To all your readers, I'm not good at writing, so don't kill me in your reviews if there are a lot of grammar mistakes. Enjoy!
I Said "Yes"
Chapter 1
"Stop being nervous, Alanna." Jon said as they entered Corus. "Besides, I'm the one that should be nervous, not you! I have the responsibility to break the news to my parents." He paused. "Are you sure you didn't change your mind about wedding me? You were quite doubtful when you left Bloody Hawk!"
"Quite positive." Alanna said firmly. To reassure Jon, she leaned over to kiss him. He returned the kiss. "Let's move on!" Alanna whispered after breaking her passionate kiss.
After awhile of silence, Jon said, "What if my parents said no? What if they betrothed me during to another during the time left?"
"You are nervous than me!" Alanna punched Jon as the horses stopped. They were now inside the palace. They dismounted as the King and Queen of Tortall step out to greet them.
"Better find a time to get this over with!" Jon whispered and left Alanna alone with Sir Myles (sorry, I can't remember how to spell his name!), his new adopted father.
"I look forward to your wedding…if Their Majesty allows it!" he said.
"Thanks." Alanna mumbled with out taking her eyes off Jon's fading figure. Will this be another happy ending fairytales or will is have a tragic ending? Alanna had no idea. For now, she headed for the stairs to have a bath before anyone can visit her. After all, she had been gone for a long time!
There is your first chapter. Your reviews will tell me if I should go on writing more. Please, give me reviews. It would make my life much happier than right now…lol.
Thanks,
Sorceress Shadow Rain