Hello! I have decided to make an fanfic that I really hope will work! Ohh…I don't know how to take spell checks… this fic is whit the parings: Max x Mariam x Ozuma and Kai x OC So…I don't own beyblade but I own my OC…bring out the music! (Kai is 20 and the OC, Max and Mariam is 19)
OC:
Name: Narina
Last name: Kiromi
Age: 19
Eyes: night Bleu
Hair: red long hair white bleu stripes in. it's sat up in an ponytail
Bitbast: Zakono
Beyblade: Zakono GT
Bitbast looks: a black wolf, a wolf whit the power of fire…
Launcher: an night blue custom grip (hey! The color matches her eyes! . )
Ripcord: an dark green 50 cm long ripcord
Chapter1: no one knows what it's like
Max glared on Mariam when she walked into the train "I cant believe their going!" Tyson said when the door was locked "no…it's hard to believe…" Ray said and looked on the train. They heard man saying "where leaving please take on your belts"
Max was glaring on the place the train had been "their gone…forever…" Max said. Max, Ray and Tyson went to tyson's dojo agene
"now…so, what are we going to do now?" Tyson asked and dropped down in the sofa "we are going to beyblade practice." Kai said leaning to the wall "now?" Ray asked "yes…now…common!" Kai grinned and went to the back garden followed by Ray Max and Tyson
"Go Driger!"
"Go Draciel!" Max and Ray launched their blades. Max cod still not believe that Mariam, Ozuma and the rest had leaved and he was never going to see them agene.
"Driger!" Ray cried and Driger knocked Draciel easy out of the dish "Max, something wrong?" Ray asked "no…" Max grinned and taked Draciel "ohh…anyways…I'm leaving to China tomorrow you know…" Ray said "and I'm leaving to USA…yeah…Bladebreakers are really going to be splitted this time…" Max said "yes…but, I'll miss u guys…" Tyson said "hrrmf…yeah…I'm leaving to…" Kai suddenly said "yeah…we know" Tyson grinned
The time flew away and the bladebreakers was now sleeping…well, some of them…
Max P.O.V.
It's like I can hear their voice…and Ozuma saying good bye to us, Joseph takes Ray's hand and says "good bye, Ray…takes for the bey-battles" and Dunga who just left an bye to everyone. And then Mariam, who looked on me and said bye from ca. 4 meters away…it's horrible…and now mine turn…
End Max P.O.V
Max fall to sleep and woke up next day when he heard a bird hacking on his window "urrgh…" Max grinned and taked on some clothes. He had packed his things yesterday "hmm…" Max said when he saw an picture laying on the floor beside his bag. It was an picture of bladebreakers and Saint Shields "bye, bye…" Max said to himself and taked the pic into his bag
"so…Max sleept well?" Ray asked. They was sitting in the kitchen. They was going to take the bus to the airport together. Kai was leaving next day
"good…and you?" Max asked "super…" Ray said and left into the living room to get his bag. Max did the same and they Went out and waited for the bus
"where are you going?" The bus driver asked Max and Ray "the airport…" they said and sat down in some seats
hello! I'm finish! What do u think to short? To many wrong words?
I'll write more later…the next chapter will be in Mariams world. So please review! I DON'T OWN BEYBLADE U KNOW