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Love Hina: Perverted Edition
Chapter eight
Suzaki's plan (The Final Chapter)
Suzaki was in Su's secret laboratory thinking over his secret plan.
Hmm. . . things are starting to look up. This mind control device is working good so far. I had gotten Naru to turn Motoko into a pervert because I she would have been trouble. It seems the mind control was broken by Su and her Mr. Virtual device and Amara (adult Kaolla Su) and her raging hormones are causing me to get some unwanted attention. I had wanted to set up my device to control Naru and have some fun with her but it seems Kanako screwed that up. It took control of her mind instead and made her want to have sex with me. It doesn't matter. I forgot to set the timer for the right time so when I changed back into Kaolla Su, it took control of their minds and continued what I started. Ha ha ha ha. . . If I could only witness them two in the act. That would be funny but anyway my plan is to get control of all of their minds and I will be victorious. Ha ha ha ha. . .
Meanwhile, Kanako returned with Kaolla Su and everyone was worried because Kanako hadn't come back last night.
"Where the hell have you been? We have been worried sick." Kitsune said.
"I don't know what happen. One moment I was looking in a clothing shop and the next thing I remember. I am in a hotel room with Kaolla Su and we were both naked. I don't know how that happened." Kanako replied.
"Well Su is there something you want to tell us?" Motoko asked wondering if there was something that she hadn't told anyone about.
"Look everyone there is something that you all need to know so Motoko get everyone into the common room and I will say my piece." Su said.
They all assemble in the common room and Su starts to speak.
"My people have a special gift that allows one to turn into an adult girl but occasionally they can also turn into an adult male." Su said.
"A what?" Everyone says.
"How the hell is that possible?" Kitsune asked obviously shocked at what Su just said.
"It seems that sometimes they can be good people but can also be quite evil as well. I am not sure but one of them might be bad and could cause trouble for any of us. I noticed some things that have happened when I felt that I couldn't control myself as some force . There is a traitor among us working for this adult version of myself." Su said.
"A traitor? Which one of us could it be?" They all asked.
"I am not sure at the moment but I am guessing that it started happening before we had Kanako and Keitaro become our managers so it couldn't be them. I am surely not involved because the adult versions are usually not like the younger self so I am innocent. The rest of you are suspects but don't worry. I will find out who it is." Su said.
Damn they are starting to figure it out and Motoko has broken free of the mind control. Susaki is gong to have my ass for this. I am sure of it. I better be careful so I don't get exposed or I will surely regret it. Naru thought to herself.
"I am something to say as well. When I first met Keitaro I did some perverted things to him but when I was doing them I felt like something had taken over my mind and body and I could only watch as it all unfolded. I want everyone to know that it wasn't my fault that I did all those things and I tried my best to stop myself from doing anything of that nature." Motoko said.
"I know what you are talking about. I had the same happen to me as well. I watched as some unseen force controlled me to do things that I would never do if I was not coerced. I only know one thing. When I find out who was responsible I think we will have a problem deciding who gets to start the punishment." Kanako said.
"Well that is all for now. You can all go back to whatever it was that you were doing." Su said.
Naru went to her room but someone was waiting for her. Naru opened the door and saw a familiar figure and was going to run when it stopped her.
"Running will only make it worse for you. Come inside and close the door." The figure said.
When she closed the door, the person turned on the light revealing the identity of the person. It was Suzaki and by the looks of his face he was pissed.
"You fucked up Naru. You really screwed up this time. Do you know how much time went into my plans." Suzaki said.
"I'm sorry Suzaki." Naru said.
"Sorry doesn't cut it because of you I have to redo most of my strategy and they are starting to figure it out, aren't they." Suzaki said.
"Yeah but they don't. . ." Naru said before getting interrupted.
"Well how long do you think it will take before someone grows a brain and figures it out. What do you will think will happen to me and how about you? I think your life will become a living hell if you figure out that you were involved. How merciful do you think Kanako and Shinobu will be when they discover your secret. Don't forget about Motoko either because she has regained control of her mind and is now siding with the others." Suzaki said.
"It wasn't my fault that Motoko. . . "Naru said.
"You didn't do exactly what I said, did you? You didn't use the machine correctly. I couldn't do it because I couldn't get close but you could and I trusted you." Suzaki said.
"I have two sword masters and miss fists of steel closing in on us." Suzaki said still angry at Naru.
"How about Kanako. . . It was your fault that you had to involve Kanako." Suzaki said.
He punches her in the stomach and she falls to the ground.
"Don't question my authority again or I will not be as merciful as I have been right now." Suzaki said.
"I gave the powerful fists and the ability to run faster then you could before and what do you do? You go and question my authority and my plans. You are lucky I don't kill you now for that remark but I still need this stupid bitch so I can continue my plans. I will leave now but be warned if you screw me. I will screw you and there are worse things then death and I can do all of them." Suzaki said before leaving.
Naru just stood there in fear of what Suzaki said and wondering what to do now while Suzaki walked to Su's room. On the way to Su's room he bumped into a very drunk Kitsune.
"Well Keitaro. You sure have got a heck of a tan." Kitsune said not realizing it wasn't Keitaro.
This girl is drunk. Thank god or she would have alerted someone who can cause a problem and I don't need any more problems right now. Suzaki thought to himself.
"You know you sure have been working out. I guess you have been training with Shinobu, huh? I wonder where you train more? On the roof or in the bedroom? Ha ha ha. . . I am going to go now before I pass out so bye now." Kitsune said.
Kitsune stumbles into her bedroom and passes out on her bed.
"That was weird. I wonder how anyone can stay in this house and stay sane. Well on to Su's room before I lose MY sanity." Suzaki said.
MEANWHILE
Naru went into Kanako's room to speak with Kanako about the truth that she has been hiding for so long. She hopes that maybe Kanako will be more understanding then she has been in the past.
"Kanako." Naru said.
"Yes, Naru." Kanako replied.
"I have something to tell you that I have been hiding for a long time." Naru said.
She explains everything that has happen and the culprits behind everything that has happen.
"You bitch. Did you really think I would just forgive and forget for what you have done? You turned your best friend into a pervert and then you and Motoko attack my brother with your perverted acts and then then. . . "Kanako said.
"I know now what I did is wrong and I am trying to make it up to you. It seems that Kaolla Su has a male adult version. He calls himself Suzaki and has been the mastermind of everything that I had mentioned previously. He started to threaten me and I was afraid that he was going to do something drastic soon and that is why I came to you to tell you everything that I know. I don't know how we can defeat this menace and restore Su to her normal form once and for all. He is very strong and dangerous and he even frightens me with his power." Naru said.
"Don't worry for there is nothing that me and my friends can't handle and no crazy lunatic who changes from a girl who doesn't know the meaning of slow down and take your time into a man with no shame or morals will stop us." Kanako said.
"Well thanks for being so understanding so bye." Naru said.
"Yeah bye for now." Kanako said.
Naru was about to leave the room when Motoko barged in.
"What is it, Motoko?" Kanako asked.
Kitsune and Mutsumi have disappeared and I found this note.
"What does it say, Motoko?" Kanako asked again wondering what the hell was going on.
"It said that if you ever want to see them again meet me at the old annex building at six in the evening and make sure that everyone is there." Motoko said as she read the letter.
"Hmm. . . the old annex building. Does anyone know about this old annex building." Kanako asked anyone who may know anything about the building.
It was at that time that Haruka had entered the house and walked into the room where everyone had gathered.
"So you want to know the history of the old annex building huh? Well the annex building was rumored to be a magical place where couples who stayed in the building and made a confession of love would stay together forever. It was closed down some time ago because of the fear that the power of the annex building could be abused for political purposes or the power could be harnessed and used in the discretion of the person who possessed it. If anyone with evil intents had control of the power it would spell disaster for all of us." Haruka said while smoking a cigarette.
"Are you telling me that some unknown pervert or perverts had that power. . . oh if I find out who did this I will really let them have it. If Kaolla Su and Suzaki Su are one and the same he may use her vast knowledge of machines and her array of deadly weapons on us. We better be prepared for anything." Kanako said.
"Hey does anyone know the time because I was just wondering?" Haruka asked.
"Yeah it is only five fifty five PM. Oh shit we only have five minutes to get to the old annex building." Kanako said.
For reasons unknown they made it just in time for had they been late God only knows what Suzaki would have done to his prisoners.
"Ha ha I am glad to see you have made it this far but for you this story ends now." Suzaki said.
"Oh that is just so original. Next you are going to show us the prisoners that we will rescue and you will go on a never ending speech about your evil plans. Ooh I am so scared." Motoko said.
"Aah. Stop reading my mind you know it all bitch." Suzaki said.
"Don't call me a bitch. For it is you that is a bitch." Motoko replied.
"Can you please stop saying that?" Naru pleaded for them to stop.
"Why is something wrong?" Motoko asked.
"This makes no sense at all. It is been nothing more then a bunch of people doing perverted shit for no reason at all." Naru said.
"Look read the title of this story and the genre of this story.. Do you really thing it says look here for serious plot and story line? It is a bunch of pointless bullshit which happens to be funny evil and perverted. Of course it should have warned them of some stupidity in this story as well." Kanako said basically pissed that Naru still hasn't figured out common sense at this point.
"Wait a minute are you telling me that you are all acting?" Naru said.
"Are you telling me that this is the real Naru Narusewega in this story. No wonder you don't have any boyfriends or friends for that matter. Who would want to touch a pervert with a ten foot pole much less be their friend?" Motoko said.
Naru said nothing but was getting really pissed at this point.
"Yeah, I took lessons from Motoko so I can use a sword and make it look believable and I had to act tough and strong in this story but I wanted to be the clean one who got Keitaro in the end. My dream was Keitaro would become my boyfriend and we would do things together and eventually have mind blowing sex and that sort of thing." Shinobu said.
They all give her a confused look.
"What is the problem? You don't think that I know what to do with a man when alone with him behind closed doors? You people sure are naive to think otherwise." Shinobu said.
"Well do you really think that I will do such perverted things as I have done in this story. Of course, it really sickens me but my school really needed money and they paid well for my part so I swallowed my pride, my morals and my conscience and joined in." Motoko said.
"Yeah and as for me. . . If I had really hated you as much as I have shown you so far. I would have probably had killed you and buried you out back with the rest of the garbage and besides I would have worked for free in exchange for beating you senselessly all day and every day of the week." Kanako said.
"Are you saying that I am a piece of trash and I am considered stupid to you?" Naru asked.
"Naru, I think you have already answered my question." Kanako said.
Naru tries to punch Kanako in the face.
Ooh typical Naru behavior. If you are faced with facts just throw a punch and the problem will go away all on its own. Kanako thought to herself.
She grabs her punch and sends it back and it smacks her in the face.
"Hey you people down there. My master plan will not be ruined by the likes of you stupid meddling kids. By harnessing the power of the old annex building I will make you love each other in that special way." Suzaki said with an evil tone in his voice as he started the annex building up.
Unfortunately for some reason he selected the people to be paired up with the people they have come to love on their own so his plan was destined to fail. Oh and while they were getting intimate with each other it seemed that Naru and Kanako and Motoko were left unaffected.
"Huh? Why isn't it working on you three?" Suzaki said.
"Well, Naru is so stupid I really don't think she knows what love is since she must think violence and love are the same thing. As for me, I have no heart because only that kind of person could torture Naru like I like to do each day and enjoy it as much as I do." Kanako said with a smile.
"As for me, I hate men and wouldn't think of even breathing the same air as one unless I had a very very good reason for doing so like discounted rent or getting paid for my part in this sordid story." Motoko said.
Naru started to attack Kanako and she attacked back with punches and kicks.
"I know that when these two start to fight it is best to say as far away as possible or you will get swept in a tornado of punches and kicks. It goes so fast you will get your ass kicked before you even realized that you were even hit once." Motoko said.
"Do those two ever stop?" Suzaki said.
"It takes a while for them to stop. You will have to wait until they tire out and that takes a while?" Motoko said.
"How long is a while?" Suzaki asked.
"Well. . ." Motoko said.
TWO HOURS LATER
"Finally they finished kicking each other asses. So who won that fight?" Suzaki asked.
"I did like I always do." Kanako said.
"Hey you cheated!" Naru said.
"Do you know that in fighting that there are no rules. Why does everyone always insist that there are some sort of rule or rules that one must follow in a fight?" Kanako said.
"She is correct in stating that in the type of fight that just commenced there are no rules but a true and noble spirit follow some sort of rule or standard." Motoko said.
"Since Suzaki's machine failed to do anything but make an ass out of himself what do we do with Suzaki and Naru?" Kanako asked.
Kitsune and Mutsumi were let go and joined with the rest of the girls.
"I thought you accepted my apology?" Naru asked.
"I have the feeling that your word means very little so I thought that you needed an incentive to stay away from those perverted ways of yours." Kanako said.
"And what do you have in mind?" Motoko asked.
"Well. . ." Kanako said.
"As for Naru, I thought that she should see first hand what the victim of a pervert feels like so I tied her to a tree and blindfolded her and wrote a message on a sign next to her and make a few phone calls to the local perverts." Kanako said.
The scene changes to Naru tied to a tree and wearing a blindfold. The sign next to her said. . .
Kiss my lips. Feel my breasts. Fulfill my sick fantasies.
The sounds of a group of men known to be perverts started to come up to where Kanako told them to go to.
This plan will work for Naru will either stop being a pervert or go insane. Either way, it is a win-win situation for me. Kanako said.
"What about Suzaki?" Motoko asked.
"Well, for him we will hang him from a tree and play a game of T-ball with these metal bats." Kanako said.
"I don't see a ball. How do you play base ball without a ball?" Kitsune asked.
"Oh the ball is right there." Kanako said while pointed a finger at Suzaki.
"Oh, I get it. We basically just the beat the shit out of him. . . sounds like fun." Kitsune said with a smile on her face.
FUN? FUN? These girls are insane and I had to be stuck with them. They seem to enjoy this way too much for me. Suzaki thought to himself.
They each take turns hitting the "ball" and the sounds of screams could be heard for quite some distance and now it was Mutsumi's turn.
"Oh my! You are supposed to hit the "ball" like this." Mutsumi said.
She took her metal bat and was prepared to strike the ball.
"NO! She is gonna to hit my. ." Suzaki said before being hit in the groin with a metal bat.
The scream could be heard for miles around. It was at that moment that Suzaki turned back into Kaolla Su.
"Um. . . why am I hanging from this tree and why are Shinobu and Keitaro not wearing any clothes?" Su asked.
"Because we are having mind blowing sex, Su." Keitaro said.
"Hey can I join in too?" Su said.
"SU!" They all yelled.
"WHAT?" Su replies with a yell.
"Hey it worked. It seems that we beat the pervert Suzaki right out of her. Well, lets untie Su and go home. I have had enough of the perverted bullshit for one day." Kanako said.
"Yeah, I have a bottle of sake calling my name." Kitsune said.
"Hey, after we get drunk don't you want to start round two?" Mutsumi asked.
"Oh yeah, and this time it will be you that passes out from the mind blowing. . ." Kitsune said before getting interrupted.
"KITSUNE!" Everyone else but Mutsumi yelled.
"WHAT?" Kitsune replied.
"I have to continue my training so Keitaro I need you to meet me on the roof and be my training dummy since this little fantasy tale is over." Motoko said.
"And what if I refuse?" Keitaro asked.
"In that case, I will beat you into submission and then use you as a training dummy." Motoko said.
"I will be there soon." Keitaro said.
"Oh one more thing, please put some clothes on before coming up." Motoko said.
"Yeah no problem." Keitaro replied.
"Hey Keitaro." Shinobu said.
"Yes Shinobu." Keitaro replied.
"Come to my room after your session with Motoko and we can have some, you know, intimate time.""Shinobu said.
"Oh yeah. I will be there as soon as I can." Keitaro said knowing what Shinobu wanted.
"And when you are done with her don't forget about me too. I want some of what Shinobu is having." Kanako said.
I wonder if I can handle two women on the same day. I hope so for my sake. Keitaro thought to himself as they all walked home.
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