"Hey, what's up?" he said coming closer. Kagome (though he didn't know at the time) looked up at him and got up. "No, I want to talk with you." He said. She stopped and turned around to look at him. He started jogging up to her and stopped a few feet away.
"What do you want?" She asked, sounding slightly relieved, annoyed, and scared.
"What happened to your head?" Yusuke said sounding slightly worried. A cut like that could be potentially fatal. She needed to go to the hospital. Suddenly Kurama and Hiei came over and Kagome looked a little more scared.
"You don't have to afraid of us. We just want to help you." Kurama said. Her eyes softened a little bit.
"Hey, you're the girl in the ally way!" Kuwabara said. No body noticed that he had come up too. Kagome looked up at them all and noticed that it was true.
"Hn." Hiei said.
"Hey, what's up with your head!?" Kuwabara yelled. Yusuke sweat dropped at this comment.
"I kind already pointed that out Kuwabaka!" Kagome sweat dropped and touched her head where the cut was. When she took her hand away she noticed that it was covered it blood. Her whole hand was covered in blood. She stared at her hand with wide eyes.
"I didn't realize that it was so serious." She whispered. The group turned to her and saw that she was looking at her blood stained hand. "It wasn't hurting."
"WHAT! HOW COULD THAT NOT HURT!" Kuwabara screamed. Kagome looked at him, well, glared at him, and let the rain wash her hand off.
"I'm used to it." She said, and then covered her mouth with her clean hand.
"What do you mean your used to it. Is it because of fighting?" Kurama said interested.
"Yea, that's it." Kagome sighed. Her secret wasn't out after all.
"You're lying. What secret aren't you telling us?" Hiei said. Kagome lifted her head fast, but put her hand to her head because of how fast she moved her head.
"You can..." Kagome gasped.
"Yea, read your mind. Now tell us. I want to hear it from you, not your head." Hiei said. Kuwabara looked at him.
"You talked for a long time shrimp." He said, mouth a gap.
"Shut up monkey." Hiei said irritably. Kagome walked to a sakura tree and sat down, getting ready to tell them about her 'problem'. The others followed eagerly and sat around her, getting a little bit of covering from the tree.
"Ok, well, my mother was killed a few years ago by someone named Naraku. I was only 10 at that time, but I knew that something was wrong. I was at school when it happened. I knew something was wrong, and skipped school and ran all the way home." Kagome started but was interrupted by a certain idiot.
"You started skipping when you were only 10?!" he yelled. Kagome rubbed her temple. She was starting to get dizzy.
"Yes now shut up so I can talk." She said. He did and Kagome continued. "Well, I got home and I saw blood everywhere. On walls, on the floor. On furniture. And when I got the kitchen, I saw my mother's bloody body. A note was on the fridge, the only non-bloody spot. It said ' this is what will happen to you if you don't give the money by tomorrow ~ Naraku.' My dad paid the money, and all was ok."
"Then what does this have to do with anything?" Yusuke said, starting to agitated by the rain. Kagome looked at him and then looked at the ground.
"You still don't get it do you. Put the pieces together." She whispered. Kuwabara and Yusuke just stared at her. But Kurama and Hiei, well, their eyes grew 10 times then normal.
"You hear about it all the time you know." She started. "I used to think the world was a great place until that day. Then I thought everything would be ok. I was really wrong. My father, he started going out more often, and every day it would be just a little bit later." Kagome said. Yusuke's eyes got big as he realized what she was trying to say.
"I still don't get it." Kuwabara said. Everyone glared at, but Kagome's glare was the hardest.
"You don't get it do you. Here's one word that might put you into reality for one minute. Abuse. Does that affect you in any way, or do I need to explain what it is. My dad came home one night and kicked me. I was 11 years old the first time he started. 11. And in front of my 8 year old brother. Then he punched me, and hit me. For 5 years I've had to put up with his bull. 5 years of protecting my 13 year old brother. 2 years of protecting my son." Kagome said loudly, but whispered the last part. Up until then everyone was in rage, and reality. Sure they did hear about it, but never thought hard about it. Then Hiei's eyes got really wide.
"S...son?" He said. Every one looked at him, then to Kagome. She looked puzzled for a minute, but then did something unexpected. She laughed.
"No, he's not part of my abuse if that's what you were thinking. He's my adopted kitsune son. God, do you really think I would put up with it that much?" she said laughing. Kurama and Hiei paled a lot and Yusuke did get pale, because he realized what she was saying. But Kagome stopped laughing thinking about one night.
"He did try though. Lucky for me I punched him and he passed out." She said. Everyone looked at her. Kurama put a hand on her shoulder and she looked at him.
"It's ok." He said. She smiled and then did something even more unexpecting then laughing. She hugged him. Crying in his shoulder, she hugged him. He looked surprised, but comforted her.
"Thank you." She said. She stood up and put her hand on the tree. "Thank you, all of you, but I have to go. My friends will be worried about me." As if on cue a little group came into view.
"Kagomeeeeeee, are you here?" A voice yelled.
"Yea, over here. Hey you guys, wanna come over, at least meet my friends." Kagome said with a pleading pout on her face.
"Ok, but only for a minute." Yusuke said. Her friends came over and all hugged her.
"Um, guys, I feel ok, but if you don't let go of me I'm not gonna be able to breath." She said gasping.
"We were so worried about you Kagome." A girl said.
"I'm ok, are Sota and Shippo with you?" Kagome asked.
"SIS!" A boy said, a 7 year old with him.
"Momma! I was so worried about you!" Cried the little boy. Kagome picked him up and put him on her hip.
"I'm ok Shippo." She said and kissed him on his head. He looked up to his adopted momma and saw the cut.
"Momma, your head, its bleeding." He said gasping. She looked at him and smiled.
"So it is." She said whispering. The world started to go blurry and she heard screams. Last thing she saw was her little boy in the arms of a red head. Then she passed out.
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I hope its good. Please no flames though. Like I said earlier, this was really hard to type, so you don't think that I'm making fun of anybody. 5 pages and not a single song. WOW! And 3 of these pages I did in an hour ^_^ I knew exactly what I was going to write. Sorry about the cliffy, I'll update soon. Oh yea, and look out for silent nights. Some of you people wanted a INU/KAG ending so I'm gonna have an alternate ending so that you people that wanted a sess/kag fic got one and those of you that wanted a Inu/Kag fic will both get what they want ^_^ BYE BYE! (Vote now, the stares show how many votes (*) plz vote for all 3 people!!! The 3 already on here is from me!!!)
PS: vote for the pairings, Yusuke/Kieko belong to each other, so that's defenate!
Kag/Kur **** Kag/Hiei *** San/Mir * San/Hiei ** Inu/Boton *** Inu/Kik
Chapter 5 By Inuchick13
Like she said, her father wasn't home. She decided to change since she was home. She got to the shower and stripped herself of her clothing. She was already dry; it hadn't been raining for a long time. She put the necklace on and chanted the spell. A warm light grew around her and she changed. Her eyes became honey brown again, her hair back to black with no highlights. She became her human self again. This time, she dyed the tip of her hair blue, and put in one strip of blue, outlining her face.
She went to her room and put on a pair of baggy black pants, and a tight black shirt that said, "Want my number?" in silver on the front, and " It's 1-800-GET-THE-FUCK-AWAY-FROM-ME" on the back. Putting a few silver chains on her pants she felt ready. Going into her brother's room she grabbed his stuff and went down the stairs. All he needed was a shirt, underwear, and a pillow. Sango had enough sleeping bags at her house. Going down the long stairs she dropped the bag on the ground and got a pop tart. Munching on it she got to the door, but saw it open. She dropped the pop tart she was eating and it fell to the ground, and broke into many pieces. A creak on the stairs made her turn around and gasp.
There was her drunken father, coming closer to her. Kagome inched away from him and to the door. He got up to her and grabbed her shirt, pulling her up. She turned her head away from the stench of the alcohol. Pushing her into the wall, Kagome's father lifted his other hand and punched Kagome in the stomach. She lifted her legs and pushed away from the man she called dad.
"Whore, you need to be taught a lesson." He said slurred. He kicked Kagome in the head, for she was now on the floor holding her stomach. Kagome gasped a breath of air and felt the blood trickle down her head. He then lifted her up by her neck and spit on her. "Just like your mother. Your just a bitch and nothing more." He said. Kagome felt something creep up her shirt and she new what would happen if he did. She gained all her courage and punched him away from her. He fell back and passed out on the floor. Kagome gasped and felt her head. Blood fell down and was caking in her hair.
"No." she said. Grabbing Sota's stuff she ran out the door and into the streets. It was now raining again. It seamed to be doing this a lot. Raining, stopping, then raining again. She ran until she came to the park. Sota's stuff were now soaked, but they could dry easily. She curled up under a sakura tree and cried in her knees. Her hair was soaked, but the blood was gone. Now a new drop of blood was forming on her head. The wound wasn't serious, but it was a bad blow. Her stomach hurt, and she lifted her shirt up a little. A big black bruise was forming on her skin. Her neck had some small bruises on it from his fingers. She put her shirt back down and silently cried.
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"I can't believe she called us a cat!" Yusuke yelled. For the past few hours he was saying stuff like this. "DO I LOOK LIKE A CAT?!"
"Shut up Urimeshi!" Kuwabara said.
"Be quiet monkey. I think I hear something." Hiei said in his normal monotone voice.
"I am not a monkey squirt." Kuwabara said loudly, his fists in a ball.
"No, Hiei is right. I hear something as well." Kurama said. They all quieted down and they heard the faint sound of somebody crying. They picked up there pace a little and got to a park.
"Ok, we should split up, it'll be faster. We'll just call out if we find the person." Yusuke said. They split up, Hiei going in a tree looking over the park. Kurama going toward the pond. Kuwabara going to the picnic area, and Yusuke going in the playing area. Kurama had no luck. Hiei found no one. Kuwabara, well, he was looking for food, not the person. Yusuke on the other hand found a figure under a tall sakura tree near the edge of the park. Going nearer he saw that it was a girl crying. (A/N Well duh, would a guy be crying under a sakura tree?......I rest my case) her shoulders were going up and down, yet she was not making that much noise. She looked up at Yusuke, gasped, and whipped her tears on her shirt. As Yusuke came closer, he noticed a little bit of blood on her head.
"Hey, what's up?" he said coming closer. Kagome (though he didn't know at the time) looked up at him and got up. "No, I want to talk with you." He said. She stopped and turned around to look at him. He started jogging up to her and stopped a few feet away.
"What do you want?" She asked, sounding slightly relieved, annoyed, and scared.
"What happened to your head?" Yusuke said sounding slightly worried. A cut like that could be potentially fatal. She needed to go to the hospital. Suddenly Kurama and Hiei came over and Kagome looked a little more scared.
"You don't have to afraid of us. We just want to help you." Kurama said. Her eyes softened a little bit.
"Hey, you're the girl in the ally way!" Kuwabara said. No body noticed that he had come up too. Kagome looked up at them all and noticed that it was true.
"Hn." Hiei said.
"Hey, what's up with your head!?" Kuwabara yelled. Yusuke sweat dropped at this comment.
"I kind already pointed that out Kuwabaka!" Kagome sweat dropped and touched her head where the cut was. When she took her hand away she noticed that it was covered it blood. Her whole hand was covered in blood. She stared at her hand with wide eyes.
"I didn't realize that it was so serious." She whispered. The group turned to her and saw that she was looking at her blood stained hand. "It wasn't hurting."
"WHAT! HOW COULD THAT NOT HURT!" Kuwabara screamed. Kagome looked at him, well, glared at him, and let the rain wash her hand off.
"I'm used to it." She said, and then covered her mouth with her clean hand.
"What do you mean your used to it. Is it because of fighting?" Kurama said interested.
"Yea, that's it." Kagome sighed. Her secret wasn't out after all.
"You're lying. What secret aren't you telling us?" Hiei said. Kagome lifted her head fast, but put her hand to her head because of how fast she moved her head.
"You can..." Kagome gasped.
"Yea, read your mind. Now tell us. I want to hear it from you, not your head." Hiei said. Kuwabara looked at him.
"You talked for a long time shrimp." He said, mouth a gap.
"Shut up monkey." Hiei said irritably. Kagome walked to a sakura tree and sat down, getting ready to tell them about her 'problem'. The others followed eagerly and sat around her, getting a little bit of covering from the tree.
"Ok, well, my mother was killed a few years ago by someone named Naraku. I was only 10 at that time, but I knew that something was wrong. I was at school when it happened. I knew something was wrong, and skipped school and ran all the way home." Kagome started but was interrupted by a certain idiot.
"You started skipping when you were only 10?!" he yelled. Kagome rubbed her temple. She was starting to get dizzy.
"Yes now shut up so I can talk." She said. He did and Kagome continued. "Well, I got home and I saw blood everywhere. On walls, on the floor. On furniture. And when I got the kitchen, I saw my mother's bloody body. A note was on the fridge, the only non-bloody spot. It said ' this is what will happen to you if you don't give the money by tomorrow ~ Naraku.' My dad paid the money, and all was ok."
"Then what does this have to do with anything?" Yusuke said, starting to agitated by the rain. Kagome looked at him and then looked at the ground.
"You still don't get it do you. Put the pieces together." She whispered. Kuwabara and Yusuke just stared at her. But Kurama and Hiei, well, their eyes grew 10 times then normal.
"You hear about it all the time you know." She started. "I used to think the world was a great place until that day. Then I thought everything would be ok. I was really wrong. My father, he started going out more often, and every day it would be just a little bit later." Kagome said. Yusuke's eyes got big as he realized what she was trying to say.
"I still don't get it." Kuwabara said. Everyone glared at, but Kagome's glare was the hardest.
"You don't get it do you. Here's one word that might put you into reality for one minute. Abuse. Does that affect you in any way, or do I need to explain what it is. My dad came home one night and kicked me. I was 11 years old the first time he started. 11. And in front of my 8 year old brother. Then he punched me, and hit me. For 5 years I've had to put up with his bull. 5 years of protecting my 13 year old brother. 2 years of protecting my son." Kagome said loudly, but whispered the last part. Up until then everyone was in rage, and reality. Sure they did hear about it, but never thought hard about it. Then Hiei's eyes got really wide.
"S...son?" He said. Every one looked at him, then to Kagome. She looked puzzled for a minute, but then did something unexpected. She laughed.
"No, he's not part of my abuse if that's what you were thinking. He's my adopted kitsune son. God, do you really think I would put up with it that much?" she said laughing. Kurama and Hiei paled a lot and Yusuke did get pale, because he realized what she was saying. But Kagome stopped laughing thinking about one night.
"He did try though. Lucky for me I punched him and he passed out." She said. Everyone looked at her. Kurama put a hand on her shoulder and she looked at him.
"It's ok." He said. She smiled and then did something even more unexpecting then laughing. She hugged him. Crying in his shoulder, she hugged him. He looked surprised, but comforted her.
"Thank you." She said. She stood up and put her hand on the tree. "Thank you, all of you, but I have to go. My friends will be worried about me." As if on cue a little group came into view.
"Kagomeeeeeee, are you here?" A voice yelled.
"Yea, over here. Hey you guys, wanna come over, at least meet my friends." Kagome said with a pleading pout on her face.
"Ok, but only for a minute." Yusuke said. Her friends came over and all hugged her.
"Um, guys, I feel ok, but if you don't let go of me I'm not gonna be able to breath." She said gasping.
"We were so worried about you Kagome." A girl said.
"I'm ok, are Sota and Shippo with you?" Kagome asked.
"SIS!" A boy said, a 7 year old with him.
"Momma! I was so worried about you!" Cried the little boy. Kagome picked him up and put him on her hip.
"I'm ok Shippo." She said and kissed him on his head. He looked up to his adopted momma and saw the cut.
"Momma, your head, its bleeding." He said gasping. She looked at him and smiled.
"So it is." She said whispering. The world started to go blurry and she heard screams. Last thing she saw was her little boy in the arms of a red head. Then she passed out.
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I hope its good. Please no flames though. Like I said earlier, this was really hard to type, so you don't think that I'm making fun of anybody. 5 pages and not a single song. WOW! And 3 of these pages I did in an hour ^_^ I knew exactly what I was going to write. Sorry about the cliffy, I'll update soon. Oh yea, and look out for silent nights. Some of you people wanted a INU/KAG ending so I'm gonna have an alternate ending so that you people that wanted a sess/kag fic got one and those of you that wanted a Inu/Kag fic will both get what they want ^_^ BYE BYE! (Vote now, the stares show how many votes (*) plz vote for all 3 people!!! The 3 already on here is from me!!!)
PS: vote for the pairings, Yusuke/Kieko belong to each other, so that's defenate!
Kag/Kur **** Kag/Hiei *** San/Mir * San/Hiei ** Inu/Boton *** Inu/Kik