Heeey……haven't updated in TWO years…..yeah I'm confused about my own story …..I'm not exactly sure what it's even about anymore….umm…..have fun

Yeah um disclaimer or whatever it is……the little note parts in the parenthesis are my comments

(oh yeah and on the last one I meant to put chpt 2 instead of chpt 4)

starts in like ….no POV just normal story mode (I don't know what you call it)

The King of Makai Chapter 3 Yukina

"Okay, let's go Keiko," the King said gently.

Yusuke lead her through great halls and vast rooms filled with chandeliers and other eccentric items. Keiko had never seen any of these things before…they astonished her. Each small item was incredibly detailed…down to every diamond and crystal and piece of gold.

Finally, they came to a door: it was delicately decorated with flowers and vines of gold. Yusuke, seeing her obviously amazed expression said, "It's not real gold you know."

She snapped quickly out of her trance. "What? Not real gold? What do you mean?"

Yusuke laughed and said, "It's just iron painted over with gold paint. We did to save money." (note: isn't that such an Asian thing to do! Haha!)

"But you're a king! You don't need to save money!"

"Everyone needs to save money. Every piece of gold we spend is Makai's. Why waste it on a door?" Yusuke grinned. "It was Yukina's request. She's a sweet girl. We even told her that she could have it gold if she wanted. She said she felt too special though."

"Oh." Keiko took a deep breath while he opened the door. She was dead nervous. She felt her hands freeze up and her knees start shaking. She stepped slowly into the brightly lit room. There was a petite woman sitting on the bed. She had gorgeous blue-green locks of hair that framed her face perfectly. Her eyes matched Hiei's exactly. Yukina looked up and smiled at Keiko. She stood and approached Keiko and Keiko bowed low to the floor.

Yukina blushed and said "Oh there's no need to do that. From now on, we'll be like sisters Keiko!"

Keiko looked up. She pushed out a smile through her pure shock. Yusuke smirked and said "I'll leave you two alone." As he was leaving the room, he turned around and locked eyes with Keiko. She blushed and turned her face away to the floor. Knowing her face was out of view from him, she smiled secretly, forgetting that Yukina was there. Yusuke, realizing that he was staring at her for a while, quickly walked out of the door.

After a few seconds of silence, Yukina said, "Do you love him?"

Once again, Keiko snapped back to reality. She stuttered, "I – I don't know." Yukina smiled warmly.

"I'll show you around." Yukina lead her to her room and Keiko felt more at home than she ever had. (note: was that a grammar mistake?)

Yusuke's POV

Why did I stare at her like that? What am I doing? I have other things to do. I need to take care of those lower city demons. They have created some kind of mob. I heard from one of my spies that they are planning an attack on the castle because they don't agree with a human in rule (note: I forgot if he's human or not? Is he?…wow I don't remember anything….two years really does something to you).

"HELLO! Yusuke! Snap out of it! What's your problem!"

I felt a sharp pain in the back of my head. I looked around. Kuwabara had just smacked me over the head with his hand. I yelled, "What the hell do you think you're doing?"

"You were practically asleep while standing up!"

"I was thinking!"

"Since when do you think!"

I could feel the anger rising up into my fist. My eyebrow twitched and somehow I managed to grumble out, "Since I had a brain you idiot. Unlike a certain someone," before I knocked him out of his senses. He stood up with his mouth bleeding. He looked at me, surprised.

"What? You surprised I can hit so hard?" I huffed.

"Nah…just never seen you so serious about it before." He rubbed his cheek and shrugged. "Guess I'll talk to ya later." I watched him walk away down the long corridor until he disappeared into the dark. What the hell did I just do? Maybe I hit him a little too hard. Oh well…he'll get over it. My mind suddenly flashed back to Keiko. She had gorgeous chocolate brown eyes (note: have I said that previously?). Her face was perfectly shaped….

Whoa. I shook my head. It must be the heat. It's gotta be over 100 degrees now. I'll go talk to Kurama about the rebellion in the lower demons. He'll know what to do.

Keiko's POV

Yusuke was right. Yukina was a sweet girl. I'm glad to serve her. No matter how much I tried to focus on suiting her needs…my mind was completely stubborn on thinking about Yusuke. That moment when we locked eyes…it felt as if it was a lifetime. I melted in his eyes…

"We should go help the servants prepare dinner."

I followed Yukina. Kuwabara was in the kitchen with a packet of ice on his cheek. On his jaw was a giant black and blue bruise. Yukina ran to him and laughed. "Oh Kuwabara! Did you get in a fight again? Maybe next time you shouldn't loser your temper."

"I'm sorry Yukina," he cried out in a whining tone. He sounded like a child with his mother. He also shed a tear or two. I was trying my best to keep from cracking up laughing. It was so obvious that he was trying to get her to kiss him. I would be surprised if Yukina had not noticed what he was trying to do. She smiled softly at him and kissed him where the bruise was. When she pulled back, he grabbed her gently and kissed her. It made me smile at how sweet the whole thing was. It made me long for something like that…

"Dinner is served," cried the servant.

wow its hard to do this…..how did I do it two years ago? Anyways enjoy I hope you like it! Please review