Here is a rewrite of Chappy 2. I really didn't like the first one.
"Your sister?" Kagome said puzzled.
Inu Yasha sifted Kazumi's weight and nodded.
"Why didn't you tell us you had a sister?" Sango asked as she entered the living room. Kagome closed the door and walked over to Inu Yasha. She stared at Kazumi, who leaned up towards her, sniffed and ended up sneezing on Kagome.
"Sorry 'bout that Kag." Inu Yasha apologized. "And to answer your question Sango I wasn't sure how you guys would react."
"What do you mean?" Kagome asked as she wiped her face. Kazumi struggled weakly to be put down.
"Fine 'Zumi, and don't you go and bite any of them." Inu Yasha said sternly and Kazumi rolled her eyes at him. "I mean is that I wasn't sure who you guys would take it if I suddenly said one day 'Yeah my sister is living with me and she thinks she's a dog.'"
Going to scratch her ear Kazumi couldn't keep her balance and fell over. Miroku laughed at the sight and Kagome could've sworn that Kazumi whimpered.
"Miroku that wasn't nice." Kagome said and hit him hard leaving Miroku rubbing his jaw. Sango laughed at him.
"You deserved that boy." She laughed.
"Hey girl. What's wrong not feeling well?" Kagome gently asked Kazumi who was glaring at her. Kagome knelt by her and gently rubbed behind one ear. Giving over to Kagome's gentle caresses Kazumi stopped growling low in her throat and closed her eyes. "Now your gunna tell us everything." She told Inu Yasha. Sighing he led everyone to the living room, leaving Kazumi to sleep in the hall.
"Ok, well you all know that I'm part inu-youkai right?" He started, everyone nodded. "Well when I was a kid my mom left my dad for reasons I don't know, well dad wasn't the greatest person umm, youkai, in the world and neither was my older brother so when I got a little older I left home, leaving Kazumi behind, but I didn't think anything would happen to her because dad had been treating her like a little goddess. Well I paid a visit home last month and I found out that because I left dad and Sesshoumaru went ballistic and treated her like the inu-hanyou she is, and in that sense I mean that treated her like a dog literally." Inu Yasha looked over at his peacefully sleeping sister, her hands were crossed and she was resting her chin on them while her legs where stretched out behind her. "Well I went um…a little crazy to say the least and totally kicked the crap outta both of them then I brought her here and I've been trying to get her to act like a person but so far nothing." He finished. He waited to hear what his friends had to say, hoping for a best but expecting the worst.
"That's awful. I couldn't imagine what is must've been like for her." Sango whispered, close to tears. "I'm glad that you saved her but the damage was already done."
"I know I feel bad about it." He muttered to himself. Kazumi had awoken and slowly crept into the room. Her eyes were still cloudy with a slight fever but she seemed to be getting a little better. She pawed her way carefully over to her brother and laid her head in his lap.
"Look she's telling you it's not your fault." Kagome said. "And with our help she'll soon be the girl you remember." And with that everyone agreed.
"Well 'Zumi looks like you made some friends." Inu Yasha said, Kazumi just snorted.
Kagome got to her feet. "Well there is no time like the present to get started. First I think that she needs to learn how to walk. What do you guys think?" She asked.
"I think so." Miroku said, heading towards the girl. Kazumi growled at him and bared her teeth. "Look I'm really sorry for laughing at you." Miroku apologized, Kazumi snapped at him. "Ok, ok I won't go near you until you forgive me." He promised and backed up. Suddenly the phone rang.
"Hello, Inu Yasha speaking." He said as he answered the phone. "Yes their here, what was that? Ok one moment please." He said and motioned for Kagome to come over. "It's your mother."
"Hello mother." She said. "Umm…well the party has been moved here and well we're spending the night." Inu Yasha's eyes went wide, Kagome shook her head. "Yes we'll be home later tomorrow. Bye mom." She finished and hung-up. "Sorry about that but it was either that or we all go back to my place for a lecture."
"Fine but where are we all gunna sleep?" He asked. Kazumi's ears flicked and she stomped off down the hall. Everyone followed her and saw she was lying in the middle of Inu Yasha's bed glaring at everyone.
"Well I guess that we all sleep in the living room." Sango laughed and headed out followed by the gang.
Well tell me what you think. Suggestions are always welcomed.