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pyro the dark angel: wait! this is the last chapter:D Thanx for reviewing again, I'm glad you liked it.
Raya the angelalchemist: Here's the last chapter. thanx for reviewing.
Riku00: why the odd laughter?
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Satoshi's P.O.V.
"Yes, father," I said into the phone, "the...situation...has ended. I need not to be moved again." My father had called that morning, wondering if I needed to be moved to another school because of my "condition." But after meeting Teil, I didn't really want to leave, even if Krad had still been with me.
It's been a while now, I don't know how long, but long enough that the school let us have two month's vacation. It was warm outside, and many of my classmates had gone out of town. It was very quiet.
As soon as I hung up, the phone rang again.
"Hello?"
"Sato-kun? It's Teil."
"Oh, hello, Teil-chan. What is it?"
"I was wondering..." she paused, "Maybe we could go to the park. There's something I need to talk to you about."
"All right. What time?"
"About lunch. Is that okay?"
"Yes. I'll see you then."
As always, my conversations on the phone with Teil had gotten short over the past few weeks. I hoped everything would work out after lunch today.
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We stopped for some taiyaki before Teil would talk. As she sat down beside me on a bench in the neighborhood park, she asked, "Do you know what today is?"
I shook my head. I'd gotten very behind in knowing things as my time here lengthened.
"It's been one month since the incident. Since the angel went to meet his opposite." Teil took a bite and swallowed before saying, "I'd have been very sad if you'd committed suicide, Sato-kun. I would have had to follow you." She sighed and looked at me. "There's nothing here for me to live for. Nothing...except you."
I shook my head again, but not out of ignorance. "You do know that Dark and Krad will come back."
She nodded and smiled. "I think they really do like each other, save their differences. I hope they work something out while they're together." Then Teil looked me full in the face. "We have GOT to find a way of co-existence. or else this will go on forever."
I was surprised. She had an optimism like Daisuke's. She was wonderful... And now it was safe. "Teil-chan, I think...I KNOW...I love you."
She smiled and then laughed. Before she could throw her arms around me, I kissed her on the lips. It was...indescribable. I
let Teil throw her arms around me, and I promptly fell onto the seat of the bench, with her on top of me.
The taiyaki were forgotten, having fallen to the ground. I couldn't help smiling as the kiss lingered on my lips. But Krad
had beaten me to it.
Krad had stolen the first kiss.
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And that's the end! I hope you all enjoyed it, even though the chapters were so short and all that. I apologize!
Hope you come back for others. And thank you for all the reviews you all gave me. They really helped me try to make this
story the best it could be, just for you! 'Bye and hope to read reviews from you soon:D :D :D
for those of you who don't know what "taiyaki" is, it's a fish-shaped pastry filled with bean paste. :D
Pigeon in the Sky (a.k.a. Russianblader)
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I really want to thank all of you that reviewed (even though there were only a few, but that's the most I've ever gotten on a fan fic). I'm so happy that I actually got reviewed!
thanx especially to Shimmering Solitude, because of you I went back and tried to add more "depth" (I really did), but for some reason, it never seems to work out the way I want it to. Thanx anyway. :D
pyro the dark angel (a.k.a. Princess of The Shadow Land), thanx for sticking with me until the end. (and I hope you did read this last chapter)
for Three Letter Word, who was my first flame (and probably not my last). I don't care if it should have died, I took care of it when it was in the hospital (and doused it when it was on fire, too).
Raya the angelalchemist who gave me the simple "update soon" review. Gave me the incentive to push myself. :)
Thanx so much for reading!
P.S. If any new readers are reading this, feel free to leave a review, even though the story is over. If I get enough
reviews, I'll come back and post an extra chapter just for the responses to those reviews. Thanx in advance.