I have no idea what to write for a sequel! I'm totally blank minded. The next D.N.Angel manga has not come out where I live yet. So, I'm really lost. I have no idea what to make happen. But here's what I'd like you to include in your suggestions.
1. It's another SatoshixTeil fan fiction. So I'd like them to, you know, be together. It would be interesting to put in a love triangle, though, if that's what you have in mind.
2. I don't want to story to be just totally random. If you've read the manga, then I'd like it to follow or occur after/during the manga. If you haven't read the manga, then give me an idea. I'll be really greatful anyway. :D
3. Remember that Dark and Krad are gone now. It's just them mortals. Ah ha ha!
Here's a little something just for you all. Kind of like something to build your ideas off of.
P.S. I hope you all don't mind swearing, because I wanted to turn this up a bit. The other one was too...well...laid back, I guess. Eh...
But first...
review responses
Secret: I'm glad you thought it was cool. That's really great. T.T You've made me cry tears of happiness. Enjoy!
Raya the angelalchemist: Here's the extra chapter. That's cool. "Off the chain." :D
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Satoshi's P.O.V.
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I lay in bed, my blue hair in my eyes. Teil slept next to me. I smiled as I looked at her. Her own blue hair was long and smelled of honey. I looked at the back of her right shoulder and saw the scar there. The scar from the bullet wound. It caused me a pang of guilt as I remembered how it had gotten there. I couldn't protect her from that deranged girl. I can't protect her from anything. It was only a few days ago that we ran into more trouble.
We'd been meeting at a nearby park. Unfortunately, things in our neighborhood had been upset by random gang fights. Yes, gang
fights. I don't know where it started, but I think Teil will be able to tell you. She's lived here longer than I have.
Anyhow, there are more active gangs now than ever before, according to her, and we had to be careful, even after all the
fights we'd been in with Dark and Krad. These fights were different. Power had no effect on anyone. You had to have guns,
fists, weapons of any kind. It was unfortunate for us that a gang fight broke out when we were at the park.
I first noticed several boys about my age, who were gathering on the far side of the park. Then the other gang turned up, all of them holding either a metal pipe or a gun. The first gang had knives. This was going to get ugly. Teil noticed the boys as well and stood up.
"I think we should leave." She said. I agreed, and the both of us started to exit the park. That was when one of the boys came over and grabbed Teil by the arm.
"Hey, babe, where ya goin'?"
Teil responded by kicking him in the groin. "Hands off. I'm taken." She backed away from the boy when he took up a fighting stance.
"Oh, you're a feisty bitch. I like 'em feisty." He struck out at her and missed.
"I think that's enough." I punched him in the forehead and knocked him out. But he was only the beginning of our troubles.
He was a gang leader.
The others soon had us surrounded, two of them carrying their boss away. "You'll pay for that, you bastard." said one, who
looked older than me. He flicked open a knife and started forward slowly. "We're all loyal to our boss, no doubt about that.
So when our boss gets hurt, we're all hurt. See?" He made a swipe at me with the knife and caught me on the arm. "We all
suffer."
I heard Teil cry out, and I looked around. Some of the other boys were groping at her. But I also saw her punch two of them out and kick another in the groin. I smirked; it was her favorite move. Then one of them kicked her, and I snapped. "You sons of bitches!" I ran at them and punched every one that came at me. I didn't swear often, so Teil would know that I was angry. Really angry.
The boy with the knife caught up to me then, slicing my arm open. I cried out in pain, before knocking the knife out of his hand. He growled and kicked me in the stomach. Or it could have been the chest, because I heard something crack. I kicked back and knocked the wind out of him. I was on the verge of blacking out when I heard Teil's voice. "Sato!"
Then all I knew was darkness.
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Well, let's see how you do with that. This should be interesting. Mwa ha ha!
Review, and give me your ideas. Review! And then we'll see what happens.
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