Hey everyone thanks for the reviews.... and I liked that one from anonymous and proud to be one...LOL!! That was so hilarious...ok on to the story and Lady Emily, thank u for telling me about the separator things I totally forgot about those....and I haven't exactly got to read this over but my bff is bugging me so I must post it and here it is don't forget to tell me what u think!!!!!!
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Nancy and Jamie purchased their dresses for the ball for that night. They were so excited!
"Hey, Nancy do you think you can take my dress back to the room for me?"
"Sure, no problem. Why?"
"Well I told Brian I would meet him by the restaurant for lunch and I'm running sort of late and I don't want to keep him waiting."
"Say no more and hand over that dress." Nancy said giggling.
"Okay thanks Nancy you're the greatest!"
"Wait! Don't forget that we have dinner with the Hardy's before the ball."
"I won't don't worry. Bye!"
Jamie ran off towards the restaurant that was all the way on the other side of the boat. Nancy continued onto the room and went in. She carefully hung the dresses into the closet. She clicked the TV on and watched a movie called A Walk to Remember. She was in tears by the end. She looked at her picture of Ned. "Ned I wish you had came with me on this cruise it would have been wonderful to have you here with me and then the phone rang. Nancy quickly blew her nose on a tissue and wiped her tears away. She picked it up and listened. "Oh no! Are you absolutely positive that he was involved? The voice on the line "I'm positive we just caught him." "Okay I'll be right there."
Nancy hung up and grabbed her room key and left.
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The three Hardy's made their way to the bridge to find Captain Bangle to see if they could borrow the key to get into that room. He got up and opened a cabinet full of keys every room number had two spare keys on a hook except one.... and that one was Nancy and Jamie's old room. "Captain Bangle where is the other key?" Joe asked. "What do you mean?" "Well all of the hooks have two keys except that one." Oh yes, I don't know. We lost it some time ago. We never found it." "Luckily we have an extra." And he handed it to Frank. (A/N): They have keys for the guests already. These are spares and aren't used for the guests. It's for if the guest accidentally locks themselves out of their room or if the lose their first key. Just so there was no confusion about that.
They walked down the stairs and towards the girl's old room. Frank inserted the key and was about to open the door, when they heard thumps coming from the room. Like someone was searching the room for something! Frank quietly turned the key in the lock and slowly opened the door. They peeked in and to their complete and utter SURPRISE STOOD BRIAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
"What the-?" He kept searching the room and didn't notice because his back was to them. He was muttering to himself
"Where is it. That stupid bastard I can't believe he went after Jamie. That pathetic fool got himself caught. "I thought she had found the key to the room," he said.
"But no when he was running to keep from getting caught the bastard happened to find the key and put it back in its original spot prior to getting captured. I have to find that jewel before I get caught." Frank, Joe, and Fenton looked at each other and smirked.
They just got a full confession out of him without any demanding or forcing. 'This is a good day.' Fenton Hardy thought.
"AHA!!! I found it!" Brian pulled the white jewel out of a square hole in the wall. He pulled it out and held it high enough for the Hardy's to see. It was a milky white and it shined rainbow colors when held into the sunlight. He slid the panel back in place hiding the hole and stood up. He didn't have time to turn around. Joe tackled him to the ground making Brian drop the jewel. Fenton Hardy picked it up and said, "What should we do with him and this?"
"I'll call Bangle and Nancy." Frank put in the calls. Nancy was the first to arrive. "What happened? Are you sure it's him?" Brian sat on the bed in defeat. "We're sure Nancy that it is him." Joe said. "When captain Bangle gets here we will explain everything." Nancy sat down at the table.
"Jamie! What about Jamie? How do we tell her? Oh no..."
"What?" Frank asked. Nancy looked Brian in the eye.
"What were you planning to do with Jamie? Where IS SHE?" Joe and Frank looked at each other. Joe shook his head. "Nancy what are you talking about?"
"Jamie she was suppose to meet Brian for lunch. She left me at the boutique two hours ago. I haven't seen her since. She would have been back by now. Don't you think?" Brian laughed. "You really think I would hurt her? If you do then your crazy! She never made it to our lunch date. I waited, but she never came."
"LIAR! You know where she is. I know you do. Now tell us." Nancy accused.
Brian just laughed. Captain Bangle came in and assessed the situation. "Dad, Frank I'm going to go find Jamie you can fill Captain Bangle on what's going on." "I'm going too." Nancy stood up from her chair. "Okay then let's go" Joe and Nancy went on deck. "Now where should we look?" Nancy asked.
"There are a million different places to look. She could be anywhere." Joe complained. "Well then we'll just have to look let's start with the restaurant, see if anyone saw or heard anything." "Alright let's go!"
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Jamie groaned. The pounding in her head hurt like hell. Her feet and hands were tied with rope. A blindfold covered her eyes, while a gag was in her mouth. 'No use screaming' Jamie thought. 'How did I get here again? Oh yes now I remember someone hit me in the back of the head, but who?
It all started to flood back into her mind. 'Brian told me he wanted to tell me something. He led me into a narrow way, a narrow walkway between the buildings?' Jamie thought and shook her head. He opened a door to the left...and told me to go in. He was behind me! It was Brian he hit me in the back of the head, but why?' I thought he cared for me, hell I only knew him for two days...guess people aren't always what they seem even when they tell you to your face. How could I have been so gullible to believe him? I shouldn't have done that to Joe, it wasn't fair to him. I have to get out of here. I wonder how long I have been in here?'
Jamie's hands were tied in back of her. She sat up and leaned against the wall. 'I have to get this blindfold off, but first I have to move my hands in front of me,' she thought. She moved her arms under her until she was sitting on them and then under her legs. She looped her arms over her feet and it made it a lot more comfortable. Next her blindfold, she grabbed that and pulled it off, along with the gag.
"Okay," she said, "that's better." She couldn't see anything it was dark very very dark. She wasn't sure where she was and she was afraid. The ropes were cutting into her ankles and cutting off the circulation. Her hands were tied tight and they dug into her wrists. She reached down to untie her legs, but soon realized she wasn't going to get far. Now she knew why the rope was cutting into her. There was wire wrapped around her legs and the rope covered it. The rope she could get off, but the wire was another story. Her eyes became accustomed to the dark and she could see well. She was in some kind of old storage room or something.
The door!!! She scooted towards it and every time she moved to another spot it hurt. Her fingers were numb from the rope and wire. She reached it with one last push from her feet. She cried out and felt something wet on her sock. Blood. The wire had cut her. She sat against the door thinking. She could reach the knob, but the knob wouldn't turn. "Noooo!!! It's locked! Jamie was starting to panic. She couldn't get out.
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Nancy and Jamie purchased their dresses for the ball for that night. They were so excited!
"Hey, Nancy do you think you can take my dress back to the room for me?"
"Sure, no problem. Why?"
"Well I told Brian I would meet him by the restaurant for lunch and I'm running sort of late and I don't want to keep him waiting."
"Say no more and hand over that dress." Nancy said giggling.
"Okay thanks Nancy you're the greatest!"
"Wait! Don't forget that we have dinner with the Hardy's before the ball."
"I won't don't worry. Bye!"
Jamie ran off towards the restaurant that was all the way on the other side of the boat. Nancy continued onto the room and went in. She carefully hung the dresses into the closet. She clicked the TV on and watched a movie called A Walk to Remember. She was in tears by the end. She looked at her picture of Ned. "Ned I wish you had came with me on this cruise it would have been wonderful to have you here with me and then the phone rang. Nancy quickly blew her nose on a tissue and wiped her tears away. She picked it up and listened. "Oh no! Are you absolutely positive that he was involved? The voice on the line "I'm positive we just caught him." "Okay I'll be right there."
Nancy hung up and grabbed her room key and left.
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The three Hardy's made their way to the bridge to find Captain Bangle to see if they could borrow the key to get into that room. He got up and opened a cabinet full of keys every room number had two spare keys on a hook except one.... and that one was Nancy and Jamie's old room. "Captain Bangle where is the other key?" Joe asked. "What do you mean?" "Well all of the hooks have two keys except that one." Oh yes, I don't know. We lost it some time ago. We never found it." "Luckily we have an extra." And he handed it to Frank. (A/N): They have keys for the guests already. These are spares and aren't used for the guests. It's for if the guest accidentally locks themselves out of their room or if the lose their first key. Just so there was no confusion about that.
They walked down the stairs and towards the girl's old room. Frank inserted the key and was about to open the door, when they heard thumps coming from the room. Like someone was searching the room for something! Frank quietly turned the key in the lock and slowly opened the door. They peeked in and to their complete and utter SURPRISE STOOD BRIAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
"What the-?" He kept searching the room and didn't notice because his back was to them. He was muttering to himself
"Where is it. That stupid bastard I can't believe he went after Jamie. That pathetic fool got himself caught. "I thought she had found the key to the room," he said.
"But no when he was running to keep from getting caught the bastard happened to find the key and put it back in its original spot prior to getting captured. I have to find that jewel before I get caught." Frank, Joe, and Fenton looked at each other and smirked.
They just got a full confession out of him without any demanding or forcing. 'This is a good day.' Fenton Hardy thought.
"AHA!!! I found it!" Brian pulled the white jewel out of a square hole in the wall. He pulled it out and held it high enough for the Hardy's to see. It was a milky white and it shined rainbow colors when held into the sunlight. He slid the panel back in place hiding the hole and stood up. He didn't have time to turn around. Joe tackled him to the ground making Brian drop the jewel. Fenton Hardy picked it up and said, "What should we do with him and this?"
"I'll call Bangle and Nancy." Frank put in the calls. Nancy was the first to arrive. "What happened? Are you sure it's him?" Brian sat on the bed in defeat. "We're sure Nancy that it is him." Joe said. "When captain Bangle gets here we will explain everything." Nancy sat down at the table.
"Jamie! What about Jamie? How do we tell her? Oh no..."
"What?" Frank asked. Nancy looked Brian in the eye.
"What were you planning to do with Jamie? Where IS SHE?" Joe and Frank looked at each other. Joe shook his head. "Nancy what are you talking about?"
"Jamie she was suppose to meet Brian for lunch. She left me at the boutique two hours ago. I haven't seen her since. She would have been back by now. Don't you think?" Brian laughed. "You really think I would hurt her? If you do then your crazy! She never made it to our lunch date. I waited, but she never came."
"LIAR! You know where she is. I know you do. Now tell us." Nancy accused.
Brian just laughed. Captain Bangle came in and assessed the situation. "Dad, Frank I'm going to go find Jamie you can fill Captain Bangle on what's going on." "I'm going too." Nancy stood up from her chair. "Okay then let's go" Joe and Nancy went on deck. "Now where should we look?" Nancy asked.
"There are a million different places to look. She could be anywhere." Joe complained. "Well then we'll just have to look let's start with the restaurant, see if anyone saw or heard anything." "Alright let's go!"
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Jamie groaned. The pounding in her head hurt like hell. Her feet and hands were tied with rope. A blindfold covered her eyes, while a gag was in her mouth. 'No use screaming' Jamie thought. 'How did I get here again? Oh yes now I remember someone hit me in the back of the head, but who?
It all started to flood back into her mind. 'Brian told me he wanted to tell me something. He led me into a narrow way, a narrow walkway between the buildings?' Jamie thought and shook her head. He opened a door to the left...and told me to go in. He was behind me! It was Brian he hit me in the back of the head, but why?' I thought he cared for me, hell I only knew him for two days...guess people aren't always what they seem even when they tell you to your face. How could I have been so gullible to believe him? I shouldn't have done that to Joe, it wasn't fair to him. I have to get out of here. I wonder how long I have been in here?'
Jamie's hands were tied in back of her. She sat up and leaned against the wall. 'I have to get this blindfold off, but first I have to move my hands in front of me,' she thought. She moved her arms under her until she was sitting on them and then under her legs. She looped her arms over her feet and it made it a lot more comfortable. Next her blindfold, she grabbed that and pulled it off, along with the gag.
"Okay," she said, "that's better." She couldn't see anything it was dark very very dark. She wasn't sure where she was and she was afraid. The ropes were cutting into her ankles and cutting off the circulation. Her hands were tied tight and they dug into her wrists. She reached down to untie her legs, but soon realized she wasn't going to get far. Now she knew why the rope was cutting into her. There was wire wrapped around her legs and the rope covered it. The rope she could get off, but the wire was another story. Her eyes became accustomed to the dark and she could see well. She was in some kind of old storage room or something.
The door!!! She scooted towards it and every time she moved to another spot it hurt. Her fingers were numb from the rope and wire. She reached it with one last push from her feet. She cried out and felt something wet on her sock. Blood. The wire had cut her. She sat against the door thinking. She could reach the knob, but the knob wouldn't turn. "Noooo!!! It's locked! Jamie was starting to panic. She couldn't get out.
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oh great what is going to happen next!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! U'll see but this story is far from ending..........................review!!!!!! review!!!!!!! PLEASE REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!